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Loved reading the story so far. It has such a unique and fun story you don’t see on WebNovel often but that makes it more fun to dive in and read. There are endless mysteries and bread crumbs that author has been leaving throughout the story, and his use of 2 MCs is uncommon but done in such a great way we might see people copy this writing style in the future. Must read for anyone looking for a refreshing adventure story littered with mysterious and foreshadowing
Chapter 101 review point & Reader expectations This review comes just before this work goes contracted, and I want to take this opportunity to outline what readers on WebNovel can expect from this novel. If you've read the Snyp and checked the Tags, you'll have a good idea of what to expect when diving into this novel. For new readers, let me provide some additional information. My setup is rather unique. As a previous book author, I've decided to structure my chapters into actual chapters broken into multiple parts. Arcs are set up in chapters like those you would find in a book, but they're broken up with unique influx points to better serve WebNovel readers. I aim to strike a perfect balance between slice-of-life moments and action. If you come across any parts that you feel need more information or clarification, feel free to let me know. As a writer, I'm always striving to improve my work and craft. This novel will showcase readers' ability to handle multiple characters and the challenges they face. Death is always a factor, but it never happens just for the sake of it. One question that many readers have is about the presence of a harem in the novel. While I can't give too much away, I can promise that romance and love will be present and will play a role in the story. Lastly, I want to address the length of this novel. My current goal is for it to be around 700 chapters, equivalent to reading a 5-book story. The first book will conclude at around 150 chapters. If you have any more questions about my novel, please feel free to comment below and let me know.
Author your story is good but please use Quation between the dailouges . Because of it reading your story is difficult .
been reading this book off and on. honestly i have to say i’ve been enjoying the new format. every chapter is 8-10 WN chapters with a special put in the middle that gives us background on the world or other worldly events. it’s popular tag down in other novels i’ve seen in hard covers. the writing has honestly improved so much from chapter 70 and on and it’s nice seeing the Author make improvents. the story is enriching and the pacing is a bit slow but enjoyable. can’t to see how this goes
It's so impressive how you write so much! and your writing quality is really good. I could never have your commitment, haha. I feel like he's going to die idk why. he's too happy.
Diving into this narrative has been a delightful experience. It's unique from the typical WebNovel plots, adding an element of excitement. The author keeps putting hints, keeping the readers on their toes. The dual MC approach is rare but executed brilliantly here.
Uhh, where to start with this review? Well, the quality and everything else is absolutely amazing. Hard to tell that this is the author's first work. I think everything works and the only thing you need to be worried about as a reader is the difference in style between this and the more popular novels. It will take a while to get used to but the payoff is insane!! I haven't read further but I can tell it will be quite an interesting one!
A very good story. The author is wise and his writing is good. i liked it a lot. very rarely i see a mistake. I encourage author to keep writing and posting chaps and readers to read the novel
Only read just three chapters and i can confidently say that this novel had piqued my interest and am curious to see how everything unfolds ❤️ Cant wait to read more
Nice story, although the description you give is much but it didn't kill the flow of the story....
I need to stop reading good books like this. I don't have the fast passes to spare T_T
Finally catching up to the end of the current story where it’s chapter 12 and wow, I just have to say I’ shocked and surprised to have gotten the villains POV of events and so much thought and detail going into him staying low. The fights are still detailed and have improved. I can’t to see how he deals with his inner turmoil of being a Demon inside the MCs body. Overall loving the story at the moment writer and glad I got into this story before you were able to lock. So I give gifts instead.
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This is a very early review, but so far the novel's been really good. The character design and world background are top notch, although i would really like if the pace was a bit faster, but all in all, the story's really interesting.
After reading the first chapter, I didn't think it's a story that I would really understand. But as I continued, it was really interesting, I didn't expect it to be like that but I know there are more to come.Sean seems very lazy and a boring individual but he still got the skills. Plus it's hard to see friends like Arthur who stand up for each and I can say, he played a very important role in the life of Sean. Also love the character Emma, she's seems very though but I believe she still a lovable person. And as for the cat, it's too lazy for my liking, funny though.I know they are going to be a lot of surprises as the story unfolds and I know it will be worth reading. Kudos author, all the best.
This book is already at Pro Standard. Everything was put together flawlessly. From its writing quality, its readability, its story development and characters description and personality. The writing style of the author is completely different from my own but it's not actually a reason for me to not read this. This is high quality work, and its a chance to learn more from it as I enjoy reading this story.
Honestly if there another rating more that 5.0, I would love to give this writer.. his book was interesting, amazing, funny in some aspect, all I can say is wow
The book is very interesting.. and I would put it forward to people on this platform check it out and you will sure find it amazing and useful
Amazing story , I really appreciate the creator for such a great job done, I learnt a lot from the book, thanks so much, keep doing the great job
So here's the anticipated review (lol) Anyway, I read till 70 chapters at the very moment. And here are my takes. As you can see i given this book a 4. 4 star I loved to read it as the grammar was very understandable 5 stars right there. Nothing much to say about the updating stability he is bringing up chapters quick automatically 5 Star there too. Now there are 4 stars in each of the other section such as story development the thing which deducted the point is info dumps and continue pov changes. The story does seems an interesting read, but it need to take a single path. character design yeah 4 here too as author need to put more it, and i also need to read this story futher . and last world building yes 4 too because of the lack of knowing about the world yet.
I'm so excited with the story, just little little change, impressed me more 😁😁 I believe everything is formal keep it up , the writer has really did a great job
So professional, this is something have been looking forward to see just to have more knowledge about it, you really amazing and I'm so glad to see more of your success ahead, keep updating us with new ideas 🥰❣️👋
This is incredible from the author, I love the story, I haven't create Time reading story but I did when I come across this story, thanks so much, I happy to be here reading your story, more knowledge ❣️
After reading the entirety of “chapter 1” (technically 8 chapters in), I saw a lot of potential in what this story could develop into. The writing was excellent, and easy to follow. It also described not only the setting but the characters feelings. The background of the story was well done, and we understand what our characters do for a living. I see that there are 12 CHAPTERS A WEEK! Incredible. Definitely have to read more, save it to your library!!!
The story is so amazing, every chapter has great message to each individual, this is much different from others, you have it all, keep improving, everything is perfect, I love it ♥️
A good start; looking forward to reading more; the pacing is perfect, rich character development, keeping them engrossed from beginning to end. Its thought-provoking themes and evocative prose make it a truly memorable reading experience.
It holds so much potential at one glance of the blurb. The author has kept the elements on rarity and fresh concept that will keep you at the edge of your seats. It's by far a good read.
Like every review I do, I start with readability. This book has nice grammar and rather fluid readability to it, which is a very big plus. There are the occasional prose or grammatical error but in all honesty, they will get lost or won't be even apparent unless you are really looking for them, which you probably won't in a first read. Obviously, another big pro for me is the updated stability. All in all its a great book. Give it a read!
Time for another updated review of my favorite story that I have been writing. I will present the pros and cons of my story. Let's start with the cons of the story so far after writing 60 chapters and 67k words. Cons: 1. The story can be a slow burn as the world is built, and at times it may feel like a slice of life where every character matters, even if they end up dying. While this may not be a con for everyone, it's important to note that the buildup in chapters 2 and 3 could cause some readers to lose interest. However, the pace picks up quickly, usually towards the end of major chapters. 2. Reader preference for multiple main characters: While having two main characters may not be an issue for everyone, it's worth considering that some readers might prefer a singular protagonist. It might be helpful to gauge the preferences of your target audience and ensure that both main characters receive equal development and attention. 3. 3rd and 1st person dialogue: Mixing dialogue styles within the story can create a sense of inconsistency for some readers. While it's not inherently wrong, it's important to ensure a smooth transition between the two and be mindful of reader preferences. 4. Clarifying the harem situation: While you have clarified that there won't be a direct harem, it might be helpful to make this explicitly clear within the story itself. This can help manage reader expectations and avoid potential confusion or disappointment down the line. Pros: 1. Many races of characters matter and affect the story. For instance, the Bear tribe specializes in domain barriers and spirit animals, while humans specialize in combat fighting and elemental attacks. 2. Not the standard weak-to-strong progression: The MC gains power through proper training and learning, and fights are never one-sided stomps but require strategy and planning. 3. Engaging plot: The story's plot is unique and woven in such a way that even 200 chapters in, you will be searching for clues to mysteries left in the early chapters. The goal of this story is to tell an epic tale and the importance of trusting in your group of friends. The story is a reincarnation style so you will learn what happens to the MC after chapter 8 4. Multiple perspectives: Having two main characters and three side leads who occasionally get their own POV slots adds depth to the storytelling. It allows readers to experience different viewpoints and provides a broader understanding of the narrative. 5. Balanced romance: This story will include general romance, but it won't be every female in the story swooning for the MC but a balanced act of feelings and little to no harem action. The MC is no simp and only cares about loved ones and family and will only worry about engaging in a romance with a singular character. - In total, these are my thoughts on my story after 60 chapters, and I will probably do another update at 100 chapters, but I do love feedback and advice to better my story. So I am always open to criticism to improve my work.
An amazing read... truly. I'm not used to reading present tense, but this one was worth exiting my comfort zone for.
Good work author. It’s well done. Although the chapters are pretty long imo like the chapter 1 has multiple parts and such.
I've only read five chapters, but I'll leave this review before continuing. I'm often told that I'm easy to impress, but that's not true, it's just when something is good I like to say it. As an avid reader, I'd already like to thank the author for giving birth to this novel. From the outset, the concept is special (I don't want to spoil anything, but the synopsis says it all). The mix of points of view may seem rather confusing, but the author manages not to lose the reader. As for the universe, I'm still checking it out, but given how well the author describes things, I have nothing to worry about. The characters are rather likeable, I haven't really made friends with any of them yet, but they really do seem "human", which isn't easy to do. Grammar-wise, I'm not an English whiz, but for me it's impeccable. It's with great pleasure that I'm going to follow the adventure of this story. Well, I'll leave you to it. I still have chapters to read 😂👍
Loved reading the story so far. It has such a unique and fun story you don’t see on WebNovel often but that makes it more fun to dive in and read. There are endless mysteries and bread crumbs that author has been leaving throughout the story, and his use of 2 MCs is uncommon but done in such a great way we might see people copy this writing style in the future. Must read for anyone looking for a refreshing adventure story littered with mysterious and foreshadowing
Chapter 101 review point & Reader expectations This review comes just before this work goes contracted, and I want to take this opportunity to outline what readers on WebNovel can expect from this novel. If you've read the Snyp and checked the Tags, you'll have a good idea of what to expect when diving into this novel. For new readers, let me provide some additional information. My setup is rather unique. As a previous book author, I've decided to structure my chapters into actual chapters broken into multiple parts. Arcs are set up in chapters like those you would find in a book, but they're broken up with unique influx points to better serve WebNovel readers. I aim to strike a perfect balance between slice-of-life moments and action. If you come across any parts that you feel need more information or clarification, feel free to let me know. As a writer, I'm always striving to improve my work and craft. This novel will showcase readers' ability to handle multiple characters and the challenges they face. Death is always a factor, but it never happens just for the sake of it. One question that many readers have is about the presence of a harem in the novel. While I can't give too much away, I can promise that romance and love will be present and will play a role in the story. Lastly, I want to address the length of this novel. My current goal is for it to be around 700 chapters, equivalent to reading a 5-book story. The first book will conclude at around 150 chapters. If you have any more questions about my novel, please feel free to comment below and let me know.
Author your story is good but please use Quation between the dailouges . Because of it reading your story is difficult .
been reading this book off and on. honestly i have to say i’ve been enjoying the new format. every chapter is 8-10 WN chapters with a special put in the middle that gives us background on the world or other worldly events. it’s popular tag down in other novels i’ve seen in hard covers. the writing has honestly improved so much from chapter 70 and on and it’s nice seeing the Author make improvents. the story is enriching and the pacing is a bit slow but enjoyable. can’t to see how this goes
It's so impressive how you write so much! and your writing quality is really good. I could never have your commitment, haha. I feel like he's going to die idk why. he's too happy.
Diving into this narrative has been a delightful experience. It's unique from the typical WebNovel plots, adding an element of excitement. The author keeps putting hints, keeping the readers on their toes. The dual MC approach is rare but executed brilliantly here.
Uhh, where to start with this review? Well, the quality and everything else is absolutely amazing. Hard to tell that this is the author's first work. I think everything works and the only thing you need to be worried about as a reader is the difference in style between this and the more popular novels. It will take a while to get used to but the payoff is insane!! I haven't read further but I can tell it will be quite an interesting one!
A very good story. The author is wise and his writing is good. i liked it a lot. very rarely i see a mistake. I encourage author to keep writing and posting chaps and readers to read the novel
Only read just three chapters and i can confidently say that this novel had piqued my interest and am curious to see how everything unfolds ❤️ Cant wait to read more
Nice story, although the description you give is much but it didn't kill the flow of the story....
I need to stop reading good books like this. I don't have the fast passes to spare T_T
Finally catching up to the end of the current story where it’s chapter 12 and wow, I just have to say I’ shocked and surprised to have gotten the villains POV of events and so much thought and detail going into him staying low. The fights are still detailed and have improved. I can’t to see how he deals with his inner turmoil of being a Demon inside the MCs body. Overall loving the story at the moment writer and glad I got into this story before you were able to lock. So I give gifts instead.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is a very early review, but so far the novel's been really good. The character design and world background are top notch, although i would really like if the pace was a bit faster, but all in all, the story's really interesting.
After reading the first chapter, I didn't think it's a story that I would really understand. But as I continued, it was really interesting, I didn't expect it to be like that but I know there are more to come.Sean seems very lazy and a boring individual but he still got the skills. Plus it's hard to see friends like Arthur who stand up for each and I can say, he played a very important role in the life of Sean. Also love the character Emma, she's seems very though but I believe she still a lovable person. And as for the cat, it's too lazy for my liking, funny though.I know they are going to be a lot of surprises as the story unfolds and I know it will be worth reading. Kudos author, all the best.
This book is already at Pro Standard. Everything was put together flawlessly. From its writing quality, its readability, its story development and characters description and personality. The writing style of the author is completely different from my own but it's not actually a reason for me to not read this. This is high quality work, and its a chance to learn more from it as I enjoy reading this story.
Honestly if there another rating more that 5.0, I would love to give this writer.. his book was interesting, amazing, funny in some aspect, all I can say is wow
The book is very interesting.. and I would put it forward to people on this platform check it out and you will sure find it amazing and useful
Amazing story , I really appreciate the creator for such a great job done, I learnt a lot from the book, thanks so much, keep doing the great job
So here's the anticipated review (lol) Anyway, I read till 70 chapters at the very moment. And here are my takes. As you can see i given this book a 4. 4 star I loved to read it as the grammar was very understandable 5 stars right there. Nothing much to say about the updating stability he is bringing up chapters quick automatically 5 Star there too. Now there are 4 stars in each of the other section such as story development the thing which deducted the point is info dumps and continue pov changes. The story does seems an interesting read, but it need to take a single path. character design yeah 4 here too as author need to put more it, and i also need to read this story futher . and last world building yes 4 too because of the lack of knowing about the world yet.
I'm so excited with the story, just little little change, impressed me more 😁😁 I believe everything is formal keep it up , the writer has really did a great job
So professional, this is something have been looking forward to see just to have more knowledge about it, you really amazing and I'm so glad to see more of your success ahead, keep updating us with new ideas 🥰❣️👋
This is incredible from the author, I love the story, I haven't create Time reading story but I did when I come across this story, thanks so much, I happy to be here reading your story, more knowledge ❣️
After reading the entirety of “chapter 1” (technically 8 chapters in), I saw a lot of potential in what this story could develop into. The writing was excellent, and easy to follow. It also described not only the setting but the characters feelings. The background of the story was well done, and we understand what our characters do for a living. I see that there are 12 CHAPTERS A WEEK! Incredible. Definitely have to read more, save it to your library!!!
The story is so amazing, every chapter has great message to each individual, this is much different from others, you have it all, keep improving, everything is perfect, I love it ♥️
A good start; looking forward to reading more; the pacing is perfect, rich character development, keeping them engrossed from beginning to end. Its thought-provoking themes and evocative prose make it a truly memorable reading experience.
It holds so much potential at one glance of the blurb. The author has kept the elements on rarity and fresh concept that will keep you at the edge of your seats. It's by far a good read.
Like every review I do, I start with readability. This book has nice grammar and rather fluid readability to it, which is a very big plus. There are the occasional prose or grammatical error but in all honesty, they will get lost or won't be even apparent unless you are really looking for them, which you probably won't in a first read. Obviously, another big pro for me is the updated stability. All in all its a great book. Give it a read!
Time for another updated review of my favorite story that I have been writing. I will present the pros and cons of my story. Let's start with the cons of the story so far after writing 60 chapters and 67k words. Cons: 1. The story can be a slow burn as the world is built, and at times it may feel like a slice of life where every character matters, even if they end up dying. While this may not be a con for everyone, it's important to note that the buildup in chapters 2 and 3 could cause some readers to lose interest. However, the pace picks up quickly, usually towards the end of major chapters. 2. Reader preference for multiple main characters: While having two main characters may not be an issue for everyone, it's worth considering that some readers might prefer a singular protagonist. It might be helpful to gauge the preferences of your target audience and ensure that both main characters receive equal development and attention. 3. 3rd and 1st person dialogue: Mixing dialogue styles within the story can create a sense of inconsistency for some readers. While it's not inherently wrong, it's important to ensure a smooth transition between the two and be mindful of reader preferences. 4. Clarifying the harem situation: While you have clarified that there won't be a direct harem, it might be helpful to make this explicitly clear within the story itself. This can help manage reader expectations and avoid potential confusion or disappointment down the line. Pros: 1. Many races of characters matter and affect the story. For instance, the Bear tribe specializes in domain barriers and spirit animals, while humans specialize in combat fighting and elemental attacks. 2. Not the standard weak-to-strong progression: The MC gains power through proper training and learning, and fights are never one-sided stomps but require strategy and planning. 3. Engaging plot: The story's plot is unique and woven in such a way that even 200 chapters in, you will be searching for clues to mysteries left in the early chapters. The goal of this story is to tell an epic tale and the importance of trusting in your group of friends. The story is a reincarnation style so you will learn what happens to the MC after chapter 8 4. Multiple perspectives: Having two main characters and three side leads who occasionally get their own POV slots adds depth to the storytelling. It allows readers to experience different viewpoints and provides a broader understanding of the narrative. 5. Balanced romance: This story will include general romance, but it won't be every female in the story swooning for the MC but a balanced act of feelings and little to no harem action. The MC is no simp and only cares about loved ones and family and will only worry about engaging in a romance with a singular character. - In total, these are my thoughts on my story after 60 chapters, and I will probably do another update at 100 chapters, but I do love feedback and advice to better my story. So I am always open to criticism to improve my work.
An amazing read... truly. I'm not used to reading present tense, but this one was worth exiting my comfort zone for.
Good work author. It’s well done. Although the chapters are pretty long imo like the chapter 1 has multiple parts and such.
I've only read five chapters, but I'll leave this review before continuing. I'm often told that I'm easy to impress, but that's not true, it's just when something is good I like to say it. As an avid reader, I'd already like to thank the author for giving birth to this novel. From the outset, the concept is special (I don't want to spoil anything, but the synopsis says it all). The mix of points of view may seem rather confusing, but the author manages not to lose the reader. As for the universe, I'm still checking it out, but given how well the author describes things, I have nothing to worry about. The characters are rather likeable, I haven't really made friends with any of them yet, but they really do seem "human", which isn't easy to do. Grammar-wise, I'm not an English whiz, but for me it's impeccable. It's with great pleasure that I'm going to follow the adventure of this story. Well, I'll leave you to it. I still have chapters to read 😂👍