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The one good point- MC is not dumb or arrogant. The word count/chap is less, and many chapters have too many background characters reactions and conversations about how awesome MC is.
As of chapter 351 the overall story is great. I won't give spoilers. The MC has a better starting point compared to others and pairs it with a somewhat OP system and you have our MC. This is also a harem so beware. As for the translation quality; the first 40(70 - end of Vol.1) chapters translation is almost perfect because it's edited(by EndlessFantasy Translation) although you can still see some inconsistency here and there. As for translation quality of chapters 41(71) and up I'm not so sure, although it is still quite good quality. Overall it as good and entertaining read.
the translation and the overall story are decent, but it starts with a glaring issue for me: WORD COUNT. the author constantly repeats the same thing (sometimes for 5 paragraphs) just fur the sake of word count and the money, and the story which starts like this from the first 10 chapters reeks of a dud just being written for a quick cash... I would be surprised if the author has A long-term plot line for this story.
The system is op and lazy. Originally there were reasonable restrictions, tasks that were super easy, like fighting someone way weaker than the mc, gave reduced or no reward. However that was abandoned pretty quickly and the rewards become more and more op. I get the feeling that the author was trying to make it more interesting by forcing the mc to actually push themselves but then got lazy and went with the easy super op mc route. The fight description is really unbalanced. The author likes using large numbers of enemies to emphasize the mc’s power but doesn’t do a good job with it. It seems the mc can do half a dozen things while the several dozen enemies are just standing there.
It is a good story till chapter 136_3 , I have read. Hope those who read can ignore some small mistakes. After all there are not many good translated novels
The mc actions sometimes is quite contradictory which very ruined the pace for me personally I just hope this doesn't turn into a harem bs later
Chinese gossip narration, constantly glazing the MC non stop, and beauties. every character personality is handsome or a jade beauty. chapters are filled with fluff and gossip and people being in awe of the MC. If this is what you are looking for, you are in the right place.
If the grammatical quality was better I’d tear through this in a day, as it is, only those deep in the dao of mtl 🗿dare to continue. I stopped after the free chaps. Fairly good start, I like the mc, some things I’d do differently, but he isn’t brain dead like many other mcs, all in all a good story ruined by translation quality. Having an English editor fixing up sentence structure, and reducing repetive paragraphs it would flow a lot better.
Im loving this novel so far MC's cheat is very OP and i can see how that might put some ppl off but i dont mind at all personally havent gotten bored even once 203 chapters in
Good novel and hopefully chapters are released faster. Kind of slow considering he is still In qi cultivation realm at chapter 100
good novel , typical system orientated cultivation novel I have read quite a lot so my comment can be biased but for new ones it is good but for me after reading some chapters it starts to become predictive so still good work ...
More chapters need more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
There are some errors but not too terrible. The MC seems like a doofus at first but his temperament improves somewhat. Hopefully he doesn't regress lol. Anyway, I'm willing to give it a shot when it is fully released.
One of the few refreshing Cultivation Webnovels where sect members got brain instead of just being outrightly stupid like : "You dare look at the girl I covet?! I will slay your nine generations!!" Really enjoyed a lot. Thanks Author! Update faster pleaseee!
OP MC matched with another OP heroine is just so old, but somehow, the characters have a fresh take on them! Very little adversial developments as he remains at his sect! The story is plodding along just fine as far as character development for MC. Really, not much else has developed, though! So I subtracted a star for each item on story development. Since he hasn't left his sect or even explored any areas hardly at all, I subtracted a star for the lack of details on the world background too!
so, what is the difference between other Cultivation novels and this one . When reading the description I wasn't really hooked into it and when reading the novel it was kinda or exact similar to other Cultivation novels 😑😑😑😑😑
lately the chapter is focusing on dual cultivation more than the actual task. then mc keep giving immature vibe and kinda hate that kind of mc.
The one good point- MC is not dumb or arrogant. The word count/chap is less, and many chapters have too many background characters reactions and conversations about how awesome MC is.
As of chapter 351 the overall story is great. I won't give spoilers. The MC has a better starting point compared to others and pairs it with a somewhat OP system and you have our MC. This is also a harem so beware. As for the translation quality; the first 40(70 - end of Vol.1) chapters translation is almost perfect because it's edited(by EndlessFantasy Translation) although you can still see some inconsistency here and there. As for translation quality of chapters 41(71) and up I'm not so sure, although it is still quite good quality. Overall it as good and entertaining read.
the translation and the overall story are decent, but it starts with a glaring issue for me: WORD COUNT. the author constantly repeats the same thing (sometimes for 5 paragraphs) just fur the sake of word count and the money, and the story which starts like this from the first 10 chapters reeks of a dud just being written for a quick cash... I would be surprised if the author has A long-term plot line for this story.
The system is op and lazy. Originally there were reasonable restrictions, tasks that were super easy, like fighting someone way weaker than the mc, gave reduced or no reward. However that was abandoned pretty quickly and the rewards become more and more op. I get the feeling that the author was trying to make it more interesting by forcing the mc to actually push themselves but then got lazy and went with the easy super op mc route. The fight description is really unbalanced. The author likes using large numbers of enemies to emphasize the mc’s power but doesn’t do a good job with it. It seems the mc can do half a dozen things while the several dozen enemies are just standing there.
It is a good story till chapter 136_3 , I have read. Hope those who read can ignore some small mistakes. After all there are not many good translated novels
The mc actions sometimes is quite contradictory which very ruined the pace for me personally I just hope this doesn't turn into a harem bs later
Chinese gossip narration, constantly glazing the MC non stop, and beauties. every character personality is handsome or a jade beauty. chapters are filled with fluff and gossip and people being in awe of the MC. If this is what you are looking for, you are in the right place.
If the grammatical quality was better I’d tear through this in a day, as it is, only those deep in the dao of mtl 🗿dare to continue. I stopped after the free chaps. Fairly good start, I like the mc, some things I’d do differently, but he isn’t brain dead like many other mcs, all in all a good story ruined by translation quality. Having an English editor fixing up sentence structure, and reducing repetive paragraphs it would flow a lot better.
Im loving this novel so far MC's cheat is very OP and i can see how that might put some ppl off but i dont mind at all personally havent gotten bored even once 203 chapters in
Good novel and hopefully chapters are released faster. Kind of slow considering he is still In qi cultivation realm at chapter 100
good novel , typical system orientated cultivation novel I have read quite a lot so my comment can be biased but for new ones it is good but for me after reading some chapters it starts to become predictive so still good work ...
More chapters need more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
There are some errors but not too terrible. The MC seems like a doofus at first but his temperament improves somewhat. Hopefully he doesn't regress lol. Anyway, I'm willing to give it a shot when it is fully released.
One of the few refreshing Cultivation Webnovels where sect members got brain instead of just being outrightly stupid like : "You dare look at the girl I covet?! I will slay your nine generations!!" Really enjoyed a lot. Thanks Author! Update faster pleaseee!
OP MC matched with another OP heroine is just so old, but somehow, the characters have a fresh take on them! Very little adversial developments as he remains at his sect! The story is plodding along just fine as far as character development for MC. Really, not much else has developed, though! So I subtracted a star for each item on story development. Since he hasn't left his sect or even explored any areas hardly at all, I subtracted a star for the lack of details on the world background too!
so, what is the difference between other Cultivation novels and this one . When reading the description I wasn't really hooked into it and when reading the novel it was kinda or exact similar to other Cultivation novels 😑😑😑😑😑
lately the chapter is focusing on dual cultivation more than the actual task. then mc keep giving immature vibe and kinda hate that kind of mc.