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Johnny is a young man who has continually struggled in life. Nothing seems to go his way, as his mother died a few years ago, leaving him with no one to call family. He has since been working a dead-end gas station job and just a few days ago, got fired.
He now stands in his apartment, holding a rope in his hands.
‘What is the point? No one loves me, I’m still a virgin at 21, and I can’t even hold a damn job.’ He thought miserably.
Just as he was about to do something he might regret; he heard an audible ding before a pink and blue screen appeared in front of him.
[Congratulations! You have been selected by the universe to be the beta tester of our new program called: Common Sense Manipulation System! You have been chosen because of your miserable life and virgin status! But do not worry young man, with this system you can finally become someone worth a damn! Fame! Money! Beautiful women! The possibilities are endless!]
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Every Character is above the age of 18!
NO YURI! NO NTR!
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ของขวัญ
-- ได้รับของขวัญแล้ว สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
10รีวิว
4.12
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Hey everyone! Author here. I have dropped this novel and have no intention of ever picking it back up. Sorry if you enjoyed it, I just can't bring myself to write it anymore. I understand it was doing really well and could have probably made me some money, but I just couldn't bring myself to continue writing something I didn't enjoy writing. Thank you all for your support and I wish you all the best.
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My interest is peaked. Not many can do a mind control story well. Great job with both the story and the character. Can't wait to see how you deal with the power creep.
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its a really good novel most of the novel like this are trash but this one is pretty good and can't wait for more just hoping that author releases more chapters and does not drop it.
So has this been dropped? Either way good novel. Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!Word count!
จำนวน 1
- 1 Chapter 1 Common Sense 1 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 System Details 1 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 Quest 1 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 Coffee Date 1 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 First Org*sm 1 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 100 Sit-Ups, 100 Push Ups, 100 Squats, and a 10 Kilometer run! 1 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 Instructor Johnny 1 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 Unexpected, But Welcome Development 1 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 Movie and Pajamas 1 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 Full Service Blowjob 1 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11 Operation Virginity Loss 1 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12 Quest Complete 1 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13 Instructor Johnny Returns! 1 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14 M is for, MILF?! 1 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15 Gluteus Maximus 1 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16 Finger Blaster 1 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17 Girlfriend? 1 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18 Deal 1 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19 Cure 1 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20 Bathhouse 1 years ago
- 21 Chapter 21 Harem Creation 1 years ago
- 22 Chapter 22 Pursuit of Pleasure 1 years ago
- 23 Chapter 23 Melissa’s Metamorphosis. (Part 1) 1 years ago
- 24 Chapter 24 Melissa’s Metamorphosis (Part 2) 1 years ago
- 25 Chapter 25 Melissa’s Metamorphosis (Part 3) 1 years ago
- 26 Chapter 26 Melissa’s Metamorphosis (Part 4) 1 years ago
- 27 Chapter 27 Melissa’s Metamorphosis Complete! 1 years ago
- 28 Chapter 28 Double Pool Date 1 years ago
- 29 Chapter 29 Sunscreen 1 years ago
- 30 Chapter 30 BAM 1 years ago
- 31 Chapter 31 Fun in the pool 1 years ago
- 32 Chapter 32 Melissa the cuck 1 years ago
- 33 Chapter 33 A Higher Plane 1 years ago
- 34 Chapter 34 So Much! 1 years ago
- 35 Chapter 35 Titties… 1 years ago
- 36 Chapter 36 Fun in the Bum 1 years ago
- 37 Chapter 37 Son? 1 years ago
- 38 Chapter 38 Move In? 1 years ago
- 39 Chapter 39 Motherly Bathing 1 years ago
- 40 Chapter 40 Questions 1 years ago
- 41 Chapter 41 Reflection 1 years ago
- 42 Chapter 42 Dream 1 years ago
- 43 Chapter 43 Fate 1 years ago
- 44 Chapter 44 Priorities 1 years ago
- 45 Chapter 45 Janet's Fall From Grace (Part 1) 1 years ago
- 46 Chapter 46 Janet's Fall From Grace (Part 2) 1 years ago
- 47 Chapter 47 Janet's Fall From Grace (Part 3) 1 years ago
- 48 Chapter 48 A Worrisome Development 1 years ago
- 49 Chapter 49 What Now? 1 years ago
- 50 Chapter 50 Numbers 1 years ago
- 51 Chapter 51 Harem House Plans 1 years ago
- 52 Chapter 52 Dig Bick 1 years ago
- 53 Chapter 53 Worthy to Wield the Might of a Penis 12 months ago
- 54 Chapter 54 Unga Bunga 12 months ago
- 55 Chapter 55 Milkies 12 months ago
- 56 Chapter 56 Move In 12 months ago
- 57 Chapter 57 Self-Control 12 months ago
- 58 Chapter 58 Unleashing The Monster 12 months ago
I've read a lot of these types of novels, most of them are garbage or pure h*rny bait with subpar scenes and plot directions. But this one right here? an honest to goodness 10 out of 10. great story flow, I'm no grammar expert but it's easy to read and understand. The concept is being done in a unique way which I very much love and can't wait to see more. And the "plot" and hype up to the "plot" are phenomenal. I don't write reviews really but I believe this is my first 10/10 Amazing job author👍👍👍👍