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This is my personal opinion When I saw Harry Potter & Shelby together, I wanted more hooks and twists in the story, but I got the lord of the Rings system.
A rather fantastic novel so far. You have seamlessly integrated the world of lord of the rings in harry potter while keeping the story interesting. I hope you don't abandon this story and update as regularly as you can
I find this story really appealing as the crossover of LOTR and HP here is something to look forward to. Saruman, Gandalf, Dumbldore, Voldemort and Souran are characters that are interesting in themsleves, not to mention, an interaction between them would be a fascinating story. So unless, the author messes up somewhere along the line. I would very much recommend this web novel.
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haven't read it yet, though I am about to. but before I begin, why couldn't you have not made it an SI, and just had Thomas Shelby get a hogwarts letter. That would have been awesome!!!! I am disappointed that isn't the case as I have read very few SIs that were anything but and op Mc wankfest.
Greatly impressed so far by the story, the characters feel more alive/real than in other stories, just the development speed seems a little slow. Still fun to read, thanks for the great work
Definitivamente uma das melhores histórias que li. Enredo muito bem construído, gramática excelente mesmo com o tradutor automático, personagens com histórias, personalidades e presenças construídas. Sem falar no crossover; já li muitos do tipo, mas este, supera de longe. Muito Bom!
Honestly one of the best Fan-fics on Webnovel please keep up the good work!
MC is not emotionless , is rational , has humanity , will do anything for his benefit.......in dark he is villain and in light he is young talented wizard........one of the best HP FANFIC
English IS not my first language, so please don't mind my mistakes. First this story is interesting, and has a lot of potential. The reason to become a Dark lord is a bit odd but the quality global is good
Well, I'm ready to put 5 stars, but there is one big problem that seems to me really serious. The problem is that the main character is too strong and developing too fast, if it were a story about how not a particularly serious person just develops and looks at all sorts of events from the outside, then I would not see the problems in it, but it seems that the main goal of the main character is to lead his family to prosperity and so on, but at the same time he is in his first year and can already destroy almost the whole Britain
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
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Easily the best HP fanfic I've ever read. I highly recommend reading it, it's so clearly written that you'd think it was an original story in some respects, the characters are believable, even the more fanciful side of the story, the system, is well executed and instead of ruining the story as is usually the case, makes it more interesting.
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It’s a great fic. The thing that needs the most work is the authors word usage. Not sure if English is the authors first language or not but most of the dialogue is awkward. I’m currently at chapter 27, we’ll see if it get better. The updates seem to be coming fast so that’s great. One thing I didn’t like is the mc throwing around his family name like that’s supposed to mean something in the magical world, it pretty much makes him seem like a muggleborn Draco. Hopefully that doesn’t continue. He needs some accomplishments, maybe some potions very seen before or something, before his name will mean anything to anyone. If he makes a name for himself, not just at hogwarts but in the magical world, then people with know not to mess with the Shelby’s. But at this point no one would care about his threats of his family.
It is a story that captivates you from the beginning, with an interesting main character .
traduccion??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
There were some chapters where it seems unedited, when a dialogue is within the same double quotes and it's confusing. There's an entire chapter where MC and Hermione's dialogues were interchanged. Everything else is great, although it would be better if author tune down the MC Hermione ship. It's just not believable and creepy since MC has an adult mind. It's this Hermione, not the full adult we know now.
The story is very interesting and I do like the premise there are some mistakes such as calling McGonagol the vice principal her title is deputy headmistress calling Neville’s toad Ralph when it’s name is Trevor and calling the house cup the academy cup instead I’m not saying it’s not a good fic it is I just taught I would point these things out
Overall good read. Characters are well flushed out and the plot and storyline is well layered. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
This is my personal opinion When I saw Harry Potter & Shelby together, I wanted more hooks and twists in the story, but I got the lord of the Rings system.
A rather fantastic novel so far. You have seamlessly integrated the world of lord of the rings in harry potter while keeping the story interesting. I hope you don't abandon this story and update as regularly as you can
I find this story really appealing as the crossover of LOTR and HP here is something to look forward to. Saruman, Gandalf, Dumbldore, Voldemort and Souran are characters that are interesting in themsleves, not to mention, an interaction between them would be a fascinating story. So unless, the author messes up somewhere along the line. I would very much recommend this web novel.
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
haven't read it yet, though I am about to. but before I begin, why couldn't you have not made it an SI, and just had Thomas Shelby get a hogwarts letter. That would have been awesome!!!! I am disappointed that isn't the case as I have read very few SIs that were anything but and op Mc wankfest.
Greatly impressed so far by the story, the characters feel more alive/real than in other stories, just the development speed seems a little slow. Still fun to read, thanks for the great work
Definitivamente uma das melhores histórias que li. Enredo muito bem construído, gramática excelente mesmo com o tradutor automático, personagens com histórias, personalidades e presenças construídas. Sem falar no crossover; já li muitos do tipo, mas este, supera de longe. Muito Bom!
Honestly one of the best Fan-fics on Webnovel please keep up the good work!
MC is not emotionless , is rational , has humanity , will do anything for his benefit.......in dark he is villain and in light he is young talented wizard........one of the best HP FANFIC
English IS not my first language, so please don't mind my mistakes. First this story is interesting, and has a lot of potential. The reason to become a Dark lord is a bit odd but the quality global is good
Well, I'm ready to put 5 stars, but there is one big problem that seems to me really serious. The problem is that the main character is too strong and developing too fast, if it were a story about how not a particularly serious person just develops and looks at all sorts of events from the outside, then I would not see the problems in it, but it seems that the main goal of the main character is to lead his family to prosperity and so on, but at the same time he is in his first year and can already destroy almost the whole Britain
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Easily the best HP fanfic I've ever read. I highly recommend reading it, it's so clearly written that you'd think it was an original story in some respects, the characters are believable, even the more fanciful side of the story, the system, is well executed and instead of ruining the story as is usually the case, makes it more interesting.
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It’s a great fic. The thing that needs the most work is the authors word usage. Not sure if English is the authors first language or not but most of the dialogue is awkward. I’m currently at chapter 27, we’ll see if it get better. The updates seem to be coming fast so that’s great. One thing I didn’t like is the mc throwing around his family name like that’s supposed to mean something in the magical world, it pretty much makes him seem like a muggleborn Draco. Hopefully that doesn’t continue. He needs some accomplishments, maybe some potions very seen before or something, before his name will mean anything to anyone. If he makes a name for himself, not just at hogwarts but in the magical world, then people with know not to mess with the Shelby’s. But at this point no one would care about his threats of his family.
It is a story that captivates you from the beginning, with an interesting main character .
traduccion??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
There were some chapters where it seems unedited, when a dialogue is within the same double quotes and it's confusing. There's an entire chapter where MC and Hermione's dialogues were interchanged. Everything else is great, although it would be better if author tune down the MC Hermione ship. It's just not believable and creepy since MC has an adult mind. It's this Hermione, not the full adult we know now.
The story is very interesting and I do like the premise there are some mistakes such as calling McGonagol the vice principal her title is deputy headmistress calling Neville’s toad Ralph when it’s name is Trevor and calling the house cup the academy cup instead I’m not saying it’s not a good fic it is I just taught I would point these things out
Overall good read. Characters are well flushed out and the plot and storyline is well layered. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .