4รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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this is a fierce game, only the most hardcore beaten man can bring himself to read it. ........................................................
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
It was a good fanfic, but this chapter ruined the fanfic (chapter:12), yuri in the harem is ntr and no matter how many people deny it, it's the same as you are working and your wife is sleeping with her best friend (woman x woman), it would be infidelity, adding chapter 12 where the mc becomes a cuckold (for the future yuri who will pass for the girl who raises hypnosis) plus the black letters that unfortunately cannot be translated (preventing many people from other countries like me I don't know how to read the translator I use), it just leaves a mess, a pity the truth was entertaining, not only because of the hent*i but more because of the plot, but well I wish you luck, and if you don't mind the ntr of the same genre It is a fanfic that I recommend...[Google Translate]
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this is a fierce game, only the most hardcore beaten man can bring himself to read it. ........................................................
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
It was a good fanfic, but this chapter ruined the fanfic (chapter:12), yuri in the harem is ntr and no matter how many people deny it, it's the same as you are working and your wife is sleeping with her best friend (woman x woman), it would be infidelity, adding chapter 12 where the mc becomes a cuckold (for the future yuri who will pass for the girl who raises hypnosis) plus the black letters that unfortunately cannot be translated (preventing many people from other countries like me I don't know how to read the translator I use), it just leaves a mess, a pity the truth was entertaining, not only because of the hent*i but more because of the plot, but well I wish you luck, and if you don't mind the ntr of the same genre It is a fanfic that I recommend...[Google Translate]