One Piece: Dark Justice Spandam

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KangTL

Oh, readers who wandering in the realm of fantasy, heed my call! With each spoken word, I create a new world. When these pages are opened, dreams take shape. When these letters are arranged, truth comes to fruition. Fill, fill, fill, fill, fill. Repeat five times, but as each fill is completed, destroy. Pay heed to my words. My will creates your fantasies, and your power stone shapes my destiny. If you abide by this feeling and follow my desires and reasons, then answer my summons. I hereby swear to be your greatest fantasy writer in the world, To vanquish all evil that denies the power stone in this world. Seven realms concealed within the power of words, emerge from the ocean of the fantasy realm, Eternal Wanderer!

LV 4

Winter_Whisperer

Hmm, it's ok I suppose. The MC grew unnaturally strong too quickly and the storytelling is not the best. The idea for the Spandam character is good but it doesn't leave me invested in the story. The novel is not for me but good luck 👍

LV 4

noobmaster36068493

so far so good don't see any manor problems work it

LV 4

Bakuboy

The only thing I didn't like is that the strength of mc was not properly portrayed in the beginning 20 chapters. Him not getting any cheats(devil fruits, teachings, bloodlines) and him becoming op all by himself was too much to be accepted easily.

LV 13

Gilgamesh62

It's a good story and different from the usual ones. Not action or adventure packed. But it's an interesting story to read.

LV 13

Kinryu

tbh, this is heavily AU. It doesn't really follow powerlevel of One Piece. It's more like a dark One Punch Man. The Author focused on his own story more than One Piece. He took a few things from One Piece's powersystem and then overblown it outta proportion to make the MC OP without any external help. The more you read the more bland it kinda feels. Don't expect One Piece when you read this, more like the Author was on an acid trip while writing this story. Overall 2.6 stars. Only 5 stars is update stability because of finished story. Well, powerscaling is a mess in this story. To each their own, I don't enjoy it that much because the interactions don't feel like One Piece.

LV 14

mcben1000

Nice work! Love it.[img=Loving it] Nice work! Love it.[img=Loving it]

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shiroch

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Bocifer

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SilvaZoldyck

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Ash_D_Born

This is really good so far lets keep going

LV 5

Madara_Uchiha

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LV 10

allty

This novel feels like opm and overlord, where we have an overly powerfull character with little to no ambition but without the comedy sections, only the absolute bafflement of other characters when they get to know his power. The main character has a very strict personal code that he follows at all costs and knowingly classifies it as madness, that is what transforms this novel in something else than a simple powerfantasy.

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Wowcraft

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