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it is a great fic for web novel I'm not on here a lot but for when I am this is a good read..................................................
honestly didn't know what to expect of this app but fanfic like this it's worth it.
Its a good Naruto fic with good ideas and an author that wants to improve so seems like the start of a really good book that I will enjoy rereading in 5 months when I totally forget all the plot points
I just love this Fanfiction! It's one of the best I've ever read! The Author doesn't just go with the flow of the Naruto Story but creates his own where everything makes sense! And he's so innovative with his OC and OT!
Great fic so far, will edit review once it gets more chaps. Canon divergence is great and the plot is good so far. .
Alright, review time. So far, as of the 21st Chapter, I have figured out a few things about this story. Those being that this story is bascially going on the concept of 'Divergence' as in everything will be in chaos after some time.I am not sure if I am explaining it right but this is probably the best fic I have ever read as far as representation of 'Causiality and Butterfly effects' goes and unexpectedly or maybe that's the strong point of this story all the events makes sense. Like you can actually see what will happen because of the stuff the MC does.Also the writing style is really good and the name of the MC absolutely sucks 😩Finally, Writing Quality - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development - ⭐⭐⭐ (Three star because the development is kinda weird around the 19ish chapter, like MC does stuff that kinda doesn't make sense for him to do.)Character Design and everything else - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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it is a great fic for web novel I'm not on here a lot but for when I am this is a good read..................................................
honestly didn't know what to expect of this app but fanfic like this it's worth it.
Its a good Naruto fic with good ideas and an author that wants to improve so seems like the start of a really good book that I will enjoy rereading in 5 months when I totally forget all the plot points
I just love this Fanfiction! It's one of the best I've ever read! The Author doesn't just go with the flow of the Naruto Story but creates his own where everything makes sense! And he's so innovative with his OC and OT!
Great fic so far, will edit review once it gets more chaps. Canon divergence is great and the plot is good so far. .
Alright, review time. So far, as of the 21st Chapter, I have figured out a few things about this story. Those being that this story is bascially going on the concept of 'Divergence' as in everything will be in chaos after some time.I am not sure if I am explaining it right but this is probably the best fic I have ever read as far as representation of 'Causiality and Butterfly effects' goes and unexpectedly or maybe that's the strong point of this story all the events makes sense. Like you can actually see what will happen because of the stuff the MC does.Also the writing style is really good and the name of the MC absolutely sucks 😩Finally, Writing Quality - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development - ⭐⭐⭐ (Three star because the development is kinda weird around the 19ish chapter, like MC does stuff that kinda doesn't make sense for him to do.)Character Design and everything else - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐