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Morningstar House
"When Shadows Loom, We Stand Tall"
The story revolves around Darius, a reincarnated soul in the world of "Game of Thrones." Having lost his memories and transformed into a young slave boy in the city of Qarth, Darius discovers he possesses the powers and Gifts, . As he navigates the complex world of political intrigue and power struggles, Darius hones his skills, becoming an adept assassin and intelligence agent.
Throughout his journey, Darius grapples with his purpose and seeks to uncover the reason for his reincarnation. With intelligence, cunning, and a close bond with animals, he maneuvers through the dangerous world of "Game of Thrones." Despite facing the vulnerability of his new form, Darius is determined to protect those he cares for and make a lasting impact.
As the story progresses, Darius reveals his true nature as a calculated and powerful force, set on a path of self-discovery, revenge, and finding his place in the realm. His journey takes him from slavery to becoming a significant player in the game of thrones, leaving an indelible mark on the history of the Seven Kingdoms.
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MC only knows he is in game of thrones world that it was story in his previous life..
The first twenty chapters of the story are almost all time skips and It is a background for the main story
It is better to tell a group of people, those of you who have problems with the way the story is presented so far, please don't comment...
Your opinion is not important at all, because I write this story just for fun and please don't expect to read a neat and clean one without problems, the comments you give to improve the story are valuable, but keep the other comments to yourself.
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It feels like the author tried to make the chapters longer just by repeating words in a different way. This story is supposed to be about the mc, but instead it’s an info dump about the GOT world progressing through the years with tiny changes. All of this is just written in past tense with only small flashes of first person pov, this story has no substance. Grammatically, author is only decent with mistakes here and there. So basically, you’re writing statements of what happened and not actually telling a story.
i am seeing th mc as an observer than the protagonist he is to passive
there's no point of this story ever existing, the whole premise of the story is him being reincarnated what's the point of being reincarnated backstory when he doesn't even know anything?
I'll be quite honest with this. Most of the content and events of the book is exactly how it happened and there being only having seldom if not bare bone additions or changes to the story. It was basically a play by play of events that originally happened but with an added OC in the discussions and/or Drama that was happening.
everything has already been said, actually the character looks more like a voyeur, the changes are minimal. moreover a lot of the story in the third person without dialogue. It looks like artificial intelligence content.
It could've been so good....but the author got lazy and failed to deliver....it all feels like a giant time skip. 'this book is all bones no meat'
Might as well be skipping rocks with all the jumping around without explanation. Find a needle and poke yourself somewhere, it would be less painful.
below average . no concept . Mc is dumb but author wants him look cool and dashing . Low level planing .Side character are 2d. If anyone read and watch ASOIAF series, his brain cells will be melted after reading this.
This one is promising with good beginning,I hope you also finish it in best form you yourself desire
The idea of the novel is wonderful, but the writer made MC seem like he did not have the ability to change many things, such as preventing the death of Elia Martell and her children, in order to gain Martell's gratitude and ensure their alliance with him. Another example is the death of Lyanna. He could have prevented her death, but the writer made MC seem as if he did not know where she was kidnappedI suggest that the writer rewrite the novel from the beginning, in detail, and without very quick time breaks, because the idea of the novel is very wonderful
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The whole story feels like a timeskip mostly desciptions of events in passing feels more like a summary at the back of a book. Rather than show its all tell which makes it impossible to become immersed which is a shame because theres a good story here if it was told correctly.