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4.25
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Honestly my problem is with the MC, if you like morally dark MC then this is for you. For me it's not, I tend to aim for perfectly balanced MC (Gray Area). The Writing Quality and World Background is on point, then again It's too much for my sensible heart! XD Have Fun!
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I'm just going to say this by chapter 11 the MC is a little messed up in the head just reach chapter 11 and if you like whatever you read then start over at chapter 1 and go on but if not you're wasting your time
elo padre ma santa moca chinpaula! beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Bueno estoy muy contento con la historia, aunque el Mc es un poco cuestionable en su toma de decisiones, me parece muy disfrutable la historia, aunque obvio que varia con el gusto de cada uno. Pero en mi humilde opinion le doy a esta historia 5☆ porque disfrute leerlo.
I love the book so far and while I feel a little disappointed the mc hasn’t tried to make any thing like mechs or other countermeasures against larger opponents in case of a portal to those worlds I understand that you have no plans for such a thing happening yet. But I would love to see the main character prepare a bit better for world traveling as with his supercomputer and the way he seems to want control I don’t see a reason as to why he wouldn’t thoroughly prepare when world traveling.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Your story has an interesting premise and potential along with a steady update schedule and I hope you improve on your writing.
I don't like venti template but I look forward to how you'll utilize his abilities
Não gostei muito do sadismo do MC com harleen, tirando isso ficou bom __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Has potential, let’s see how this goes. 💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾
(Ch18)Iam writing this review cuz apparently author wants 15 reviews its a d!ck move btw author people will hate u just because u want reviews or they will put low starts after all reviews are reviews no matter how low and so far i like it obviously there quite a few mistakes that i don't like but he is the author so he can write whatever he wants
Got to be honest while I do understand the need to vent I still find it way to harsh for harleen to be treated in such a way, honestly I feel like you should tone it down a bit and increase the sadism as the character grows older.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
5 star bcoz i like it.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
we go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I don't know where this novel is gone it's just too confusing bad plot or bad writing by author it's potential has gone downhill
Honestly my problem is with the MC, if you like morally dark MC then this is for you. For me it's not, I tend to aim for perfectly balanced MC (Gray Area). The Writing Quality and World Background is on point, then again It's too much for my sensible heart! XD Have Fun!
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I'm just going to say this by chapter 11 the MC is a little messed up in the head just reach chapter 11 and if you like whatever you read then start over at chapter 1 and go on but if not you're wasting your time
elo padre ma santa moca chinpaula! beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Bueno estoy muy contento con la historia, aunque el Mc es un poco cuestionable en su toma de decisiones, me parece muy disfrutable la historia, aunque obvio que varia con el gusto de cada uno. Pero en mi humilde opinion le doy a esta historia 5☆ porque disfrute leerlo.
I love the book so far and while I feel a little disappointed the mc hasn’t tried to make any thing like mechs or other countermeasures against larger opponents in case of a portal to those worlds I understand that you have no plans for such a thing happening yet. But I would love to see the main character prepare a bit better for world traveling as with his supercomputer and the way he seems to want control I don’t see a reason as to why he wouldn’t thoroughly prepare when world traveling.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Your story has an interesting premise and potential along with a steady update schedule and I hope you improve on your writing.
I don't like venti template but I look forward to how you'll utilize his abilities
Não gostei muito do sadismo do MC com harleen, tirando isso ficou bom __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Has potential, let’s see how this goes. 💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾
(Ch18)Iam writing this review cuz apparently author wants 15 reviews its a d!ck move btw author people will hate u just because u want reviews or they will put low starts after all reviews are reviews no matter how low and so far i like it obviously there quite a few mistakes that i don't like but he is the author so he can write whatever he wants
Got to be honest while I do understand the need to vent I still find it way to harsh for harleen to be treated in such a way, honestly I feel like you should tone it down a bit and increase the sadism as the character grows older.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ 5 star bcoz i like it.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
we go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I don't know where this novel is gone it's just too confusing bad plot or bad writing by author it's potential has gone downhill