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very good ff it feels alot like My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, the chill guy with powers and girls. dk give it a go and youll like it for sure
This fanfic has a good premise at the start. The idea that the MC killed a Chief God of Greek mythology and has all the powers of Zeus is interesting. The first battle when the MC has to fight against Poseidon and have to fight against the other gods from Greek kinda cool and epic In my opinion. I almost thought that this fanfic was a gem until the author introduced heroine characters from other animes and made the pace of the story slow with the slice-of-life and harem genre. It's like I'm watching a Pokemon with the MC catching the heroines. In this fanfic, you will find the MC either lazing around in the club and flirting with his harem or he will spend his time playing around. He thinks of the world as his playground. What is even worse is that somehow there are some flaws with the MC's brain. Why? Like c'mon bro, he spent 15-16 years of his life as an ordinary person, and then when he got the power suddenly his common sense became flaw.
Genial, solo espero que mejore el periodo de actualización, el personaje principal es fuerte, casi exageradamente, pero la historia es muy divertida, el mc no es una princesa, sabe lo que quiere, y lo consigue de una forma u otra, los demás saben este hecho, y evitan causarse problemas a si mismos, dandole todo lo que quiere y necesita, la historia está genial, pero los capítulos tardan mucho.
Best one in a while, the author stories keep me coming back and re reading his stories. I’ve re read his Otaku cultivator one at least five time and I am currently reading it again. His early works had a pretty large amount of grammar mistakes but you can tell the author has improved over the years. Anyways thank you for the interesting stories.
While a crossover slice-of-life with an op MC isn’t anything special or wrong, one problem to be aware of is the portrayal of the characters themselves. Mannerism, wat of speaking, actions, decisions, all of this has already been laid out to you by someone else, just try to emulate it as much as possible. Erica is the most blatant example of this, she’s confident to the point of excessive pridt, yet here she’s lacking certain aspects of her character when compared to the manga/novel/anime. Everyone also suffers from dialogue being too amateurish, not leaving much distinction on who’s who at most times. If it weren’t for writing down who was actually speaking, it falls off in immersion. Writing quality needs a bit of work, a lot of telling rather than showing, makes the dialogue less interesting for sure.
La historia es genial, muy bien escrito, y con minimos detalles malos, el mc es un Campione, como uno de los reyes del mundo se adapta perfectamente, y considerando su primer dios, o mejor dichos, el panteón de dónde obtuvo sus autoridades, la facilidad con la que obtiene su harem no parece forzado, me sorprende que una historia tan buena no esté en el Top, etiquetas:MC dominado, Harem, Crossover, Diosas, chicas fuertes, No Pokémon, mc carismático, Mc no Simp, Mc dominante, Limón, mc Viajero, no política, Etc, Recuerda, el mc solo tiene 6 personas iguales a el en el mundo, es normal que haga lo que quiera, nadie puede decir que no harían lo mismo en su situación, solo que el mc tiene la confianza para hacerlo, y no se anda con rodeos, si una chica le gusta, hace todo lo posible por seducirla, si quiere viajar al otro lado del mundo, entonces lo hace, el mc no tiene dudas, y rebosa confianza, considerando que elimino a un dios, siendo un simple humano, esa confianza en natural, al final, lo único que le falta a esta novela son más capítulos.
E leído pocos ff de camione pero dejes este es el mejor de todos, tanto la historia como el desarrollo del personaje es increíble, además de que el mc no sea un reencarnado no perjudica en nada la historia al contrario la supiste desarrollar muy bien, lo único malo son los pocos capítulos
Autor-San, gostei de mais da sua Fanfic. Continue com esse ótimo trabalho!!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
A Campione – a Godslayer – is a supreme ruler. Since he can kill a celestial being, he can therefore call on the sacrosanct, divine powers wielded by the gods. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a lord. Since the power to kill a deity is in his hands, he therefore looms over all mortals on Earth. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a devil. Since of all mortals who live in the world, none can assume a power to match his!
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
For me it is being one of the best fanfic of campione, the story is very good the plot is good without annoying characters, the personality of the protagonist is good and growing and is adapting A vida de godslayer, the heroines I'm really liking them and their personalities, I expect a lot from this work
One of the best campione ff I've read. Mc's personality is one of my fav things about this ff as he's not a beta like the OG nor does he have a god complex like every other campione fanfic MC's on webnovel.
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As always author, a splendid work.Will this be a world hopping one or just a world composed of many?PS. I feel inferior whenever I start reading your books. My works sucks compared to yours But I'm still gonna read everything you make 😁
its dragon so it's a masterpiece but it might suddenly stop updating so 4.2.PSno more update for Otaku cultivator?
Its dragon we are talking about any story he writes deserve 5 star😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
amazing just keep updating and don't drop I love it. It's beena while since i've read a good campione ff.
pretty good some grammar mistakes but was enjoyable to read and looking forward to more chapters :D
It's very good. i like the all part of this fanfic. just the update stability is messed up. Important Note: Author, your devil & Artific fanfic can't be seen anymore. did you delete it or it was banned? If you did deleted it then post it again. Please! It was just getting on the good part. Please!
very good ff it feels alot like My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, the chill guy with powers and girls. dk give it a go and youll like it for sure
This fanfic has a good premise at the start. The idea that the MC killed a Chief God of Greek mythology and has all the powers of Zeus is interesting. The first battle when the MC has to fight against Poseidon and have to fight against the other gods from Greek kinda cool and epic In my opinion. I almost thought that this fanfic was a gem until the author introduced heroine characters from other animes and made the pace of the story slow with the slice-of-life and harem genre. It's like I'm watching a Pokemon with the MC catching the heroines. In this fanfic, you will find the MC either lazing around in the club and flirting with his harem or he will spend his time playing around. He thinks of the world as his playground. What is even worse is that somehow there are some flaws with the MC's brain. Why? Like c'mon bro, he spent 15-16 years of his life as an ordinary person, and then when he got the power suddenly his common sense became flaw.
Genial, solo espero que mejore el periodo de actualización, el personaje principal es fuerte, casi exageradamente, pero la historia es muy divertida, el mc no es una princesa, sabe lo que quiere, y lo consigue de una forma u otra, los demás saben este hecho, y evitan causarse problemas a si mismos, dandole todo lo que quiere y necesita, la historia está genial, pero los capítulos tardan mucho.
Best one in a while, the author stories keep me coming back and re reading his stories. I’ve re read his Otaku cultivator one at least five time and I am currently reading it again. His early works had a pretty large amount of grammar mistakes but you can tell the author has improved over the years. Anyways thank you for the interesting stories.
While a crossover slice-of-life with an op MC isn’t anything special or wrong, one problem to be aware of is the portrayal of the characters themselves. Mannerism, wat of speaking, actions, decisions, all of this has already been laid out to you by someone else, just try to emulate it as much as possible. Erica is the most blatant example of this, she’s confident to the point of excessive pridt, yet here she’s lacking certain aspects of her character when compared to the manga/novel/anime. Everyone also suffers from dialogue being too amateurish, not leaving much distinction on who’s who at most times. If it weren’t for writing down who was actually speaking, it falls off in immersion. Writing quality needs a bit of work, a lot of telling rather than showing, makes the dialogue less interesting for sure.
La historia es genial, muy bien escrito, y con minimos detalles malos, el mc es un Campione, como uno de los reyes del mundo se adapta perfectamente, y considerando su primer dios, o mejor dichos, el panteón de dónde obtuvo sus autoridades, la facilidad con la que obtiene su harem no parece forzado, me sorprende que una historia tan buena no esté en el Top, etiquetas:MC dominado, Harem, Crossover, Diosas, chicas fuertes, No Pokémon, mc carismático, Mc no Simp, Mc dominante, Limón, mc Viajero, no política, Etc, Recuerda, el mc solo tiene 6 personas iguales a el en el mundo, es normal que haga lo que quiera, nadie puede decir que no harían lo mismo en su situación, solo que el mc tiene la confianza para hacerlo, y no se anda con rodeos, si una chica le gusta, hace todo lo posible por seducirla, si quiere viajar al otro lado del mundo, entonces lo hace, el mc no tiene dudas, y rebosa confianza, considerando que elimino a un dios, siendo un simple humano, esa confianza en natural, al final, lo único que le falta a esta novela son más capítulos.
E leído pocos ff de camione pero dejes este es el mejor de todos, tanto la historia como el desarrollo del personaje es increíble, además de que el mc no sea un reencarnado no perjudica en nada la historia al contrario la supiste desarrollar muy bien, lo único malo son los pocos capítulos
Autor-San, gostei de mais da sua Fanfic. Continue com esse ótimo trabalho!!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
A Campione – a Godslayer – is a supreme ruler. Since he can kill a celestial being, he can therefore call on the sacrosanct, divine powers wielded by the gods. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a lord. Since the power to kill a deity is in his hands, he therefore looms over all mortals on Earth. A Campione – a Godslayer – is a devil. Since of all mortals who live in the world, none can assume a power to match his!
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
For me it is being one of the best fanfic of campione, the story is very good the plot is good without annoying characters, the personality of the protagonist is good and growing and is adapting A vida de godslayer, the heroines I'm really liking them and their personalities, I expect a lot from this work
One of the best campione ff I've read. Mc's personality is one of my fav things about this ff as he's not a beta like the OG nor does he have a god complex like every other campione fanfic MC's on webnovel.
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As always author, a splendid work.Will this be a world hopping one or just a world composed of many?PS. I feel inferior whenever I start reading your books. My works sucks compared to yours But I'm still gonna read everything you make 😁
its dragon so it's a masterpiece but it might suddenly stop updating so 4.2.PSno more update for Otaku cultivator?
Its dragon we are talking about any story he writes deserve 5 star😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
amazing just keep updating and don't drop I love it. It's beena while since i've read a good campione ff.
pretty good some grammar mistakes but was enjoyable to read and looking forward to more chapters :D
It's very good. i like the all part of this fanfic. just the update stability is messed up. Important Note: Author, your devil & Artific fanfic can't be seen anymore. did you delete it or it was banned? If you did deleted it then post it again. Please! It was just getting on the good part. Please!