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what made "Tokyo video game tycoon" was that his competition had competency, so far, it's absent here.
hope u don't stop this and focus on other projects. I really liked this and been waiting for an update
this is like a 80% plagiarized story dont bother reading its a total rip off of another chinese novel like almost down to every detail author says it will branch out more later but im doubtful
Hey Author San, i know you've been focusing on your other works but please don't forget this great novel too hihi. 😘 It's a shame for Kishin not to let gamers experience how a LS makes life great.
For those of you who are missing a video game fanfic, I recommend this one, the only downside is that it still has few chapters. Creating games in the future
Very nice history. Le personnage de Shin est super et l'évolution de Kishin est super bien faite merci de continuer à écrire
Please continue Thais story.................................................................................................................................
Amazing story I hope this will continue to receive some love from the readers and author.
Solo tengo cosas, buenas que decir... Me encanta la temática Buen desarrollo Personaje interesante Si acaso la parte de la herencia se está estancando un poco y la esposa del protagonista ha ido desapareciendo pero en general bien
Please continue this story *)[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I binge the whole story in three days. about 400 chapters, and I can say for certain that this is one of my favorite rags to riches fic, the fact that the writing is immersing and engaging. nothing is boring, and while I'd love to have a more depth or quantity of chapters regarding the impact of specific games/technologies, I could understand that you'd want to have a faster pace.
Dark souls? ☝️🤓 ......................................................................................................................................
5 stars because I like how instead of just reading, you started writing[img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend]
I don't know what to say, this story is great in all aspects. It's the perfect balance between progress and detail. The pace is great and the characters are as fleshed out as they could be considering this story is more focused on video games and Kishin.
A good story must be 5 stars[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
love! love! love! hope this continues for a very long time. I actually learnt stuff about video game from this that when I came across a video on yt about the history of video game and guess stuff base on the novel I actually got it right, I felt so semi included in the conversation my older brothers were having😭😭😂😂
so many info dump and no mc progress low character/story development so pls author almost chapter that i read are about the experience of the costumer
Binged around 150 Chaps all night before stopping. It was very good at first but then the plot becomes repetitive and the pacing became too fast which robbed that good experience I felt in the early chaps.If I have if honest I truly enjoyed the so called 'filler' slife of life chapters you stopped making after a certain point, its gives depth to the character and could have been another plot point to avoid the repetitiveness of the business side. Like you could have explored Mira's life in college and how her relationship with the mc impacted her life there. The reactions of the classmates? How did the treatment of her change when he donated a sum of money to the school? Perhaps you can have some male student attempt to 'flirt' her and how she rejects it and then follwed by the mc showing him that she is his. There is a lot of aspects in his relationship with not only with Mira but also her parents, her sister, his sisters, and etc. There's a lot of plotpoint that could have been explored. These things had a lot of potential that would give depth to your characters. Making them more relatable and easy to sympathize with. But we barely get any of it and then at certain point completely stopped it.There also the problem where you repeatedly told a scene instead of showing it. Like they said "Show not Tell". You did it right with the buying of the marriage ring. You showed us, instead of just saying "He bought an elegant ring" and leave it at that.I believe it was a bad move when you stopped making the so called 'filler' slice-of-slife chaps after the marriage chapter. Those where the things that I enjoyed and helped avoid the reptitiveness of the business side. So much potential but was not explored.Hope this helps you improve author. I geniunely enjoyed reading this book.
what made "Tokyo video game tycoon" was that his competition had competency, so far, it's absent here.
hope u don't stop this and focus on other projects. I really liked this and been waiting for an update
this is like a 80% plagiarized story dont bother reading its a total rip off of another chinese novel like almost down to every detail author says it will branch out more later but im doubtful
Hey Author San, i know you've been focusing on your other works but please don't forget this great novel too hihi. 😘 It's a shame for Kishin not to let gamers experience how a LS makes life great.
For those of you who are missing a video game fanfic, I recommend this one, the only downside is that it still has few chapters. Creating games in the future
Very nice history. Le personnage de Shin est super et l'évolution de Kishin est super bien faite merci de continuer à écrire
Please continue Thais story.................................................................................................................................
Amazing story I hope this will continue to receive some love from the readers and author.
Solo tengo cosas, buenas que decir... Me encanta la temática Buen desarrollo Personaje interesante Si acaso la parte de la herencia se está estancando un poco y la esposa del protagonista ha ido desapareciendo pero en general bien
Please continue this story *)[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I binge the whole story in three days. about 400 chapters, and I can say for certain that this is one of my favorite rags to riches fic, the fact that the writing is immersing and engaging. nothing is boring, and while I'd love to have a more depth or quantity of chapters regarding the impact of specific games/technologies, I could understand that you'd want to have a faster pace.
Dark souls? ☝️🤓 ......................................................................................................................................
5 stars because I like how instead of just reading, you started writing[img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend]
I don't know what to say, this story is great in all aspects. It's the perfect balance between progress and detail. The pace is great and the characters are as fleshed out as they could be considering this story is more focused on video games and Kishin.
A good story must be 5 stars[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
love! love! love! hope this continues for a very long time. I actually learnt stuff about video game from this that when I came across a video on yt about the history of video game and guess stuff base on the novel I actually got it right, I felt so semi included in the conversation my older brothers were having😭😭😂😂
so many info dump and no mc progress low character/story development so pls author almost chapter that i read are about the experience of the costumer
Binged around 150 Chaps all night before stopping. It was very good at first but then the plot becomes repetitive and the pacing became too fast which robbed that good experience I felt in the early chaps.If I have if honest I truly enjoyed the so called 'filler' slife of life chapters you stopped making after a certain point, its gives depth to the character and could have been another plot point to avoid the repetitiveness of the business side. Like you could have explored Mira's life in college and how her relationship with the mc impacted her life there. The reactions of the classmates? How did the treatment of her change when he donated a sum of money to the school? Perhaps you can have some male student attempt to 'flirt' her and how she rejects it and then follwed by the mc showing him that she is his. There is a lot of aspects in his relationship with not only with Mira but also her parents, her sister, his sisters, and etc. There's a lot of plotpoint that could have been explored. These things had a lot of potential that would give depth to your characters. Making them more relatable and easy to sympathize with. But we barely get any of it and then at certain point completely stopped it.There also the problem where you repeatedly told a scene instead of showing it. Like they said "Show not Tell". You did it right with the buying of the marriage ring. You showed us, instead of just saying "He bought an elegant ring" and leave it at that.I believe it was a bad move when you stopped making the so called 'filler' slice-of-slife chaps after the marriage chapter. Those where the things that I enjoyed and helped avoid the reptitiveness of the business side. So much potential but was not explored.Hope this helps you improve author. I geniunely enjoyed reading this book.
why is the author not posting any new chapters?