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when you finish the book at the end can you please write an epilogue.........................................................................................
I have never been so confused about what to think about a book. I ended with the conclusion that it is decent and at the same time the stupidest and most disgusting story I have ever read. The Author is so stupid, he fails basic math at multiple occasions (I'm talking not even being able to count to 30) and worst of all, he and Layla (MC) share a single deteriorating brain cell. The only reason I even continue to read is because I havenever seen such a good world build before. The way he fused DxD/Marvel and other Crossovers is just perfect. Her system, if you can even call it that, is absolutely useless. It claims to give rewards but all the stats she gets are from levels, she never increased her stats herself after the first few chapters. If she wasn't so lazy and trained, she would be stronger than without the system. The items it gives aren't even a reward from the system but what she gets as a consequence of her action. Let's not even talk about how the system is a slave to higher beings. The Ancient One accessed her Inventory, something the system thought impossible, and Lady Death can just grant Layla levels and issue quests. Then there is the obvious Misandry (Hate for Men). The Author and Layla would never admit it but there are only 4+ male characters and they all only appear for a few chapters. The male characters that are important for the story are all getting genderbent and not just for harem purposes. Instead of adopting Harry Potter, we suddenly have Heather, and instead of Issei we have Isana. Let me not even get started about the men that were supposed to have romance or are married to another beautiful woman, they all suddenly become irredeemable villains. The harem is also getting out of hand. She said she didnt want a too big harem as even her heart isn't infinite but there is still no sign of an end almost 300 chapters in. I thought after she got pregnant and had the 1 year timeskip she would just be happy with her family but no, she is now increasing her harem at an even faster rate. Do I even want to talk about how she impregnated two highschool girls? She has girls in her group that are hundreds, thousands, and even as old as time but she only knocked up the minors? Layla's habit of letting her enemies escape or life for them to return is also irredeemable. Its a never ending circle that doesnt even make sense. She sometimes moves at lightspeed but when a portal appears, the council of reeds appears, take the captured reed in front of her, and declare revenge on her JUST A FEW METERS BEFORE HER, she starts screaming "Oh no, they got away". Lets also mention that the author is immune to all critics and ignores them like a champ.
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Good plot and nice characters, really fun to read in your free time please keep up the good work thanks so much, l always read this novel every time l have time to spare.
fun MC! i like how she comes to accept the changes in her identity and navigates the world around her. there are some when i feel it's too rushed, but it's still very good.
Your stories are amazing but you have a problem in 2 areas …..interactions and power scaling(you’re not very good at this)
Interesting novel so far, tho author seems to have never read DxD, because powerscalling is really messy here, way weaker than DxD power level is
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es una muy buena novela por favor sigue con el buen trabajo que tengas muchas suerte y salud
Good its okay story there are few stupid things here and there like how most of the woman are yuri and how big mcs harem becomes, like to me only maybe number 1 and number 3 were okay and rest were litle too much, plus author adds a new universe crossover later on and there are few stupid villains but its okay
Be warned Heather( Harry Potter gender-bend, main Heroine) gets r*ped by Vernon tread carefully...
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Absolutely love it only complain is that the mc is a complete bottom me no like 👍
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The story and characters are all over the place, but in a good way. I genuinely enjoy this novel a lot and it's one of the only ones I really look forward to new chapters.
MC is too dumb, really frustrating to read, whether its overall development of her powers ( Light Manipulation etc. ), her actions or her thought process, its just 'ugh'.
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Die Mischung aus Solo Leveling und verschiedenen anderen Comic und Fantasy Welten hat eine nice Fantasy Welt erschaffen
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why why the cliffhangers after cliffhangers please tell me they finally get to Olympus in the next chapter.
This story is fascinating, a great read all in all, just a rocky start, but after that, the story is something really nice to read, fo one, it's my first Female Gamer, plus the World mix is nice, some battle are skipped and picked up later but they are not that important. 🤩👌🏻Still, a Great thank you for this story 🙏🏻
I truly enjoyed reading this story (The Fallen Gamer). The Main MC has just the right amount of everything a MC needs. I started reading this story two days ago and I have just finished it at chapter 303. This is how much I enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing this story
when you finish the book at the end can you please write an epilogue.........................................................................................
I have never been so confused about what to think about a book. I ended with the conclusion that it is decent and at the same time the stupidest and most disgusting story I have ever read. The Author is so stupid, he fails basic math at multiple occasions (I'm talking not even being able to count to 30) and worst of all, he and Layla (MC) share a single deteriorating brain cell. The only reason I even continue to read is because I havenever seen such a good world build before. The way he fused DxD/Marvel and other Crossovers is just perfect. Her system, if you can even call it that, is absolutely useless. It claims to give rewards but all the stats she gets are from levels, she never increased her stats herself after the first few chapters. If she wasn't so lazy and trained, she would be stronger than without the system. The items it gives aren't even a reward from the system but what she gets as a consequence of her action. Let's not even talk about how the system is a slave to higher beings. The Ancient One accessed her Inventory, something the system thought impossible, and Lady Death can just grant Layla levels and issue quests. Then there is the obvious Misandry (Hate for Men). The Author and Layla would never admit it but there are only 4+ male characters and they all only appear for a few chapters. The male characters that are important for the story are all getting genderbent and not just for harem purposes. Instead of adopting Harry Potter, we suddenly have Heather, and instead of Issei we have Isana. Let me not even get started about the men that were supposed to have romance or are married to another beautiful woman, they all suddenly become irredeemable villains. The harem is also getting out of hand. She said she didnt want a too big harem as even her heart isn't infinite but there is still no sign of an end almost 300 chapters in. I thought after she got pregnant and had the 1 year timeskip she would just be happy with her family but no, she is now increasing her harem at an even faster rate. Do I even want to talk about how she impregnated two highschool girls? She has girls in her group that are hundreds, thousands, and even as old as time but she only knocked up the minors? Layla's habit of letting her enemies escape or life for them to return is also irredeemable. Its a never ending circle that doesnt even make sense. She sometimes moves at lightspeed but when a portal appears, the council of reeds appears, take the captured reed in front of her, and declare revenge on her JUST A FEW METERS BEFORE HER, she starts screaming "Oh no, they got away". Lets also mention that the author is immune to all critics and ignores them like a champ.
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Good plot and nice characters, really fun to read in your free time please keep up the good work thanks so much, l always read this novel every time l have time to spare.
fun MC! i like how she comes to accept the changes in her identity and navigates the world around her. there are some when i feel it's too rushed, but it's still very good.
Your stories are amazing but you have a problem in 2 areas …..interactions and power scaling(you’re not very good at this)
Interesting novel so far, tho author seems to have never read DxD, because powerscalling is really messy here, way weaker than DxD power level is
Having faith in reliable recovery services such as Daniel Meuli Web Recovery might be crucial to taking back control of your finances. The recovery process with Daniel Meuli Web Recovery not only restored my lost funds but also prompted me to revisit and reinforce my security measures. From implementing two-factor authentication to regularly updating passwords, I took proactive steps to fortify my financial security. To prevent falling victim to cyber attacks, it's crucial to prioritize cybersecurity. This includes using complex passwords, enabling security features like multi-factor authentication, and staying vigilant against phishing attempts. In the unfortunate event of a cyber attack, swift action is key. Reach out to reputable recovery services like Daniel Meuli Web Recovery CONTACT THEY TELEGRAM @ DANIELMEULI OR WhatsApp + 3 9 3 5 1 2 0 1 3 5 2 8, report the incident to relevant authorities, and take steps to secure your accounts to mitigate further damage.
Crypto theft took me down, having lost 32,000. I had invested my life savings in cryptocurrencies, hoping to build wealth for my family's future. But one dreadful morning, I woke up to find my digital wallet emptied - hackers had somehow bypassed my security and stolen my entire crypto fortune. Those 32,000 dollars represented years of diligent saving and planning, now vanished instantly. Utterly devastated, I felt my world crashing down. How would I recover from this? My dreams of buying a house, paying for my children's education, going on vacations - all gone. The depression was overwhelming. I stopped eating, barely slept, and felt utterly hopeless. But then I discovered daniel meuli Web recovery, an expert cryptocurrency recovery service. Their white hat hackers were able to trace the stolen funds and pinpoint the thieves' digital wallets. Through their proprietary methods, they initiated recovery procedures. It took months of effort, but miraculously, my 32,000 dollars were returned to me. I cannot express how grateful I am to daniel meuli web recovery for giving me back my life savings. Their ethical, legal services saved my family's future. Now I can breathe freely again, the crushing weight of the theft finally lifted off my shoulders. This whole experience has taught me to be more vigilant about crypto security - but also renewed my faith in the kindness of others. daniel meuli Web recovery brought me back from the brink of total despair - I will never forget it. Daniel Meuli web recovery can be reached via telegram ID Danielmeuli or WhatsApp +3,9,3,5,1,2,0,1,3,5,2,8
es una muy buena novela por favor sigue con el buen trabajo que tengas muchas suerte y salud
Good its okay story there are few stupid things here and there like how most of the woman are yuri and how big mcs harem becomes, like to me only maybe number 1 and number 3 were okay and rest were litle too much, plus author adds a new universe crossover later on and there are few stupid villains but its okay
Be warned Heather( Harry Potter gender-bend, main Heroine) gets r*ped by Vernon tread carefully...
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Absolutely love it only complain is that the mc is a complete bottom me no like 👍
Nice Book <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story and characters are all over the place, but in a good way. I genuinely enjoy this novel a lot and it's one of the only ones I really look forward to new chapters.
MC is too dumb, really frustrating to read, whether its overall development of her powers ( Light Manipulation etc. ), her actions or her thought process, its just 'ugh'.
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Die Mischung aus Solo Leveling und verschiedenen anderen Comic und Fantasy Welten hat eine nice Fantasy Welt erschaffen
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
why why the cliffhangers after cliffhangers please tell me they finally get to Olympus in the next chapter.
This story is fascinating, a great read all in all, just a rocky start, but after that, the story is something really nice to read, fo one, it's my first Female Gamer, plus the World mix is nice, some battle are skipped and picked up later but they are not that important. 🤩👌🏻Still, a Great thank you for this story 🙏🏻
I truly enjoyed reading this story (The Fallen Gamer). The Main MC has just the right amount of everything a MC needs. I started reading this story two days ago and I have just finished it at chapter 303. This is how much I enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing this story