King of knights on MCU

LV 1

TheVersalStudios

It's decent but it lacks meaning. The protagonist goes from being a simple girl to an unparalleled killer too quickly, you barely give her background. Which makes her an ordinary Mary Sue. You use the power system of fate but what good is it if you don't even respect it. You literally give him the strength of 500 tons after facing ordinary people! And you put it in parameters e+. That in fate is only 15 times the strength of an ordinary person, you exaggerated too much there. After his first supernatural battle he already has the strength of 1500 tons. You can practically do it to anyone after the first 10 chapters. Too fast and without any emotion since nobody can with her. Except for the writing, which is good, everything else is terrible.

LV 11

Greg63636638485746

Genius translator! He changed the synopsis a bit, making mc a man turned into girl. I really do think that original is just a girl reborn in marvel. Why does it matter? Because now translator can confuse ‘he’ and ‘she’ - nobody will be able to blame him! After all, our mc is a guy and a woman…

LV 4

Don_shofer

This is a review with 20 updated chapters: Even though some sentences don't make sense, it's much better than MTL with all the Chinese propaganda and nonsense sentences that only they understand. I'm also glad you removed sentences like, young master, second generation rich, wang Yang, I hope you continue translating, since I really like the story

LV 14

Solgalao

I like the fanfic because it’s unique. Though please fix the dialogue, keep writing your fanfic the way you like it.

LV 1

Random_NPC

Pretty awesome story so far, love the idea of it and the persona of the MC is spot on. Little concerned about the whole roommate thing though.... keep up the great work!!!

LV 1

Good_Deus

Uma boa história, mais falta alguns complementos, mais de resto está bom. Q

LV 4

A_poky1ninja

Shameless review, I don't need to say anything, I know it's not the best thing you're going to find here but it's a story that I liked. My first language is Spanish so that's the reason why translation is something bad. but it doesn't matter, I'll continue until I finish the story

LV 4

Lazy_Fox111

It would be nice if you also replace some words and rephrase some paragraphs so that it would make sense. Other than the grammatical mistakes, it's a decent Chinese fic.

LV 3

Familyguy454

Just need more chapters, I like it. I speak Spanish so, I didn’t do a large review, because you don’t understand me hahaha 😑😑 Sigue con el trabajo espero que no lo abandones

LV 5

TheMondayEffect

As far as translations go this is really good, it’s worth the read

LV 14

Im_a_shota

while i terrorise you with wierd pictures i still love the story thank you for creating this nyaヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ

LV 2

DaoistFNur0O

The story is great and I like the behavior of the main character -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 4

FujiwaraNoMokou

REVIEW SHOULD BE MORE THAN 40 CHARACTERS...

LV 1

Good_Deus

Uma ótima história mais falta algumas coisas, por exemplo arrumar alguns diálogos. Melhorar o fundo do mundo um pouco, entre outras coisas...........,.................

LV 4

Daotianshen

i like the story and idea of saber in marvel but can you fix this cuz it does not look good if it's only words

LV 4

DaoistW6wuW3

wow read this months ago and its better than most MTL

LV 3

AERIC35

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LV 1

Roca_con_chese

good plot, the personality of the characters is good, the first chapters are a bit bad at the beginning but the grammar improves in the later chapters, the updates are fast with 10 or 12 chapters per week. Thanks for the good work.