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Just to clarify, the mtl is super confusing and would make your nose bleed from its sheer logic. I saw potential in it so I re-edited the whole thing except its plot, I added the majority of the dialogue for the characters as the mtl has barely any lines for them.
just stop with the gay references. it was funny once. now it is just bad and it doesn't even have a real plot relevance. I ended up dropping it for that reason. besides the annoying gay jokes it was pretty good.to clarify. I support lgbtq. love who you want to love.
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I won't lie.....I don't really understand the story......everything is just mixed together like a concoction.....
author, God willing you will return to the top, don't give up on this great story. Take my review and power stones, I'm here everyday don't let it fall!!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Adorei a historia e como os varios filmes/series se envolven uma com a outra e adorei que mesmo ganhanro habilidades dos personagens o MC não virou um deus invencivel e portanto semdo ben equilibrado.
Olha não vou mentir o inicio é interessante/ruim e fica assim por algumas dezenas de capítulos o ponto alto da história e quando Gisele entra, aí começamos a ver uma história muito mais coesa, tenho a curiosidade de saber como vai trabalhar o lance de Velozes e Furiosos sendo que teoricamente eles estão livre da Justiça. Enfim, não esperava nada da história e por enquanto estou muito entusiasmado, fico um pouco preocupado de seguir afundo a MTL(não sei se ele vai seguir) acho que ele poderia mudar pequenas coisas porque todos nós conhecemos os problemas... Além disso, espero que seja um desenvolvimento Harém, pelo meu gosto pessoal. Por fim, é uma leitura bastante divertida sem seguir os roteiros em si, eu recomendo muito pelo menos até o capítulo 49 que é ate aonde estou fazendo esse resumo, mais para frente posto um outro resumo sobre o rumo que a história está levando
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
It's a great book with constant releases, and good grammar. I would definitely recommend it for a chill read
Awesome 👌 love it. Does anyone have the mtl? I wanna read ahead 🫡 . Thanks for any replies. Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl
Its pretty good keep up the great work....................................................................................................................
Ok, so starting off with the writing quality, it's not great but passable. The author doesn't seem to have a deep understanding and add way too many characters that he sometimes what character he already introduced(Penny). He also use some chatGPT to write some part show the limit of creativity. Story development is so confusing since you can't tell where this is going. It seems the mc only try to befriend way too many people trying to gain skill, which make his friendship dirt cheap and an insult to other characters. He also lacks personality, just trying to match the other characters to gain friendship and try to keep the the plot as is despite being an SI. Character design is pretty good, so tired of skinny good looking and somehow super strong mc. However, the mc so far is only showing his body but haven't really show any of the last life power being a street gangster, I believe. The world background is a mess since the author try to introduce way too much. I mean FAF, Sheldon, and John Wick are fine, but then there are Garfield? Marvel? Overall a passable novel for fun at best, but nothing memorable or special.
escribo esto en el capitulo 17 me tiene enganchado, si tuviera dinero le pagaría al escritor para que sacara 20 capítulos por día pero soy pobre ya veremos como va aunque si recomiendo al autor que cuando meta personajes de películas coloque el nombre de la película
okay that's very funny, but not for everyone. mc has such thick skin that you feel ashamed for what he did. especially when Sheldon said he wanted to stand aside and pull his pants down and be friends hahahaha. this looks like sexual harassment
I'll try updating 3 chapters a day folks, 4 if in a good mood, but at least once a day. Currently doing this as I'm bored af. Would yall prefer if I just mass release every week?
nothing like I expected the confusion in chapter 1 carries on to 2 it's just so confusing apparently penny and the mc are in a relationship,chapter 2 is where you find out but in chapter 1 it seems like he's a complete stranger read it to find out I made it to chapter 3 before I couldn't read anymore
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
give me the souce man... you are relying to much on GPT... try small if you are really intrested in writing... write some new dialogues if you can for the scence than have all be altered by GPT... but please the souce
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time now keep read and add a review on this novel👹 Ctto to the author, im just translating this cuz mtl sucks and is giving me headaches, if yall have mtl’s yall want me to translate and fix just reply to this review
Just to clarify, the mtl is super confusing and would make your nose bleed from its sheer logic. I saw potential in it so I re-edited the whole thing except its plot, I added the majority of the dialogue for the characters as the mtl has barely any lines for them.
just stop with the gay references. it was funny once. now it is just bad and it doesn't even have a real plot relevance. I ended up dropping it for that reason. besides the annoying gay jokes it was pretty good.to clarify. I support lgbtq. love who you want to love.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I won't lie.....I don't really understand the story......everything is just mixed together like a concoction.....
author, God willing you will return to the top, don't give up on this great story. Take my review and power stones, I'm here everyday don't let it fall!!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Adorei a historia e como os varios filmes/series se envolven uma com a outra e adorei que mesmo ganhanro habilidades dos personagens o MC não virou um deus invencivel e portanto semdo ben equilibrado.
Olha não vou mentir o inicio é interessante/ruim e fica assim por algumas dezenas de capítulos o ponto alto da história e quando Gisele entra, aí começamos a ver uma história muito mais coesa, tenho a curiosidade de saber como vai trabalhar o lance de Velozes e Furiosos sendo que teoricamente eles estão livre da Justiça. Enfim, não esperava nada da história e por enquanto estou muito entusiasmado, fico um pouco preocupado de seguir afundo a MTL(não sei se ele vai seguir) acho que ele poderia mudar pequenas coisas porque todos nós conhecemos os problemas... Além disso, espero que seja um desenvolvimento Harém, pelo meu gosto pessoal. Por fim, é uma leitura bastante divertida sem seguir os roteiros em si, eu recomendo muito pelo menos até o capítulo 49 que é ate aonde estou fazendo esse resumo, mais para frente posto um outro resumo sobre o rumo que a história está levando
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's a great book with constant releases, and good grammar. I would definitely recommend it for a chill read
Awesome 👌 love it. Does anyone have the mtl? I wanna read ahead 🫡 . Thanks for any replies. Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl Please 🙏 link mtl
Its pretty good keep up the great work....................................................................................................................
Ok, so starting off with the writing quality, it's not great but passable. The author doesn't seem to have a deep understanding and add way too many characters that he sometimes what character he already introduced(Penny). He also use some chatGPT to write some part show the limit of creativity. Story development is so confusing since you can't tell where this is going. It seems the mc only try to befriend way too many people trying to gain skill, which make his friendship dirt cheap and an insult to other characters. He also lacks personality, just trying to match the other characters to gain friendship and try to keep the the plot as is despite being an SI. Character design is pretty good, so tired of skinny good looking and somehow super strong mc. However, the mc so far is only showing his body but haven't really show any of the last life power being a street gangster, I believe. The world background is a mess since the author try to introduce way too much. I mean FAF, Sheldon, and John Wick are fine, but then there are Garfield? Marvel? Overall a passable novel for fun at best, but nothing memorable or special.
escribo esto en el capitulo 17 me tiene enganchado, si tuviera dinero le pagaría al escritor para que sacara 20 capítulos por día pero soy pobre ya veremos como va aunque si recomiendo al autor que cuando meta personajes de películas coloque el nombre de la película
okay that's very funny, but not for everyone. mc has such thick skin that you feel ashamed for what he did. especially when Sheldon said he wanted to stand aside and pull his pants down and be friends hahahaha. this looks like sexual harassment
I'll try updating 3 chapters a day folks, 4 if in a good mood, but at least once a day. Currently doing this as I'm bored af. Would yall prefer if I just mass release every week?
nothing like I expected the confusion in chapter 1 carries on to 2 it's just so confusing apparently penny and the mc are in a relationship,chapter 2 is where you find out but in chapter 1 it seems like he's a complete stranger read it to find out I made it to chapter 3 before I couldn't read anymore
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ give me the souce man... you are relying to much on GPT... try small if you are really intrested in writing... write some new dialogues if you can for the scence than have all be altered by GPT... but please the souce
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time now keep read and add a review on this novel👹 Ctto to the author, im just translating this cuz mtl sucks and is giving me headaches, if yall have mtl’s yall want me to translate and fix just reply to this review