9รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
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Overall the plotline and world building are very interesting. I appreciate that the author focused on introducing the setting of the story in the first chapter. on the second chapter, the story was focused on the big event that is supposed to be the start of the story but somehow I feel that the introduction of that event overlaps the introduction of the characters. Also the writing quality is good but somehow the dialogue is a little bit hard to read since it is sandwiched between the narration. For readers like who is reading using our phone, that kind of paragraph is a little bit tough to read. Overall it's an interesting read. Keep working on your book.
The author has done a great job of world-building and character development, The story is interesting easy to grasp, and mysterious too, keep up your good work/...
Sisters are all about love, right? 😄 But seriously, I'm really enjoying the story, and a harem theme is always a great choice for some relaxing reading
Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks
so far we are in the world building phase but it's still very good, keep up the good work author
I liked the introduction, but it could use some work. For instance, the exposition could be toned down a bit in addition to the description and then there's the description of the characters that could be tonned down also other than that its a great novel.
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Overall the plotline and world building are very interesting. I appreciate that the author focused on introducing the setting of the story in the first chapter. on the second chapter, the story was focused on the big event that is supposed to be the start of the story but somehow I feel that the introduction of that event overlaps the introduction of the characters. Also the writing quality is good but somehow the dialogue is a little bit hard to read since it is sandwiched between the narration. For readers like who is reading using our phone, that kind of paragraph is a little bit tough to read. Overall it's an interesting read. Keep working on your book.
The author has done a great job of world-building and character development, The story is interesting easy to grasp, and mysterious too, keep up your good work/...
Sisters are all about love, right? 😄 But seriously, I'm really enjoying the story, and a harem theme is always a great choice for some relaxing reading
Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks
so far we are in the world building phase but it's still very good, keep up the good work author
I liked the introduction, but it could use some work. For instance, the exposition could be toned down a bit in addition to the description and then there's the description of the characters that could be tonned down also other than that its a great novel.