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I’m currantly at chapter 33 and the story is pretty great so far It’s a bit dark but the story telling and character development so far is ok not the best but I do recommend reading the story so I’m not going to spoil anything for everyone who wants to read but I give this story a 7 out of 5 burgers
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I loved it!!!! there were somethings that were inconsistent like crocus joining way before god valley but it did not affect the storyline or developement at all there were tons of facinating concepts like people able to talk to their supreme grade sword (like a zanpaktou) and the way rocks is increasing in strenght the pacing till now is great and whitebeard relation with his crew. one last thing the one thing i loved about this novel ..............sike loved every part of it
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"currant" eh?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I've read a lot of books on this app and honestly this is a nice change of pace from the usual harem/System/reincarnation stories, So yeah keep up the good work
I say that a lot of books are good and what not, yet so far this is honestly a good book I do recommend this due to it being an entertaining slow-paced book so check it out. And....
pretty good, but when his sword was commissioned the blacksmith asked "what type of sword do you use." MC said "wakizashi because it matches my size." make sense so far, but the blacksmith made a wakizashi over a few years(i think) when it would make sense for the MC to be using a katana to match his size. dude made a supreme grade sword even though it would make sense for the MC to not use that type of sword anymore. this just ruined it for me along with spelling and grammar mistakes as well as you swapping " and ' making it 'talking' and "thoughts"
I’m currantly at chapter 33 and the story is pretty great so far It’s a bit dark but the story telling and character development so far is ok not the best but I do recommend reading the story so I’m not going to spoil anything for everyone who wants to read but I give this story a 7 out of 5 burgers
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I loved it!!!! there were somethings that were inconsistent like crocus joining way before god valley but it did not affect the storyline or developement at all there were tons of facinating concepts like people able to talk to their supreme grade sword (like a zanpaktou) and the way rocks is increasing in strenght the pacing till now is great and whitebeard relation with his crew. one last thing the one thing i loved about this novel ..............sike loved every part of it
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ "currant" eh?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I've read a lot of books on this app and honestly this is a nice change of pace from the usual harem/System/reincarnation stories, So yeah keep up the good work
I say that a lot of books are good and what not, yet so far this is honestly a good book I do recommend this due to it being an entertaining slow-paced book so check it out. And....
pretty good, but when his sword was commissioned the blacksmith asked "what type of sword do you use." MC said "wakizashi because it matches my size." make sense so far, but the blacksmith made a wakizashi over a few years(i think) when it would make sense for the MC to be using a katana to match his size. dude made a supreme grade sword even though it would make sense for the MC to not use that type of sword anymore. this just ruined it for me along with spelling and grammar mistakes as well as you swapping " and ' making it 'talking' and "thoughts"