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A man died at the age of 26 due to cancer. He was filled with regret as he had not done anything substantial in his life. It was just boring. He wished he would get a chance to reincarnate and he did get a chance to reincarnate in the Marvel world. At first he was terrified but then he became excited as though about a thrilling life in the Marvel world.

God gave him two template system of two characters from different worlds -Urahara Kisuke from bleach and Trafalgar Law from the world of one piece.


This began the journey of Law Cromwell as the Death Surgeon in the Marvel universe.




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tt_g
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Honestly disappointed. Law is one of my favorite characters, but some parts seem straight out of chatgpt. I’m guessing the author is close to 12 years old since he has a Pokémon as his username. That would explain the writing quality. Might be a personal preference, but I hate it when authors speedrun the reincarnation. I’d rather you take it slow and explain everything or don’t do the whole reincarnation with wishes at all. I hate it when it’s somewhere in the middle when they rush through the wishes. As long as you say what wishes the mc got, we can just search it up. The whole talking to god thing is just a waste of time. Also the mc isn’t really developed well. It’s not that I want him to be a lone wolf or smth but you should develope the mc first before introducing new characters. I’ve read all the current chapters so far and the mc’s personality still screams generic. That’s one of the problems with the talking to god trope I think, cause usually you develop your mc in the first few chapters but you can’t do that here cause he’s talking to god.

1yr
ดู 9 การตอบกลับ
Morning_Fragrance

If you want to die from cringe, this is your poison. Remember kids, bullying is bad and you should go out of your way to possibly create issues for yourself in order to help strangers you'll only see occasionally.

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1yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Apex_Predator_420

Template systems are pathetic and Op-OP-fruit abilities do not have stupid restrictions also only incompetent authors nerfs his own MC. Like getting rid of spiritual pressure

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1yr
ดู 26 การตอบกลับ
Angelixion

Devil fruit's are associated with the soul, its canon, you got rid of the spiritual pressure without research. Additionaly a lot of paragraphs you write start with "I (something)". You need to stop before making it public and to read your own chapters in one go to see the flow, and to start writing with realism and inmersion in mind, for the characters, that is real life for them. If a bully comes to hit me, and suddenly a guy full of tattoos comes and hits him, that does not make it a good guy, it just makes two bad guys in that moment, nobody will become "inspired" or "change a little" because of "something" that persons says, and more ridiculous, you think that in a fight in a highschool, the students in the hallway will not be screaming allowing the MC to "monologue" and listen, teachers will not meddle, parents will not get involved and things like that. Absurd.

1yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Mamamesta

Horrible and boring character even for a fanfic[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
The_Best_3329

Fun read then came the Virus of a d driven mc to create a harem so I’m out.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Crackers_Syndrome

This story just keeps getting worse and worse as time passes.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sebastiean

It was fine until he made the MC stupid and not funny rip off of the bad Deadpool comics it’s honestly disappointing because the story was doing fine but the MC’s personality ruins it like if he was actually funny it’d be fine but it’s like he’s trying too hard

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
PhoenixNT

Um bom livro ATE AGORA. MAS EU ESPERO QUE NAO TENHA HAREM NESSA HISTORIA...Mas até agora esta top [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Zed1_Eren_

when i started reading it it's first chapter was good and 2nd was a little bad but it was of but after it it becomes a mess and after the time skip yeah it becomes total trash saying I Fear shield and not killing anyone in the entire time skip and saying i became happy after saying a person and using his power for such trifle things u know even Avengers did not interfere in those trifle things in movies who not even had about half of power of law or urahara and here our mc doing such meaningless things it's like author just wants to write something even if it's just trash and yeah power levels is a mess so don't read it it's total trash here is an illogical character living in an illusion of goody goody thing with op power so it's trash

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Cml1022
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So I just want to say I like the story. It’s still really early so some “smoothing out” is needed in my opinion. I have already commented on some things in the story itself. I’m doing this not to bash the story/author I really do like the premise and think the idea is super cool. I just don’t want the author to get bashed for dumb and relatively minor things because the story is so new and only has a few chapters. I really hope the author takes any criticism I have as constructive because I think this could be successful and I don’t want it to be one of the 100s of dropped stories that could’ve been awesome.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
OblivionStar

As of chapter 5, this looks like a promising story. Mc has, what I would consider, a realistic personality, not a knight in shining armor nor does he have the pride of manhua mc. Can’t wait to see how this story progresses.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
livingforthetea

It doesn't feel like a novel. It's like you're talking to your chaotic friend who recounts his day."I eat this for breakfastafter that, I brush my teethI go to schoolI stop a bully and make left a cringe worthy remark only an absolute weeb can sayI go to classI think about the worldI listen to lectures. "The novel literally goes like that, with no description of the surroundings, feelings, random timeskip, etc. Great idea, terrible, terrible execution.

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
AskAssassin

Good Job Brother Keep Up The Good Work. . . .

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Kukukuku

Its a good book[img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
NPC_No_7

Too much potential ruined by stupidity. The mc actually believed that there was no mutant after one google session. Also He is a complete noob at combat. He got the ability but had no equivalent mindset . He thinks that Fighting while holding back would train you to fight stronhger opponent. Its like fighting a mid boss with max lvl + Full build gear and thinking it will him fight ths last boss.

9mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 It have a great plot/story and great translate/english.. I like MC/Law have Urahara and Law templete, that two is one of the smartest people in their own world (Bleach and One Piece).. So, don't that make MC soooo smart with their combined brains?? I think it was overkill.. Just one of templete is already so good (either Urahara or Law is have so great power).. I like how he recruit Emma Frost and Gambit, they're one of my favorites Mutant.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story.. Keep up the great work author sama 😁👍😍😍😍

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
UNholy
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Really like where you are going but chapters are to short it's like just scroll once and the chapter is finished. Appreciate the work Author

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MrMime24

Really liked the idea of the story. Also I don't think it's cringe to stand up to your bullies. MC did the right thing and said the right thing. It might sound cringe but it's the truth that he said. Don't listen to others speaking ill about it.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sergio_Navarrete

Pretty good start. Keep it up author!

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

จำนวน 1

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: Prologue [Edited] 1 years ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: New Life 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: School 1 years ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4:Peter Parker and Gwen Stacy [Edited] 1 years ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: It's Hero time 1 years ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Black Mask 1 years ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: Time Skip and Progress 1 years ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8: Progress and Hell's kitchen 1 years ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9: The Death Surgeon 1 years ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Collapse of the German Gang 1 years ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: Shocking Discovery 1 years ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12: First Encounter with Mutants 1 years ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: Dilemma 1 years ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14: Hydra's Reaction 1 years ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: Mutants 1 years ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: Candidates for the Team 1 years ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: Recruiting Emma Frost 1 years ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: Meeting Remy LeBeau 1 years ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: Spar with Gambit 1 years ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: The Surgeon's Sanctuary 1 years ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: Charles Xavier 1 years ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: Pranking the Mutants 1 years ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: Joining the team 1 years ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: Death Surgeon Vs Hellfire club (1) 1 years ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: Death Surgeon Vs Hellfire club (2) 1 years ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: The Beginning 1 years ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27:Nick Fury. 1 years ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: First Job(1) 1 years ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29:First Job (2) 1 years ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: Shikai 1 years ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31:Facebook 1 years ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: Emma and Gambit (1) 1 years ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33: Emma and Gambit (2) 1 years ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: Plan to deal with Hydra 1 years ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: Mutant Gigais? 1 years ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Saving Uncle Ben 1 years ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37: Second Mission 1 years ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38: Mission by Mystique 1 years ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39: Mission Overview 1 years ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40: Fighting the Military (1) 1 years ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41: Fighting the military (2) 1 years ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42: First Step Towards Robot Army 1 years ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43: Time to learn Magic 1 years ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44: Kamar Taj 1 years ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45: Ancient One 1 years ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46: Chat with Ancient One 1 years ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47: Battle with Ancient One (1) 1 years ago
  48. 48
    Chapter 48: Battle with Ancient One (2) 1 years ago
  49. 49
    Chapter 49: Learning Magic (1) 1 years ago
  50. 50
    Chapter 50: Learning Magic (2) 1 years ago
  51. 51
    Chapter 51: Visiting the Library 1 years ago
  52. 52
    Chapter 52: Runes 1 years ago
  53. 53
    Chapter 53: Chances of Success 1 years ago
  54. 54
    Chapter 54: Bargaining with Dormammu (1) 1 years ago
  55. 55
    Chapter 55: The Deal 1 years ago
  56. 56
    Chapter 56: Completing the deal 1 years ago
  57. 57
    Chapter 57: Back Home 1 years ago
  58. 58
    Chapter 58: Asking Gwen out 1 years ago
  59. 59
    Chapter 59: Date 1 years ago
  60. 60
    Chapter 60: Aquiring Vibranium 1 years ago
  61. 61
    Chapter 61: The Six Sentinels 1 years ago
  62. 62
    Chapter 62: Brain Surgery 1 years ago
  63. 63
    Chapter 63: Teaching Scott a Lesson 1 years ago
  64. 64
    Chapter 64: Sentinels In Action 1 years ago
  65. 65
    Alright lets have some polls 11 months ago
  66. 66
    Chapter 65: End of Stryker 11 months ago
  67. 67
    Chapter 66:Hydra's Struggles 10 months ago
  68. 68
    Chapter 67: Maximoff Siblings 9 months ago
  69. 69
    Chapter 68: Maximoff Siblings (2) 9 months ago
  70. 70
    Chapter 69: Unexpected Mission 9 months ago
  71. 71
    Chapter 70: Nick Fury meets the Surgeon 9 months ago
  72. 72
    Chapter 71: Fury's Offer 9 months ago
  73. 73
    Chapter 72: Apocalypse 9 months ago
  74. 74
    Chapter 73: Law frustrates Apocalypse 9 months ago
  75. 75
    Chapter 74: Law's Army Vs Apocalypse's Army (1) 9 months ago
  76. 76
    Chapter 75: Law's Army Vs Apocalypse's Army (2) 9 months ago
  77. 77
    Chapter 76: Law Vs Apocalypse (1) 8 months ago
  78. 78
    Chapter 77: Law Vs Apocalypse (2) 8 months ago
  79. 79
    Chapter 78: Death of Magneto (1) 8 months ago
  80. 80
    Chapter 79: Death of Magneto (2) 8 months ago
  81. 81
    Chapter 80: Aftermath (1) 8 months ago
  82. 82
    Chapter 81: Aftermath (2) 8 months ago
  83. 83
    Chapter 82: Aftermath (3) 7 months ago
  84. 84
    Chapter 83: Mystique joins the team (1) 7 months ago
  85. 85
    Chapter 84: Mystique joins the team (2) 7 months ago
  86. 86
    Chapter 85: Mystique and Law (1) 7 months ago
  87. 87
    Chapter 86: Mystique and Law (2) 6 months ago
  88. 88
    Chapter 87: Mystique and Law (3) 3 months ago
  89. 89
    Chapter 88: Mystique and Law (4) 3 months ago
  90. 90
    Chapter 89: Mystique and Law (5) R-18 3 months ago
  91. 91
    Chapter 90: Mystique and Law (6) R-18 3 months ago
  92. 92
    Chapter 91: Keeping Secrets 3 months ago
  93. 93
    Chapter 92: Combining Techniques 3 months ago
  94. 94
    Chapter 93: Death Surgeon meets Deadpool 3 months ago
  95. 95
    Chapter 94: Ambush 3 months ago
  96. 96
    Chapter 95: Call for help 3 months ago
  97. 97
    Chapter 96: An unlikely alliance 2 months ago
  98. 98
    Chapter 97: Creating Chaos 1 months ago
  99. 99
    Chapter 98: Clash of the 12 (Part 1) 1 months ago
  100. 100
    Chapter 99: Clash of the 12(Part 2) 1 months ago
  101. 101
    Chapter 100: Fanboy 1 months ago
  102. 102
    Chapter 101: What's happening in SHIELD? 1 months ago
  103. 103
    Chapter 102: Trip to Asgard 1 months ago
  104. 104
    Chapter 103: The Uninvited Visitors 28 days ago
  105. 105
    Chapter 104: Oopsie Moment 27 days ago
  106. 106
    Chapter 105: When Loki got a taste of his own medicine! 26 days ago
  107. 107
    Chapter 106: Family Drama in Asgard 23 days ago
  108. 108
    Chapter 107: When Thunder Meets Sarcasm 20 days ago
  109. 109
    Chapter 108: Getting a Battleship 16 days ago
  110. 110
    Chapter 109:The Great Space Adventure Begins... Sort Of 3 days ago

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