Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires

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Over_The_Moon69

Hello everyone! As the author, it's my duty to give this story a top-notch rating of five stars. That's exactly what it deserves, without a doubt. The beginning chapters will lay the groundwork for the story, introducing our main character and his journey. I didn't go into too much detail because it wasn't necessary, but it's still important not to skip them. They give you a clear understanding of the protagonist's powers and how the main focus of the story will unfold. You can look forward to seeing many beloved female characters from fiction who will seek our main character's help and, in return, provide some intimate favors. You probably already have an idea of who the first girl will be, so get ready for some thrilling action in that regard. Approach this story with an open mind, and feel free to ask me any questions you have. I hope you enjoy reading it! And with that, I bid you farewell.

LV 3

Yack6

I guess my expectations were too high, the author overstepped with the MC and the comedy, he originally wanted the exchange to be sexual, later regretting it, also From showing many unnecessary comedy scenes and the personality of the MC is practically panicking, regretting, being dense, submissive and among other negative things, he did not learn anything in the past. More than 1000 years of training, his title of god of war is too big for him At the beginning I was fine believing that I was going to improve and everything but apparently it is not going to change.

LV 2

TheAngels

Before the Tsunade arc the only bad thing about the fanfic was the mc, after the tsunade arc it's just meaningless drama and the mc got worse from 0 to -100, there are pathetic protagonists and then this one.

LV 4

RustyBoi

Nothing great, just a normal śmût story. But i need to say this: I just realized this mc is the literal definition of a simp. “A man who goes above and beyond pleasing women with the hope of receiving sèxûàl favors in return.” Do with that information what you must

LV 3

Hardcore_Reader

I've reached chapter 70, and it feels like the main character in the story hasn't improved much since the beginning or has possibly regressed. I understand that character development can take time, but when will we see real Growth?

LV 13

The_Puffer

Mc is just pathetic. No scum, no pervert, no worst, no evil... Just pure pathetic. The story itself is quite good and makes you want to ready more but the constant stupidity of mc is being reminded to you nearly every chapter. Especially after the tsunade arc.

LV 4

ImamKvothe

japanese mc. Be alone for 8000 years and then become a coward. The character who should go crazy from loneliness is kind to the point of cowardice. If a beautiful woman spits in his face, he says "that wasn't nice". It would have been better to see a MC who went crazy from loneliness and had trust issues because of her previous world. Those who will read it can give it a chance. If you are expecting character development, it seems like it will be extremely slow, let me give you this warning.

LV 15

XxErnestoxX

great start so much potential but in the end ruined by a pathetic mc and plot progression. There is too much focus on cooking and food. The MC somehow can't make up his mind and is constantly depressed. there is zero character development and useless drama. The story only gets worse and worse. Don't expect it to get better.

LV 3

Lordyyy

I've to say, I nearly had a heart attack after reading the first half 😭 For context: this guy was sending me pics when he was making the arts, I though "Wow, I'd tap." But then I read the first chap and halfway through my heart leaped out. Like, what!? Though, thankfully, the Goddess' pics he showed me weren't of... that one. I'd have done something bad then 🙂 Anywho, read this fic!

LV 12

MGSR_Sam

mc is so cowardly that it makes the story unbearable. At least we had lemons before now we don't even get lemons, so reading this fiction became more of a chore

LV 6

Luzrriel

What irritates me most about this! It's how some characters act as if the MC forced them to make the deal and the MC accepted it all. It seems that none of them can understand who has the power and who needs it.

LV 1

Js_Sensei

I suggest that if you are emotional or in a bad mood, never read this novel because it will cause mental or emotional stress. Why do I talk like that because I am alone I'm experiencing it as I write this.

LV 2

ImNet

Before the Tsunade arc the only thing that didn't fit me in the story was the mc, now in the Tsunade arc onwards there is too much bad drama.

LV 13

DiabloRedfox

a plain pathetic beta MC, can't even get angry at him, just makes it disappointing

LV 6

assad1830

I don't know if it's only me or not, but going through what the MC has experienced, I thought he'll be more resilient ( emotionally )

LV 4

Reiya9

This is probably the story with the most pathetic mc I’ve read in a long time. The story has potential but the mc and his cowardly and submissive ways ruins the story majorly. Not to mention there is zero character development. The story is just riddled with problems and excessive drama that the only good quality of the story is the smut. That’s not even mentioning the author who’s in denial that his story isn’t anything but terrible.

LV 2

Testarossas

Honestly, I wanted to enjoy this. I got to chapter 95. The MC is constantly going back and forth with his intention and emotions. At first he gets what he wants, then he broods because he got what he wanted... S*x with women. Then his emotions, *sigh* I just can't... He is 8,000 years old, no matter what you were doing for EIGHT THOUSAND YEARS. You would have some emotional development for crying out loud. I don't care what anyone else says, it's ridiculous that he can't manage his emotions almost AT ALL. Dude has over 100 divinities and is strong af, but can't operate like a functional living being. Honestly, the character development almost felt like it was going backwards.

LV 4

AspiringPedo

It not a bad story as of chapter 89 but the protagonist despite living for over 1000 years is not as mentally stable as…well…as someone who is older than some mountains should be, you could say. Sadly the protagonist is slowly degenerating into a cliche Japanese beta protagonist. Woe is me🤧

LV 1

anonimo_af

Everything is fine, except the MC himself, but that can be resolved with development, right? Not really, it just becomes more frustrating. The rating I wanted would be 3 stars, but I'm going to give it 4 because I liked everything else. If you're going to read it, know that MC's thoughts don't make sense, he's not as paranoid as he should be, he's just pessimistic, and for no reason at all, with so little confidence it's impossible to save the world, so it makes even less sense. The story lost the purpose and the power that was granted to the MC as well since he doesn't want to use it, basically he would have to know new verses and make a harem, but in fact he doesn't do anything and it's the girls who do it, the only one His redeeming feature is being strong, since being kind is something anyone does, that's it, for a beginner you might like it since I doubt you will notice these things. Furthermore, the mc's desire seems undeserved, it's like a protagonist who gets a system that basically only helps him and he keeps complaining about it. (150 chap)