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this is my favourite novel in wn so far. i mean, I don't know how can a gold exist among all this shi. but it is a gold. I have read all the free chaps but now have to use passes 😭. it's awesome.
Start is good, the current 500+ is even better but I must say, later chapters after around 500 it’s becoming shorter and shorter, now for a single match to finish it takes up around 6-9 chapters, like, you don’t need to stretch the chapters to keep your novel going on, just be upfront about us and give us something worth out coins. Nobody wants to spend money on things that aren’t as enjoyable as the coin costs.
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the best sports novel ive read, although there are some things where it gets confusing, but its still good so yeah give it a try I def recommend
I don't even know why this book is called the Talent Copying System when it copies jackshit. The MC had regressed, but if the author hadn't specifically mentioned it, I would have never believed it. Immaturity oozes out of him and the short attention span makes it even more apparent. The MC didn't use any stat point for 5 years, and when he finally thought of using them, the system gives an update notification to gobble them up. These plot holes really drive me up the wall because they become increasingly apparent whenever an important decision is about to be made by the MC.
Yeah, no. The author probably decided to give up on the novel and thus introduce a second system mc. Was pretty good till this point, though no point in reading it further. Good luck.
Personally, I love this story. It reminds a lot of this manwha called "All the football talents are mine". This story is fun and easy to read so I highly suggest it. It's the typical regression story where the main character regresses and becomes "OP". What I like a lot about this story in particular is that it doesn't over use the system ability. It genuinely feels as though the main character is working hard his own way to become the best footballer. There are some parts that I find lacking. The overly repeated usage of words in a span of 5 paragraphs slightly irritates me (Karasuno chp ~30). The fact that it doesn't explain the time skips properly and it has a lack of world building. (I know nothing of the world other than the Mc strives to play football. What is the average stat of a regular 6 year old? Did you have any close friends? What is your past experience with football other than the fact that you really like it. Did you make it to the Nationals? What happened to the connections with your team players from the past? where is the rivalry? What is the parents main jobs?, does he plan on saving his father? And if you don't know football terms, you're basically cooked. They don't explain a single thing about the terms.). There are too many blanks to give the world building, character design, and writing a high criteria. This story is nice to read especially if youve already read something similar (once again give All the football talents are mine a read. It's a pretty easy manwha to read. ofc it's not the best but if you're struggling to understand this story, it might help with the visual.). On a more positive note, I do find this story quite amusing. if you're looking for a fun regression football novel to read, I suggest this one.
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I already read until the last chapter, but my opinion become dislike with another character with system. Come on Author, you dont have to add OC who dont know how to play soccer become GOAT because another system. You should just consistency with MC development. I hope you can erase the OC with another system. Because i feel like Japanese team too OP with double systems player
The MC is a regressor with a system that lets him be OP in football. However, I guess he was becoming a little bit too OP in the authors opinion because after more than 600 chapters, another character randomly heard a voice in his head saying [ would you like to change your fate?] Of course, that was a system, and of course, he accepted the offer. I don't like novels where the protagonist isn't the only one with a cheat, so... ✌️
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Great story, bro! I've really enjoyed it from the very first chapter to the latest one. You've got something special here. However, I have a suggestion: consider drawing inspiration from Japanese sports manga and anime, especially when it comes to adding emotional depth. Series like Diamond no Ace or Haikyuu!! excel at incorporating sad or challenging moments without diving too deep into dark themes. Right now, it feels like you're introducing some really heavy, dark elements that don't quite fit the tone of a sports story, which should be more about youth, energy, and the spirit of competition. It's totally fine to have the main character face struggles on their journey to the top, but there are more fitting ways to explore those setbacks without turning every 50 chapters into a tragedy. You’re crafting an excellent story, and I truly believe it could be even better if you lightened up on the darker elements. I love your work, and I genuinely appreciate your storytelling. I just wanted to share my thoughts because I think your story has the potential to be even more enjoyable. Keep up the great work
the book is captivating, I really liked the book , how can I save this book to read it again?
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Overall I’ve had an amazing time reading this novel, I’ve been desperately looking for a great novel based on football and this ticked all of my boxes. Great main character who is not perfect to begin with but really develops as the series goes on both as a person and a footballer. I enjoyed the family dynamic and it always brought a smile to my face when Hiros parents get to see him play & how proud they are. The side characters we meet along the way are also interesting & develop as well. Its just a blast to read! Please continue writing!
While I not able to give it perfect 5 star due to some parts that not to my liking, the story is quite good actually considering it is an Original Novel. As someone already mentioned, the early pacing is very slow which it is. MC started as 5 years old and playing again kids around age but somehow has football IQ of teenage kids...in JAPAN? There are time skip directly middle school arc with youth team and U-17 World Cup that tooks over 200 chapters for this Cup...WTH!? So I just skipped directly to chapter 400 where MC had his professional debut. And remember..his mentality is mature for anything regarding football..on or off but for daily life..he still acts like a kid even total ages in 2 lifetimes was around 40., Lastly...paragraphs...expect a loooooooong one.
Just One Word Author 😺 AMAZING 😍😍 I love 😘😚 thisssss alot .. I followed Hiro on his journey from a 5 year old boy to his current 16yr old boy and it as been amazing 😍 I love the writing quality..it allows readers to be able to use their imagination to picture the story and Hiro character design is top-notch .. He is hardworking , handsome filial and mentally strong... This book is a must Read guys 😍👌 Thanks 😊 Author for this amazing story 😃
it's a good book , good progression and all but I have a question(note: I haven't really gone that far) but does the mc eventually fall in love cause it won't make sense if he decides that football is all that matters to him
first of all he doesn't copy others' talent but it can be won thru the system lottery, read at least 100 chapters and no copying of any talent was done only talents he got are from the lottery or quest, but overall good novel tho its kinda exaggerate the skills of the mc even tho he still a child less than 10 yrs old comparing him to pros sometime.
if writer stop this writing im gonna kill him. also please give us your fiscord link.
Bruh I js binged this and it’s Soo good from the way the chratchers are fleshed out to hiros journey everything is great👏🏾👏🏾
a big lack of coherence, I would have believed the story of a 15/18 year old kid but the kid is 5 years old it is unthinkable that the matech would happen like this it was a league match ^^ the author would have skipped it childhood or change the age of the child.
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ok first of all you said his potential is SSS and even messi and ronaldo are only SS so why tf was he still struggling against a Japanese players☠️☠️☠️, and also his system don't even help much too I don't know what was going on when you were writing this also the mc stay too long in Japan
I saw a similar book but this is better I think keep on going dont't drop it
200 chapters in and mc is still 13 and why the fuck do you need to drag a match into 16 chapters 🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️
this is my favourite novel in wn so far. i mean, I don't know how can a gold exist among all this shi. but it is a gold. I have read all the free chaps but now have to use passes 😭. it's awesome.
Start is good, the current 500+ is even better but I must say, later chapters after around 500 it’s becoming shorter and shorter, now for a single match to finish it takes up around 6-9 chapters, like, you don’t need to stretch the chapters to keep your novel going on, just be upfront about us and give us something worth out coins. Nobody wants to spend money on things that aren’t as enjoyable as the coin costs.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ the best sports novel ive read, although there are some things where it gets confusing, but its still good so yeah give it a try I def recommend
I don't even know why this book is called the Talent Copying System when it copies jackshit. The MC had regressed, but if the author hadn't specifically mentioned it, I would have never believed it. Immaturity oozes out of him and the short attention span makes it even more apparent. The MC didn't use any stat point for 5 years, and when he finally thought of using them, the system gives an update notification to gobble them up. These plot holes really drive me up the wall because they become increasingly apparent whenever an important decision is about to be made by the MC.
Yeah, no. The author probably decided to give up on the novel and thus introduce a second system mc. Was pretty good till this point, though no point in reading it further. Good luck.
Personally, I love this story. It reminds a lot of this manwha called "All the football talents are mine". This story is fun and easy to read so I highly suggest it. It's the typical regression story where the main character regresses and becomes "OP". What I like a lot about this story in particular is that it doesn't over use the system ability. It genuinely feels as though the main character is working hard his own way to become the best footballer. There are some parts that I find lacking. The overly repeated usage of words in a span of 5 paragraphs slightly irritates me (Karasuno chp ~30). The fact that it doesn't explain the time skips properly and it has a lack of world building. (I know nothing of the world other than the Mc strives to play football. What is the average stat of a regular 6 year old? Did you have any close friends? What is your past experience with football other than the fact that you really like it. Did you make it to the Nationals? What happened to the connections with your team players from the past? where is the rivalry? What is the parents main jobs?, does he plan on saving his father? And if you don't know football terms, you're basically cooked. They don't explain a single thing about the terms.). There are too many blanks to give the world building, character design, and writing a high criteria. This story is nice to read especially if youve already read something similar (once again give All the football talents are mine a read. It's a pretty easy manwha to read. ofc it's not the best but if you're struggling to understand this story, it might help with the visual.). On a more positive note, I do find this story quite amusing. if you're looking for a fun regression football novel to read, I suggest this one.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I already read until the last chapter, but my opinion become dislike with another character with system. Come on Author, you dont have to add OC who dont know how to play soccer become GOAT because another system. You should just consistency with MC development. I hope you can erase the OC with another system. Because i feel like Japanese team too OP with double systems player
The MC is a regressor with a system that lets him be OP in football. However, I guess he was becoming a little bit too OP in the authors opinion because after more than 600 chapters, another character randomly heard a voice in his head saying [ would you like to change your fate?] Of course, that was a system, and of course, he accepted the offer. I don't like novels where the protagonist isn't the only one with a cheat, so... ✌️
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Great story, bro! I've really enjoyed it from the very first chapter to the latest one. You've got something special here. However, I have a suggestion: consider drawing inspiration from Japanese sports manga and anime, especially when it comes to adding emotional depth. Series like Diamond no Ace or Haikyuu!! excel at incorporating sad or challenging moments without diving too deep into dark themes. Right now, it feels like you're introducing some really heavy, dark elements that don't quite fit the tone of a sports story, which should be more about youth, energy, and the spirit of competition. It's totally fine to have the main character face struggles on their journey to the top, but there are more fitting ways to explore those setbacks without turning every 50 chapters into a tragedy. You’re crafting an excellent story, and I truly believe it could be even better if you lightened up on the darker elements. I love your work, and I genuinely appreciate your storytelling. I just wanted to share my thoughts because I think your story has the potential to be even more enjoyable. Keep up the great work
the book is captivating, I really liked the book , how can I save this book to read it again?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Overall I’ve had an amazing time reading this novel, I’ve been desperately looking for a great novel based on football and this ticked all of my boxes. Great main character who is not perfect to begin with but really develops as the series goes on both as a person and a footballer. I enjoyed the family dynamic and it always brought a smile to my face when Hiros parents get to see him play & how proud they are. The side characters we meet along the way are also interesting & develop as well. Its just a blast to read! Please continue writing!
While I not able to give it perfect 5 star due to some parts that not to my liking, the story is quite good actually considering it is an Original Novel. As someone already mentioned, the early pacing is very slow which it is. MC started as 5 years old and playing again kids around age but somehow has football IQ of teenage kids...in JAPAN? There are time skip directly middle school arc with youth team and U-17 World Cup that tooks over 200 chapters for this Cup...WTH!? So I just skipped directly to chapter 400 where MC had his professional debut. And remember..his mentality is mature for anything regarding football..on or off but for daily life..he still acts like a kid even total ages in 2 lifetimes was around 40., Lastly...paragraphs...expect a loooooooong one.
Just One Word Author 😺 AMAZING 😍😍 I love 😘😚 thisssss alot .. I followed Hiro on his journey from a 5 year old boy to his current 16yr old boy and it as been amazing 😍 I love the writing quality..it allows readers to be able to use their imagination to picture the story and Hiro character design is top-notch .. He is hardworking , handsome filial and mentally strong... This book is a must Read guys 😍👌 Thanks 😊 Author for this amazing story 😃
it's a good book , good progression and all but I have a question(note: I haven't really gone that far) but does the mc eventually fall in love cause it won't make sense if he decides that football is all that matters to him
first of all he doesn't copy others' talent but it can be won thru the system lottery, read at least 100 chapters and no copying of any talent was done only talents he got are from the lottery or quest, but overall good novel tho its kinda exaggerate the skills of the mc even tho he still a child less than 10 yrs old comparing him to pros sometime.
if writer stop this writing im gonna kill him. also please give us your fiscord link.
Bruh I js binged this and it’s Soo good from the way the chratchers are fleshed out to hiros journey everything is great👏🏾👏🏾
a big lack of coherence, I would have believed the story of a 15/18 year old kid but the kid is 5 years old it is unthinkable that the matech would happen like this it was a league match ^^ the author would have skipped it childhood or change the age of the child.
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ok first of all you said his potential is SSS and even messi and ronaldo are only SS so why tf was he still struggling against a Japanese players☠️☠️☠️, and also his system don't even help much too I don't know what was going on when you were writing this also the mc stay too long in Japan
I saw a similar book but this is better I think keep on going dont't drop it
200 chapters in and mc is still 13 and why the fuck do you need to drag a match into 16 chapters 🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️🤦🏻♂️