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I came for gold, I found Platinum, world background? Excellent. Writing Quality? 10/10. Character designs need a little more work, but 5 star regardless. although it has relatively little chapters for now, I can't wait for the future ones
"Nexus: I Can't Make Portals" by Xolu is an enchanting tale that swept me away on a captivating journey of discovery and self-realization. From the very first page, I was immersed in a world of magic, mystery, and unexpected twists. If you're a fan of fantasy, magic, and heartfelt journeys, I wholeheartedly recommend diving into the enchanting world of "Nexus: I Can't Make Portals." You won't be disappointed! Check out my books too, and let's continue to support and uplift each other in this wonderful realm of storytelling. With gratitude and excitement, AdBoy
A good story A good start if you have time check out my omniversal ruler system 🤩🤩🥳
you have great potential as I struggle but your writing suffers from over-symbolism. every single thing symbolizes something, idk of it's crucial to the plot but it's tiring to read. the description doesn't focus on the main parts and only skims through them. eg, the diplomas and awards in the admins office geld no meaning but they were brought up for two paragraphs or so. I believe should just try to show more and tell less. our journey as author's is a long but cheers to improvement and every step we take to better our craft🚀
Adore the writing!!! But can't give you a full 5 stars cause you need to give us more chapters!!!
Writing is still in its early stages, but still love it. Love your writing style and attention to detail. Keep working hard author!
Amazing dedication by the author, I NEED MORE! I love how the author can develop complex plots and characters. Can't wait for the future! I recommend this Webnovel 100℅
Stay consistent Mr. Author! Do not flatter to the treacherous feinds - The haters. I will support you in your journey, donating every stone I possess! I shall follow you in this horrendous journey full of vile haters, critical comments, hateful reviews and more!Pin me... If you have the heart to let me follow on this adventure full of thrill and action!
Love the novel and the attention to detail(except for how little you update). How is Libert's character development going to work(seems a bit slow).
It's still a little too early to tell how things will go but it's got an interesting start. The literal anger you feel while reading some scenes is definitely going to make it more enjoyable when revenge time rolls around.
I came for gold, I found Platinum, world background? Excellent. Writing Quality? 10/10. Character designs need a little more work, but 5 star regardless. although it has relatively little chapters for now, I can't wait for the future ones
"Nexus: I Can't Make Portals" by Xolu is an enchanting tale that swept me away on a captivating journey of discovery and self-realization. From the very first page, I was immersed in a world of magic, mystery, and unexpected twists. If you're a fan of fantasy, magic, and heartfelt journeys, I wholeheartedly recommend diving into the enchanting world of "Nexus: I Can't Make Portals." You won't be disappointed! Check out my books too, and let's continue to support and uplift each other in this wonderful realm of storytelling. With gratitude and excitement, AdBoy
A good story A good start if you have time check out my omniversal ruler system 🤩🤩🥳
you have great potential as I struggle but your writing suffers from over-symbolism. every single thing symbolizes something, idk of it's crucial to the plot but it's tiring to read. the description doesn't focus on the main parts and only skims through them. eg, the diplomas and awards in the admins office geld no meaning but they were brought up for two paragraphs or so. I believe should just try to show more and tell less. our journey as author's is a long but cheers to improvement and every step we take to better our craft🚀
Adore the writing!!! But can't give you a full 5 stars cause you need to give us more chapters!!!
Writing is still in its early stages, but still love it. Love your writing style and attention to detail. Keep working hard author!
Amazing dedication by the author, I NEED MORE! I love how the author can develop complex plots and characters. Can't wait for the future! I recommend this Webnovel 100℅
Stay consistent Mr. Author! Do not flatter to the treacherous feinds - The haters. I will support you in your journey, donating every stone I possess! I shall follow you in this horrendous journey full of vile haters, critical comments, hateful reviews and more!Pin me... If you have the heart to let me follow on this adventure full of thrill and action!
Love the novel and the attention to detail(except for how little you update). How is Libert's character development going to work(seems a bit slow).
It's still a little too early to tell how things will go but it's got an interesting start. The literal anger you feel while reading some scenes is definitely going to make it more enjoyable when revenge time rolls around.