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เขียนรีวิวThe only thing i didn't like in the story is the god reincarnating the other people, but other than that it's actually good for it's own merit. It's not some world changing or new style, but still good.
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to be honest, for chapter 1-15 its really awesome and i read it many time but until author decide want to reincarnated all character that died because of his friend fault . it’s became annoying and dont suit my taste, sorry about this but this story its really really awesome and unique until you want reincarnated them . i dont know about anyone else but yeah sorry i‘m drop it even though i’m always give you power stone hahaha but nahh, goodluck man !! i know, not everyone like me , i think more than 95% love about your decision to reincarnated character like tang san , etc.But i just dont like it ( and maybe because i dont like tang san ?? hahaha just prejudiced ) so yeah, goodluckk my friend !!! this story have a amazing and unique taste , its just dont suit my taste , that’s all hahahaha so yeah , thanks for the chapter 👍🏻
Cool, I loved the novel, I'll let the chapters accumulate, author, can you put game techniques for Bell to be able to imitate and be able to do fighting techniques? As with the God of War, the Blades of Chaos is technically a set of daggers that even Bell uses, so it can even be wielded by Bell himself.
The story is good in overall, of course there's still room for improvement in the pace and writing quality but this a just a minor issue. It may not fit for all the taste but I like it very much and the characters are "alive" not like in other fanfictions (mostly mtl). So a great story with potential, recommend to give it a try. And great job to the "One Who Write"
I like that you have dragon slayer magic but come on just buy props to save Bell aunt. As well as the other power system is not compatible with danmachi since it makes it to complicated. Focus on one power system and if you want to add those Chinese power system make with attack direction or you can use moon world Odin ruins. Well with Chinese you have to simply it since it is to complicated and annoying.
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I love your story. desperately waiting for updates. hope you cal upload soon.I wanted to know do you plan to make it a harem story? if so then who will you add?
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The only thing i didn't like in the story is the god reincarnating the other people, but other than that it's actually good for it's own merit. It's not some world changing or new style, but still good.
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to be honest, for chapter 1-15 its really awesome and i read it many time but until author decide want to reincarnated all character that died because of his friend fault . it’s became annoying and dont suit my taste, sorry about this but this story its really really awesome and unique until you want reincarnated them . i dont know about anyone else but yeah sorry i‘m drop it even though i’m always give you power stone hahaha but nahh, goodluck man !! i know, not everyone like me , i think more than 95% love about your decision to reincarnated character like tang san , etc.But i just dont like it ( and maybe because i dont like tang san ?? hahaha just prejudiced ) so yeah, goodluckk my friend !!! this story have a amazing and unique taste , its just dont suit my taste , that’s all hahahaha so yeah , thanks for the chapter 👍🏻
Cool, I loved the novel, I'll let the chapters accumulate, author, can you put game techniques for Bell to be able to imitate and be able to do fighting techniques? As with the God of War, the Blades of Chaos is technically a set of daggers that even Bell uses, so it can even be wielded by Bell himself.
The story is good in overall, of course there's still room for improvement in the pace and writing quality but this a just a minor issue. It may not fit for all the taste but I like it very much and the characters are "alive" not like in other fanfictions (mostly mtl). So a great story with potential, recommend to give it a try. And great job to the "One Who Write"
I like that you have dragon slayer magic but come on just buy props to save Bell aunt. As well as the other power system is not compatible with danmachi since it makes it to complicated. Focus on one power system and if you want to add those Chinese power system make with attack direction or you can use moon world Odin ruins. Well with Chinese you have to simply it since it is to complicated and annoying.
that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,that is not harem,
I love your story. desperately waiting for updates. hope you cal upload soon.I wanted to know do you plan to make it a harem story? if so then who will you add?
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