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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Omg😍 i always love this kind of relationship. I will keep reading this. Good job author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Weldon work Author, keep it up I really enjoyed the book, waiting for more updates
The narrations and descriptions were on point. I also am immersed in the story. With more features and chaps, then this will explode! Good luck in the future and I know you will do great. [img=recommend]
Like the story, the writing quality is excellent the pace of the story and the plot Is interesting but the overly possessive behaviour and the toxicity and rage of Paul was little much But I am sure it's part of the character development hope in the end they have a healthy relationship
writing quality, stability of update, character design are good. Its good to read a romantic story, the starting is well. But the confusion between Ml is interesting. I cant say who is the Ml after reading the first 10 chapters. But whatever it is i like paul's personality. I think he is the Ml but if he if make him a good character, his character seems villain. BUt it's your story i am just giving my opinion.
well, interesting but the Paul's toxic love, rage issues are over broad. i don't know what will happen to the end but the story plot and the quality of the story is good than the previous story. i love to see more because your story is interesting.
After a fantasy novel you are going to write a romantic novel. The starting is good and waiting to see what will happen next. the story development is exciting, writing quality is excellent. I hope to see further. Update more .
It is interesting. The writing style is quiet good and understandable, simple and worth of reading. But if it's possibly free then it will be good. the plot is interesting, a paranoid disorder man's love. I want to read more and see will he able to over come or not. And if author can update it together the full story then it is good to read because for that I need to wait much but it will be difficult for author. it is just a urge nothing else.. Want to read more. Update fast
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Omg😍 i always love this kind of relationship. I will keep reading this. Good job author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Weldon work Author, keep it up I really enjoyed the book, waiting for more updates
The narrations and descriptions were on point. I also am immersed in the story. With more features and chaps, then this will explode! Good luck in the future and I know you will do great. [img=recommend]
Like the story, the writing quality is excellent the pace of the story and the plot Is interesting but the overly possessive behaviour and the toxicity and rage of Paul was little much But I am sure it's part of the character development hope in the end they have a healthy relationship
writing quality, stability of update, character design are good. Its good to read a romantic story, the starting is well. But the confusion between Ml is interesting. I cant say who is the Ml after reading the first 10 chapters. But whatever it is i like paul's personality. I think he is the Ml but if he if make him a good character, his character seems villain. BUt it's your story i am just giving my opinion.
well, interesting but the Paul's toxic love, rage issues are over broad. i don't know what will happen to the end but the story plot and the quality of the story is good than the previous story. i love to see more because your story is interesting.
After a fantasy novel you are going to write a romantic novel. The starting is good and waiting to see what will happen next. the story development is exciting, writing quality is excellent. I hope to see further. Update more .
It is interesting. The writing style is quiet good and understandable, simple and worth of reading. But if it's possibly free then it will be good. the plot is interesting, a paranoid disorder man's love. I want to read more and see will he able to over come or not. And if author can update it together the full story then it is good to read because for that I need to wait much but it will be difficult for author. it is just a urge nothing else.. Want to read more. Update fast
[[It's a little gift from me. The code can be redeemed by 10 different users with 10 FPs/user. The code number is ABDHY4LSGTDJLEUMA and ABDHY5M6GU5JQWVMA you can find the redeem center at Profile-Redeem. You can unlock my book Bind you hellbound and Villainess trains her assassin.]]