5รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Overall it's great, The protagonist is strong but at the beginning he's still arrogant, but I understand that he doesn't have the Canon memories after all, I'm looking forward to more.
Good story so far, the only problem's updating of chapter(s), it would be favourable to readers if it's one or two chapter a day, y'know everybody want to read a good story(fanfic) with good updating stability.
The story is not bad, I would say that it is above average, but it has a lot of room for improvement, it would be better if it focused more on the mc, the other parallel stories that it tells are things that are known without the need to tell them again, like the fight from roshy and piccolo.
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I REALLY CAN'T READ THIS. What I mean by that, the grammar is ok great even it's just the plot or storyline I can't find myself to push through reading. So a wast of time reading this.
Overall it's great, The protagonist is strong but at the beginning he's still arrogant, but I understand that he doesn't have the Canon memories after all, I'm looking forward to more.
Good story so far, the only problem's updating of chapter(s), it would be favourable to readers if it's one or two chapter a day, y'know everybody want to read a good story(fanfic) with good updating stability.
The story is not bad, I would say that it is above average, but it has a lot of room for improvement, it would be better if it focused more on the mc, the other parallel stories that it tells are things that are known without the need to tell them again, like the fight from roshy and piccolo.
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I REALLY CAN'T READ THIS. What I mean by that, the grammar is ok great even it's just the plot or storyline I can't find myself to push through reading. So a wast of time reading this.