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Typical tragedy novel where the “dark” tag means slavery and s*xual abuse, wow what a surprise, what a great work of literature.
Plot armor from the get go. Contradictory sentence to sentence, paragraph to paragraph. Words become pointless when descriptors are constantly being put in juxtaposition.
early review, ch. 47 critique first: --infrequently, you may find a typo or slight grammar mistakes. part in parcel with enjoying webnovels --sometimes the mc feels like she speaks more eloquently than the plot should allow, but not a major plot hole why it's good: --mc goes through some very major trauma starting at 10 years of age. none of it is s--ual, yet it's still possibly a trigger warning for parents or folks with rough childhoods. if you can get past some of the rough bits, you start to really get a sense of the psychological depth of the characters early on in the story. their healing and progress makes sense and feels real. overall, I it is a novel that I think shows a lot of potential to help someone who might be struggling. --the main characters struggle is very unique, but is also entirely believable. not corners cut, no dice rolls (probably). everyone is clearly planned and well thought out. --fast paced. there seems to be a system involved, but so far it feels more believable than some far-fetched soul-ai. hope this helps gather some support. :) the world seems a better place for the story so far
This came from a long age old fan loved Divine anime system *cough*Rei my boi*cough* the lovely and deathly nanomancer Shiro the snow woman and now an abyssal 🤔 sounds exciting but don't suddenly end it suddenly like nanomancer it felt forced. Otherwise I carry grand expectations from you 👊
As expected, from reading Reili's other works, this novel is phenomenal! I used to think nanomancer is my favorite, but now this one definitely is
I like the character development and the world building in this story. It’s one of the top I have read here. Would recommend for those that like fantasy type stories.
Best read I've had in a while 'well after nanomancer' and what really hooks me on to this novel is the power system of this novel really show that gaining power has its consequences which you don't see alot of in other novel where the mc has an op system which is kinda a different but a good different, overall good novel keep it up dude [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
YGFcdasyu gbchsgdyufaytdfvayfdatdwtafduwawgaygdydagduwwuag ygdwaygdywuagdwaydaydwygadgwygagywgyagydgioah rdwuabduwadwuhiaduhwauuiwgaudgdwgdgdwugd. My bad I was speaking enchanting table, I said "I loved nanomancer so I assume this novel will be good too."
I rarely read romance novels but nanomancer was so good that I can't help but read this new story from the same author. Please keep up the good work
let's stow this away for now, until it got to 100 or so chapters, that way you wouldn't suddenly ran out of chapters whilst craving for more. anyone with me?
Was wondering if you had a new book up with nanomancer being done. Therefore, glad to see this up. Your previous two stories were great, so I am happy for the next journey.
The story is just starting out but I seriously love it! Even at the start you can tell that there will be some epic character development as the MC experiences more and interacts with more people. Super excited for this one and definitely recommend giving it a shot!
Good show. Hope for more. Good smooth writing, main character is an interesting mix of innocent and ruthless. Can’t wait for more😊
What I read so far is amazing and I cant wait to see how far this will go and how the story develops![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Havent read it yet, but I really enjoyed nanomancer reborn and have high hopes for this😊
So far, I think that this new book is amazing. It clicked with me from the very beginning, the transition from one prison to another (albeit under different conditions) was seemless. And I do hope to see how far this book is going to go. I can't wait to see this story's power system. Keep it up Reilli.
Shameless Author time! I believe that I've set up a better premise, character and overall power system with this one so I hope all of you fine readers will give this book a try! It's my third book so there is still lots to learn! Ty for your patience
Read up to 506. To be honest, I was hesitant to read this after reading Nanomancer. I didn’t think that Reili would write something else at the same level as his prior work but was pleasantly surprised. Love the characters and Alice’s development so far. I do think there’s a lot going on with all the gods, the hidden WILL and now Alice and the Queen having part divinity and the new cult but it doesn’t feel complicated which is nice). Overall I can’t wait for more chapters.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Typical tragedy novel where the “dark” tag means slavery and s*xual abuse, wow what a surprise, what a great work of literature.
Plot armor from the get go. Contradictory sentence to sentence, paragraph to paragraph. Words become pointless when descriptors are constantly being put in juxtaposition.
early review, ch. 47 critique first: --infrequently, you may find a typo or slight grammar mistakes. part in parcel with enjoying webnovels --sometimes the mc feels like she speaks more eloquently than the plot should allow, but not a major plot hole why it's good: --mc goes through some very major trauma starting at 10 years of age. none of it is s--ual, yet it's still possibly a trigger warning for parents or folks with rough childhoods. if you can get past some of the rough bits, you start to really get a sense of the psychological depth of the characters early on in the story. their healing and progress makes sense and feels real. overall, I it is a novel that I think shows a lot of potential to help someone who might be struggling. --the main characters struggle is very unique, but is also entirely believable. not corners cut, no dice rolls (probably). everyone is clearly planned and well thought out. --fast paced. there seems to be a system involved, but so far it feels more believable than some far-fetched soul-ai. hope this helps gather some support. :) the world seems a better place for the story so far
This came from a long age old fan loved Divine anime system *cough*Rei my boi*cough* the lovely and deathly nanomancer Shiro the snow woman and now an abyssal 🤔 sounds exciting but don't suddenly end it suddenly like nanomancer it felt forced. Otherwise I carry grand expectations from you 👊
As expected, from reading Reili's other works, this novel is phenomenal! I used to think nanomancer is my favorite, but now this one definitely is
I like the character development and the world building in this story. It’s one of the top I have read here. Would recommend for those that like fantasy type stories.
Best read I've had in a while 'well after nanomancer' and what really hooks me on to this novel is the power system of this novel really show that gaining power has its consequences which you don't see alot of in other novel where the mc has an op system which is kinda a different but a good different, overall good novel keep it up dude [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
YGFcdasyu gbchsgdyufaytdfvayfdatdwtafduwawgaygdydagduwwuag ygdwaygdywuagdwaydaydwygadgwygagywgyagydgioah rdwuabduwadwuhiaduhwauuiwgaudgdwgdgdwugd. My bad I was speaking enchanting table, I said "I loved nanomancer so I assume this novel will be good too."
I rarely read romance novels but nanomancer was so good that I can't help but read this new story from the same author. Please keep up the good work
let's stow this away for now, until it got to 100 or so chapters, that way you wouldn't suddenly ran out of chapters whilst craving for more. anyone with me?
Was wondering if you had a new book up with nanomancer being done. Therefore, glad to see this up. Your previous two stories were great, so I am happy for the next journey.
The story is just starting out but I seriously love it! Even at the start you can tell that there will be some epic character development as the MC experiences more and interacts with more people. Super excited for this one and definitely recommend giving it a shot!
Good show. Hope for more. Good smooth writing, main character is an interesting mix of innocent and ruthless. Can’t wait for more😊
What I read so far is amazing and I cant wait to see how far this will go and how the story develops![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Havent read it yet, but I really enjoyed nanomancer reborn and have high hopes for this😊
So far, I think that this new book is amazing. It clicked with me from the very beginning, the transition from one prison to another (albeit under different conditions) was seemless. And I do hope to see how far this book is going to go. I can't wait to see this story's power system. Keep it up Reilli.
Shameless Author time! I believe that I've set up a better premise, character and overall power system with this one so I hope all of you fine readers will give this book a try! It's my third book so there is still lots to learn! Ty for your patience
Read up to 506. To be honest, I was hesitant to read this after reading Nanomancer. I didn’t think that Reili would write something else at the same level as his prior work but was pleasantly surprised. Love the characters and Alice’s development so far. I do think there’s a lot going on with all the gods, the hidden WILL and now Alice and the Queen having part divinity and the new cult but it doesn’t feel complicated which is nice). Overall I can’t wait for more chapters.
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