54รีวิว
4.67
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Ótima história com um bom enredo👌🏽. Mas uma sugestão minha e colocar uma habilidade de longo alcance, já que as bandagens não são armas tão boas e a kagune não é uma ukaku. Eu gosto muito de pistoleiros com magia como o personagem Stryfe de "Darksiders", mas é só uma sugestão para um possível poder futuro 👍🏽❤️
Aside from a few grammatical errors here and there, I got nothing to complain about that would affect the rating of this story 👍 Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
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This novel perfectly shows how to write fanfiction. The author takes a familiar character and throws him through a metaporical meat grinder to see what happens. Peter here is not your friendly neighborhood Spider-Man. He's a man on a mission. What's scarier: he's a smart man on a mission. I also like the path the author chose with Gwen. So far, we've only been told about their relationship, but I'm looking forward to when they finally collide.
Awesome fanfic, craving for some spider themed fanfic after the recent spider man movie, so thx!
The second story i read about Peter Parker from Gwen's univers and to day the least I'm not disappointed and
To be honest the only bad thing about this is the lack of more chapters. I hope that gwen and peter don't fix their relationship, she doesn't deserve it. Peath on top
There is a huge issue here and I have to want all of you about it... There's not enough chapters! This book is perfect I can see his slow transformation into becoming a true psychopath someone abandoned by everybody
thus us extremely fun read and u didn't expect there to be a system that has multiverse characteristics as well as the main character being the Peter Parker from spider Gwen in spider verse
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Muy buen capitulo, espero realmente el reencuentro con Gwen y MJ pero cual seria el interés amoroso? o sería sin interés amoroso? O tal vez como en los cómics y sería sin ninguna relación sería pero con muchos casi algo? También la confrontación entre la identidad secreta de peter y la mujer araña Te dejo mi piedra, estoy esperando el siguiente capitulo 👍👏👏
keep going ma man, you are doing great. just keep going. it will become great story if you just keep going dfd dfdfd fdfd fdf dfdf fdfd dfdf ddfd
Realmente un muy buen desarrollo interno del personaje que es Peter del universo de Spider Gwen realmente encaja con el tipo de vida que lleva el hombre araña en los cómics pero con una perspectiva diferente
So good. Got hooked on the first chapter with the abilities but the plot as well is on point so far. Really hope the author doesn't drop this as I am fully invested in this story now. The concept and idea around it is unique enough to be fresh. Going by the summary and picture I honestly thought the alien that binds to him was venom lol. Nope it is not at all venom. Its in fact so much more interesting.... So if your in the comments wondering if you should try it then u should. Loving this so far keep it up author !!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This is an interesting and well-written story with a non-standard plot and an excellent live Parker in spyder-verse. The idea of death is also good, the inner lover of yandere rejoices (although little else is known). That's all about history so far. the length of the chapters pleases, I will wait for new chapters.
Nice Spiderman fic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
man i am intrigued. for now it is one of the best spiderman fanfics. waiting for more chapters
Massive development in a short time, I think it has an intriguing plot. Peter has shown growth not found in a most if any Spider-Man fanfictions. I approve 👌
I like the route peter is taking. It hooked me right away watch his struggle. It has also made me emotional seeing mc struggle. The plot is good and a bit different from other fanfics. The development of peter is worth to watch.
Ótima história com um bom enredo👌🏽. Mas uma sugestão minha e colocar uma habilidade de longo alcance, já que as bandagens não são armas tão boas e a kagune não é uma ukaku. Eu gosto muito de pistoleiros com magia como o personagem Stryfe de "Darksiders", mas é só uma sugestão para um possível poder futuro 👍🏽❤️
Aside from a few grammatical errors here and there, I got nothing to complain about that would affect the rating of this story 👍 Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
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This novel perfectly shows how to write fanfiction. The author takes a familiar character and throws him through a metaporical meat grinder to see what happens. Peter here is not your friendly neighborhood Spider-Man. He's a man on a mission. What's scarier: he's a smart man on a mission. I also like the path the author chose with Gwen. So far, we've only been told about their relationship, but I'm looking forward to when they finally collide.
Awesome fanfic, craving for some spider themed fanfic after the recent spider man movie, so thx!
The second story i read about Peter Parker from Gwen's univers and to day the least I'm not disappointed and
To be honest the only bad thing about this is the lack of more chapters. I hope that gwen and peter don't fix their relationship, she doesn't deserve it. Peath on top
There is a huge issue here and I have to want all of you about it... There's not enough chapters! This book is perfect I can see his slow transformation into becoming a true psychopath someone abandoned by everybody
thus us extremely fun read and u didn't expect there to be a system that has multiverse characteristics as well as the main character being the Peter Parker from spider Gwen in spider verse
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Muy buen capitulo, espero realmente el reencuentro con Gwen y MJ pero cual seria el interés amoroso? o sería sin interés amoroso? O tal vez como en los cómics y sería sin ninguna relación sería pero con muchos casi algo? También la confrontación entre la identidad secreta de peter y la mujer araña Te dejo mi piedra, estoy esperando el siguiente capitulo 👍👏👏
keep going ma man, you are doing great. just keep going. it will become great story if you just keep going dfd dfdfd fdfd fdf dfdf fdfd dfdf ddfd
Realmente un muy buen desarrollo interno del personaje que es Peter del universo de Spider Gwen realmente encaja con el tipo de vida que lleva el hombre araña en los cómics pero con una perspectiva diferente
So good. Got hooked on the first chapter with the abilities but the plot as well is on point so far. Really hope the author doesn't drop this as I am fully invested in this story now. The concept and idea around it is unique enough to be fresh. Going by the summary and picture I honestly thought the alien that binds to him was venom lol. Nope it is not at all venom. Its in fact so much more interesting.... So if your in the comments wondering if you should try it then u should. Loving this so far keep it up author !!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is an interesting and well-written story with a non-standard plot and an excellent live Parker in spyder-verse. The idea of death is also good, the inner lover of yandere rejoices (although little else is known). That's all about history so far. the length of the chapters pleases, I will wait for new chapters.
Nice Spiderman fic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
man i am intrigued. for now it is one of the best spiderman fanfics. waiting for more chapters
Massive development in a short time, I think it has an intriguing plot. Peter has shown growth not found in a most if any Spider-Man fanfictions. I approve 👌
I like the route peter is taking. It hooked me right away watch his struggle. It has also made me emotional seeing mc struggle. The plot is good and a bit different from other fanfics. The development of peter is worth to watch.
Love every aspect of the story so far, please more chapters!!!!