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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
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Your story has potential but it's unreadable due to your poor writing. Get yourself someone who could proofread or edit for you and for sure this story will be a great hit. Hope you take my review as a building criticism rather than a malicious one. Good luck with your future and keep doing you.
Your story has potential but it's unreadable due to your poor writing. Get yourself someone who could proofread or edit for you and for sure this story will be a great hit. Hope you take my review as a building criticism rather than a malicious one. Good luck with your future and keep doing you.