Reincarnated in the DC Universe with the Omnitrix.

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Drayven

only 2 chapters but looks promising a few tips tho ensure you a writing in character for internal monologues batman would think in a similar fashion to how he talks. draw things out a bit describe the surroundings doesn't have to be complex eg: "crawling out of the vent Ben as grey matter took in the libraries interior. dozens of book shelves arranged neatly filled the space leaving a small area towards the front of the room where the librarians desk sits. situated closely to the main entrance." notice how i set the scene without being too specific just described a standard library and the reader fills in the Blanks you only need to describe things like layouts or objects in the environment if they are important to the story like the layout of a secret lab or the light of a lamp post shape the scene how you need and let the reader fill in the blanks

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Jetmach

Just like 90% of DC crossovers, he meets Batman within the first 2 chapters. He's not even in Gotham. So, pass. Not my cup of tea. asdoujfghujawehgfuasghdfuhawedu

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petrus_silva

Oi, não falo inglês. Por isso estou escrevendo na minha língua mas de qualquer forma sua historia tem bastante potencial gosto bastante do universo DC e de Ben 10 e espero que você consiga aproveitar os dois mundos da melhor forma possível. Boa sorte e que essa historia seja maravilhosa

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Vishal_Jagnayak_3739

Well the stroy is good but mc tell batman about his power and that he has only 10 aliens sigh 😔

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WereWolf1987

in just 3 chapters managed to get hooked and interested in a story and not like oh i just come back when there is more chapters ,actually wana see/read more chapters which like maybe 2nd story like this ^^ so Thank you

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Talo

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Yean_Delgado

Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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RXGAMER_1

had me at dc and ben 10 .

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Fajar_Coker

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Aguywithdioface

I'm hoping this is a good Ben 10 fanfiction

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lNell

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