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Chap 86 review: Really good fanfic, would be top notch if not for the random decision to make the MC "apathetic". In most of his major character interactions with other humans in the the story he actually exhibits the traits of a sociopath, autist, or nempho in random order. Few if any of his thoughts and decisions showcase him as someone with crippling apathy (i.e Lack of emotion, lack of goal-setting, indifference, low energy levels etc). Also not a fan of the whole not wearing clothes shtick he has going on. Choosing to walk around nearly nude and not wanting to wear clothes is more a sign of autism than apathy btw. To make it readable I basically ignore any description of the MC and use my own headcanon of a regular guy who has trouble being polite. Now: Story has become really stale honestly. The character growth is nonexistent tbh. Just when you think theres growth he relapses and finds more reason to commit senseless murder. The world building has also taken a negative turn, the oligarchical system with living embodiments of gods has made this AU so nonsensical I cant stomach it anymore to be honest. Legendaries are known living gods or are treated as such in this story with how much theyve seen them do and yet people still make the idiotic decision to find small things to fight the mc over when they KNOW he has a legendary himself. Then it just repeats. Alongside that he bends over to anyone named Jenny or Joy and ruthlessly slaughters anybody else. Its not apathy, he’s psychotic with extra steps.
Can you post this on FFN fanfic .com web novel keeps kicking me out of the app while I’m listening and sometimes reading
To be honest it’s just too much and the thing that makes me mad is the freaking fact that he’s giving his Pokémon nicknames each and everyone of them and it turns out other people is like how you expect us to remember.. Typical Chinese stuff stories again nothing out of the ordinary and author try to make the legendary Pokémon seem like super op but seriously man if they were how did raquaza got captured. But if you like your choice this is all just in my opinion.
Great story! for me in the middle saga at the middle an part of ending of hoenn I fell a bit off(most likely personal taste), but after that it started to get great again like the arc of this region more and can't wait to see how MC and his pokemon continue to grow and solve mysterys around the world! P.S. did like the buffs he got during those arcs just liked the development less bit to pessimistic for my taste. P.S.S. maybe for the future more development of other characters/pokemon could make the story even better
Isn't it supposed to be a no harem story? Why is Mc showing his interest in having lot of conquests?
It’s ok. But the author has this terrible habit of just summarizing instead of telling the story. This has happened in other of his stories. The whole apathy stuff is wierd . The way the Jenny and nurse joy reacted is also so wierd . I had to drop this because of the points mentioned above. I hope the author starts telling the story instead of summarizing.
where to start, I love plot line, the main character his Pokémon but most of all, I love that there is no blasting off again and I can't wait to see where his Pokémon go from here
way too cruel and apathy he doesn't think about his actions and consequences
Eu acho sua obra perfeita . perfeita em termos de inserção o fato de o protagonista ser um anti herói e oque torna a história mais perfeita para mim sempre fiquei irritado com os protagonista que deixam os antagonistas quase baterem em quem eles amam ou simplesmente no caso do maxie do teen magma que oque ele iria fazer causaria milhares de mortes e mesmo assim o protagonista não os matava por uma tola ideia de não matar passada pelo anime. Então desde já eu agradeço por essa incrível obra espero que essa história continue por muitos capítulos. um abraço diretamente do Brasil
boa história ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... .............................. ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... .............................. ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... .............................. ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ...............
Nican-nahuayaac, means born of spell or magic. --•-•----•----•--•----++++•••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
This is one of best Pokemon fanfiction. This novel shows cruelty of the Pokemon world aswell of teachnical skill can be use by Pokemon. And don’t have much plot armour i mean it’s not like typical trope. I hope you read the novel. Thank to the author.
Weird descriptions and representations of women but otherwise a decent read for the most part. Interesting developments so far (chap. 142). Looking forward to more
very good fic. the progression is good. also, his power/technique/pokemon draws are actually random as well, which is always a plus. the system is good as well. the mc uses the system and the system I'd part of the story but its mot the focus (can't really explain it very well, but it's not a fic where the system is part of EVERY chapter and revolves around said system) the world background could be better, since sometimes info comes out of nowhere, however that's understandable, especially as the plot progresses. this doesn't negatively affect the story, though, and we do get a good world background, with well fleshed out concepts and ideas.
I usually don’t write a review on stories I read but the concept behind this story with the legitimate randomness of system and all it entails makes it a very interesting read. I can imagine that with the roulette the writer has going that it makes it that they have to constantly adapt to where they see it going and with what I have read so far I am genuinely looking forward to the continuation and eventual completion. I also enjoy how he is having the MC grow with his apathy and I personally loved the conflict with the Joys and Jenny’s and hope to see more of him overcoming himself.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translate.. The grammar is good too... It have system that show stat, give quest, etc (like most system).. But the reward is so great/generous (his luck is so good) with Larvitar, Caterpie, Charmander (all three with variations), great skill or ability (Aura, X-Ray visions, etc).. I like how he's specialist in variation pokemon, it make me can't wait to see what other pokemon he will get (because his pokemon all is uniques or legendaries).. Hope his Feebas egg will hatch soon and become a variation too, maybe shiny, speed, and element (shiny is a must, although his mother got shiny from Team Aqua).. What I don't like is his Aphaty.. Especially after the drama it cause to Joy and Jenny clan.. Hope his pokemon can cure it or at least decreased it so much.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
giving this story 5 star across the board because of how unique it is. Has a system but everything is randomize. Not a collect them all pokemon style fic, but rather a few (currently) op close pokemons. So far gym battles are few in number unlike other stores where they go for 10 or 20 chapters just for a few battles. More focused on the wild life aspect.
Cynthia for waifu or who is the waifu or is a fanfic pokemon without romance?????-?-,-,-??--,-,,-,-,-,-,-,-,-,-?-?-,-?-?-?-?-,-,-,-,'xmxmxmxmxmxmxmzmxmxmmxmxmxmxnxmnxnzmz?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?,?-?-?-?-?-?'mxmxmxm,?-?'cmmc"?"?"
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
That story is absolutely perfect whith a realistic pokemon world and great MC
I like it, slow burn and tons of details. Don't know much of Pokemon except the first anime. Appreciate the Pokemon pics in the comments.
It’s alright personally I think there are more Pokémon fics like this that are better but it’s far from the worse. The first few chapters felt like a chore to read but it slowly starts to get better. Will probably update this as more chapters come out
I leave this review here on the sole basis you have not included fairy type. it is an invalid bs type and most changes that have come with and after it, I find extremely objectionable
I rarely ever post reviews but this author deserves them. No typos, consistent uploads, good length chapters, quality story with a solid flow. The author also responds to and listens to readers suggestions. 10/10
love the story, not much fanfics are like this, the writing is a 4.9-5, not many mistakes, the development is going well so far, the story's kinda new so we can't judge much. Character design.. idfk how they look like and I'm too lazy to read appearances, updates are well, 1 chapter every 1 or 2 days, background is good as well. keep up the good story bro
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Chap 86 review: Really good fanfic, would be top notch if not for the random decision to make the MC "apathetic". In most of his major character interactions with other humans in the the story he actually exhibits the traits of a sociopath, autist, or nempho in random order. Few if any of his thoughts and decisions showcase him as someone with crippling apathy (i.e Lack of emotion, lack of goal-setting, indifference, low energy levels etc). Also not a fan of the whole not wearing clothes shtick he has going on. Choosing to walk around nearly nude and not wanting to wear clothes is more a sign of autism than apathy btw. To make it readable I basically ignore any description of the MC and use my own headcanon of a regular guy who has trouble being polite. Now: Story has become really stale honestly. The character growth is nonexistent tbh. Just when you think theres growth he relapses and finds more reason to commit senseless murder. The world building has also taken a negative turn, the oligarchical system with living embodiments of gods has made this AU so nonsensical I cant stomach it anymore to be honest. Legendaries are known living gods or are treated as such in this story with how much theyve seen them do and yet people still make the idiotic decision to find small things to fight the mc over when they KNOW he has a legendary himself. Then it just repeats. Alongside that he bends over to anyone named Jenny or Joy and ruthlessly slaughters anybody else. Its not apathy, he’s psychotic with extra steps.
Can you post this on FFN fanfic .com web novel keeps kicking me out of the app while I’m listening and sometimes reading
To be honest it’s just too much and the thing that makes me mad is the freaking fact that he’s giving his Pokémon nicknames each and everyone of them and it turns out other people is like how you expect us to remember.. Typical Chinese stuff stories again nothing out of the ordinary and author try to make the legendary Pokémon seem like super op but seriously man if they were how did raquaza got captured. But if you like your choice this is all just in my opinion.
Great story! for me in the middle saga at the middle an part of ending of hoenn I fell a bit off(most likely personal taste), but after that it started to get great again like the arc of this region more and can't wait to see how MC and his pokemon continue to grow and solve mysterys around the world! P.S. did like the buffs he got during those arcs just liked the development less bit to pessimistic for my taste. P.S.S. maybe for the future more development of other characters/pokemon could make the story even better
Isn't it supposed to be a no harem story? Why is Mc showing his interest in having lot of conquests?
It’s ok. But the author has this terrible habit of just summarizing instead of telling the story. This has happened in other of his stories. The whole apathy stuff is wierd . The way the Jenny and nurse joy reacted is also so wierd . I had to drop this because of the points mentioned above. I hope the author starts telling the story instead of summarizing.
where to start, I love plot line, the main character his Pokémon but most of all, I love that there is no blasting off again and I can't wait to see where his Pokémon go from here
way too cruel and apathy he doesn't think about his actions and consequences
Eu acho sua obra perfeita . perfeita em termos de inserção o fato de o protagonista ser um anti herói e oque torna a história mais perfeita para mim sempre fiquei irritado com os protagonista que deixam os antagonistas quase baterem em quem eles amam ou simplesmente no caso do maxie do teen magma que oque ele iria fazer causaria milhares de mortes e mesmo assim o protagonista não os matava por uma tola ideia de não matar passada pelo anime. Então desde já eu agradeço por essa incrível obra espero que essa história continue por muitos capítulos. um abraço diretamente do Brasil
boa história ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... .............................. ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... .............................. ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... .............................. ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ...............
Nican-nahuayaac, means born of spell or magic. --•-•----•----•--•----++++•••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••--•-•----•----•--•----++++••••••
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is one of best Pokemon fanfiction. This novel shows cruelty of the Pokemon world aswell of teachnical skill can be use by Pokemon. And don’t have much plot armour i mean it’s not like typical trope. I hope you read the novel. Thank to the author.
Weird descriptions and representations of women but otherwise a decent read for the most part. Interesting developments so far (chap. 142). Looking forward to more
very good fic. the progression is good. also, his power/technique/pokemon draws are actually random as well, which is always a plus. the system is good as well. the mc uses the system and the system I'd part of the story but its mot the focus (can't really explain it very well, but it's not a fic where the system is part of EVERY chapter and revolves around said system) the world background could be better, since sometimes info comes out of nowhere, however that's understandable, especially as the plot progresses. this doesn't negatively affect the story, though, and we do get a good world background, with well fleshed out concepts and ideas.
I usually don’t write a review on stories I read but the concept behind this story with the legitimate randomness of system and all it entails makes it a very interesting read. I can imagine that with the roulette the writer has going that it makes it that they have to constantly adapt to where they see it going and with what I have read so far I am genuinely looking forward to the continuation and eventual completion. I also enjoy how he is having the MC grow with his apathy and I personally loved the conflict with the Joys and Jenny’s and hope to see more of him overcoming himself.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translate.. The grammar is good too... It have system that show stat, give quest, etc (like most system).. But the reward is so great/generous (his luck is so good) with Larvitar, Caterpie, Charmander (all three with variations), great skill or ability (Aura, X-Ray visions, etc).. I like how he's specialist in variation pokemon, it make me can't wait to see what other pokemon he will get (because his pokemon all is uniques or legendaries).. Hope his Feebas egg will hatch soon and become a variation too, maybe shiny, speed, and element (shiny is a must, although his mother got shiny from Team Aqua).. What I don't like is his Aphaty.. Especially after the drama it cause to Joy and Jenny clan.. Hope his pokemon can cure it or at least decreased it so much.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ giving this story 5 star across the board because of how unique it is. Has a system but everything is randomize. Not a collect them all pokemon style fic, but rather a few (currently) op close pokemons. So far gym battles are few in number unlike other stores where they go for 10 or 20 chapters just for a few battles. More focused on the wild life aspect.
Cynthia for waifu or who is the waifu or is a fanfic pokemon without romance?????-?-,-,-??--,-,,-,-,-,-,-,-,-,-?-?-,-?-?-?-?-,-,-,-,'xmxmxmxmxmxmxmzmxmxmmxmxmxmxnxmnxnzmz?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?,?-?-?-?-?-?'mxmxmxm,?-?'cmmc"?"?"
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ That story is absolutely perfect whith a realistic pokemon world and great MC
I like it, slow burn and tons of details. Don't know much of Pokemon except the first anime. Appreciate the Pokemon pics in the comments.
It’s alright personally I think there are more Pokémon fics like this that are better but it’s far from the worse. The first few chapters felt like a chore to read but it slowly starts to get better. Will probably update this as more chapters come out
I leave this review here on the sole basis you have not included fairy type. it is an invalid bs type and most changes that have come with and after it, I find extremely objectionable
I rarely ever post reviews but this author deserves them. No typos, consistent uploads, good length chapters, quality story with a solid flow. The author also responds to and listens to readers suggestions. 10/10
love the story, not much fanfics are like this, the writing is a 4.9-5, not many mistakes, the development is going well so far, the story's kinda new so we can't judge much. Character design.. idfk how they look like and I'm too lazy to read appearances, updates are well, 1 chapter every 1 or 2 days, background is good as well. keep up the good story bro
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Nicknames Pokémon.