8รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Second best HxH ffc and that's only because the other one ended, but this one may become the first after he explores the Dark Continent. I still can't believe that it has so little views and reviews.
The story is interesting. set in the world of hunter hunter in a city that we as readers don't know much about. This creates an interesting situation and leaves a lot of potential for the story. Personally I think that this story could be great but I find it quite hard to read as from the very start the author repeatedly describes the mc as kingly. You might think that eventually the author will stop with describing him as kingly. However you are wrong. The author repeatedly tries to enforce the idea that the mc is kingly and has the charisma of a king. This quickly becomes annoying. Additionally the author uses the same couple of adjectives to describe the characters. However if you ignore this the story is actually quite good and in the future could be very great and interesting.
I'm going to try out this book because Meruem has always been my favorite character in H×H. Let me ask you, hope he'll be like the real Meruem? powerful and all that? Hope you won't make the Mc stupid? Remember Meruem stopped killing humans, right? there's a lot to ask but let me stop here and what about the girl who changed him? ( I've forgotten her name) I hope you'll add her, I wish for a relationship between them because of the way they died together in the anime...
It's a guess, but I think the MC's name "Haruto" plays a lot into the fact that this fanfic doesn't have many reviews, people just read the synopsis ans drop. It's understandable, a name like "Haruto" really makes people cringe.
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Second best HxH ffc and that's only because the other one ended, but this one may become the first after he explores the Dark Continent. I still can't believe that it has so little views and reviews.
The story is interesting. set in the world of hunter hunter in a city that we as readers don't know much about. This creates an interesting situation and leaves a lot of potential for the story. Personally I think that this story could be great but I find it quite hard to read as from the very start the author repeatedly describes the mc as kingly. You might think that eventually the author will stop with describing him as kingly. However you are wrong. The author repeatedly tries to enforce the idea that the mc is kingly and has the charisma of a king. This quickly becomes annoying. Additionally the author uses the same couple of adjectives to describe the characters. However if you ignore this the story is actually quite good and in the future could be very great and interesting.
I'm going to try out this book because Meruem has always been my favorite character in H×H. Let me ask you, hope he'll be like the real Meruem? powerful and all that? Hope you won't make the Mc stupid? Remember Meruem stopped killing humans, right? there's a lot to ask but let me stop here and what about the girl who changed him? ( I've forgotten her name) I hope you'll add her, I wish for a relationship between them because of the way they died together in the anime...
It's a guess, but I think the MC's name "Haruto" plays a lot into the fact that this fanfic doesn't have many reviews, people just read the synopsis ans drop. It's understandable, a name like "Haruto" really makes people cringe.