Naruto: Shinobi SI

LV 4

KK9494

Please review, comment and send stones. Try do so in a encouraging way, I can’t handle negative bashing. I am a new author ✍️.

1yr 5

ดู 6 การตอบกลับ

LV 14

Sphnqs

lost interest bc the author forced him to join root

1mth 4

LV 12

MrVenerable

I read chapter 1 to 19. Everything almost perfect but the MC is a bit immature and emotional unstable I hope there would be a great disaster will happen so the MC would become more mature and become a great Ninja, because for what I see the MC is just ranting, complaining and not doing anything that will help or relief him from his problem.

7mth 3

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LV 1

Rafael_Suassuna

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

5mth 2

LV 1

Jordi_Hardiansyah

Walaupun bahasanya buruk,alur ceritanya lumayan bagus.semangat ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

6mth 2

LV 1

Zenaxs

Thank you author, it was an interesting adventure, I hope you can please us again. What inspires me most in your work is the world design; it’s truly something well-developed and living its own life. Good luck.

1yr 2

LV 14

1stDrunkenImmortal

👍.

1yr 2

LV 2

isabel_andrade

It's in the top 5 favorite fafics. Very well written in worldbuilding, character, level of strength, politics, time connection, interpersonal relationships and much more. Please keep up the great work.💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕🫣💕💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️

2mth 1

LV 3

caiovitorms

One of the best Naruto fanfics! I really like the character development and world design! The AI Power is good but not OP, and the interpretation of Danzo, Hiruzen, Anbu and root is unique. The MC is very original too, i like him

4mth 1

LV 15

Granville4554

writing is pretty good. there's some mistakes here and there but it's not enough to give you an aneurysm lol. the story is going in a nice development and it fits in really well with the World design and I like the way the author has designed their own version of the pre-canon plot. but I'll be honest, for the character development I am slightly disappointed in how the mc was basically forced to join Root. don't get me wrong I totally understand the why since even though he was a prodigy and starting to gain momentum in power (political, financial, and actual strength) as well as he was being supported by the Hiruzen and his eldest son as much as they could given their positions, but at the end of the day mc was on his own with no clan to back him up so when Danzo came calling he had no choice but to answer. I was just sad to see him forced to grow up from that naive little dreamer into a killer of the Ninja World like how he was trying not to be. but at least he's still fighting back in his own little rebellious ways so that's good. finally updating speed. I just got caught up so I can't determine that but so far it seems to be more than once a week so that's good for me lol

6mth 1

LV 4

Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

7mth 1

LV 4

behind_your_sister

one of the best NARUTO fanfic

7mth 1

LV 1

Jordi_Hardiansyah

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9mth 1

LV 1

Pazexe

Esssssssss muyyyyyyyyyyy buenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa laaaa historiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ......................................... 😊😊😊😊👍👍😉😉😉😊😊😊🤗🤗

11mth 1

LV 1

pingvinchik

Lol I'm Spiderman Pieter Parker xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx

1yr 1

LV 1

Azshar

It’s too early to say anything, but I really liked the beginning. I will continue to follow the development of the plot. If the pace and style of the narrative does not change, it will be one of the best works on Naruto.

1yr 1

LV 4

EANID

great story so far really enjoying it . hopefully the author keeps updating. one suggestion from is that sometimes when new scene starts, it's hard to tell from the beginning because there is no dividing line or smth.so it's little confusing. other than that story is great

26d

LV 1

Jose_Escobar_0585

Me gusta la historia y el reciente cambio en la escritura por eso le doy está clasificación y solamente espero que las fechas de actualización sean estables para que de verdad alcance todo el potencial que veo puede tener

26d