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@mortifae you are absolutely right if i have to comment i would have dine same
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You really have a way of showing the emotions of the characters as well as their actions and I love it! Try to kind of introduce some of the minor and major characters a bit more by describing the relations towards the main character and try to leave some spaces in between the POVS to ensure that the readers do not miss the changes in point of view, but other than that, I really liked the story and can't wait to read more!
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@mortifae you are absolutely right if i have to comment i would have dine same
You really have a way of showing the emotions of the characters as well as their actions and I love it! Try to kind of introduce some of the minor and major characters a bit more by describing the relations towards the main character and try to leave some spaces in between the POVS to ensure that the readers do not miss the changes in point of view, but other than that, I really liked the story and can't wait to read more!