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i like the story, i hope not dropped [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
First impression is decent story minus the bad grammar at times, its enjoyable. Downside to some and me is adding in characters from other anime near the start. Its not that its horrible idea just the way it was done is frankly bad. Really random kids somehow all female, all anime characters? Honestly, to me made no sense might as well say theyre AUs with certain changes as well. Of course might change my mind later if implemented well in story later but still could have being done different way but as is was cringe moment.
Genshin Impact Story? Auto-Added it to Library. Here 5 Star, but for now let read it first and see how it goes. ..............................
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thought it's far from perfect, that is to be expected from a new author, especially from the beginning chapters, but that doesn't mean it's bad, I love when newly author implement their wild ideas that most won't even try to pull off, like introducing and raising people at the start, I've never seen anybody did that, even if it's hard to read for the beginining chapters that is to be expected, anyway keep up the good work author and keep up those wild ideas
I like it very much, giving him an actual background in teyvat rather than just saying he appeared out of nowhere.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Everything is up to a good understandable level, Only thing i would want is a bit better grammar but aside from that i am excited for more chapters.
An interesting setting,i would reaaly like to see it goes,keep up the good work.
I'm looking forward to the new updated version though I kinda wish the original chaps were still up to read. This is one of the better Genshin Fics I've read with how to expands the universe by exploring times and areas that most authors skip over. I was honestly getting ready for it to be another OP protag isekai sort of fanfiction, but it was surprisingly well paced and balanced all things considered. Sure the MC started off way more powerful than The Traveler but that's pretty par the course for most fanfics here. The time travel was a nice twist too, I especially enjoyed reading how the MC's oldest/youngest children reacted to hearing of the MC's escapades in the past.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ i like the story, i hope not dropped [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
First impression is decent story minus the bad grammar at times, its enjoyable. Downside to some and me is adding in characters from other anime near the start. Its not that its horrible idea just the way it was done is frankly bad. Really random kids somehow all female, all anime characters? Honestly, to me made no sense might as well say theyre AUs with certain changes as well. Of course might change my mind later if implemented well in story later but still could have being done different way but as is was cringe moment.
Genshin Impact Story? Auto-Added it to Library. Here 5 Star, but for now let read it first and see how it goes. ..............................
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thought it's far from perfect, that is to be expected from a new author, especially from the beginning chapters, but that doesn't mean it's bad, I love when newly author implement their wild ideas that most won't even try to pull off, like introducing and raising people at the start, I've never seen anybody did that, even if it's hard to read for the beginining chapters that is to be expected, anyway keep up the good work author and keep up those wild ideas
I like it very much, giving him an actual background in teyvat rather than just saying he appeared out of nowhere.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Everything is up to a good understandable level, Only thing i would want is a bit better grammar but aside from that i am excited for more chapters.
An interesting setting,i would reaaly like to see it goes,keep up the good work.
I'm looking forward to the new updated version though I kinda wish the original chaps were still up to read. This is one of the better Genshin Fics I've read with how to expands the universe by exploring times and areas that most authors skip over. I was honestly getting ready for it to be another OP protag isekai sort of fanfiction, but it was surprisingly well paced and balanced all things considered. Sure the MC started off way more powerful than The Traveler but that's pretty par the course for most fanfics here. The time travel was a nice twist too, I especially enjoyed reading how the MC's oldest/youngest children reacted to hearing of the MC's escapades in the past.
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