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MARVEL: I AM TOAA GRANDSON
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Synopsis: Sullivan Morningstar, the son of Lucifer Morningstar, the grandson of one above all, He was born mortal and will become the successor of his grandfather but before that he need to know what he's going to do first through multiverse.
A/n: hey dear reader, you all might have read this fic before, but the original author of this fic could not continue it because he had to focus on his original, so he gave me permission to continue it.
[World list]
Marvel(Currently)
HXH(Finish)
RWBY(Finish)
Oshi no ko x FATE(Finish)
High School DxD(Future confirmed)
Genshin Impact
Honkai Impact
Bleach
Naruto
One piece
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While the idea is already interesting enough, i feel like execution didn't really work well. Combining the multiverse chat and multiverse travel isn't working as it tend to tip more on the chat than travel. Considering the whole summary thing with his origin, i feel that the multiverse travel would have worked with him completing missions on that world and getting rewarded by the system. Maybe the chat could have been used differently, more like a mercenary style where he is hired to do missions on other world by the request of those whonaccept the chat. Another main issue i have is how some situations just felt forced like Hermione's situation from the start. It was convenient that that Hermione broke with Ron and felt like she is just their to be paired with the mc. Also i do fins the shoet chapters peobpematic in the flow of the stort but that is just me.
well first off this got my attention to 1 reason and it's because it has 3 worlds I like. Honkai/Genshin and oshi no ko(mc could prob change ai fate)
Things are very easy for the protagonist, there is no development of the protagonist for a mature and serious guy. Sometimes I think it's just dramaturgy the whole novel, good luck to whoever reads it.
Only real problem with the story is the level of English. Obviously no one has edited this story. being passed through two hands and not fixing the obvious errors plastered everywhere, especiallyin the beginning. other than that the story is good. fun premise. worth it to give it a try at least.
5 stars for dimensional chat group, op mc and world were protagonist's travels to Honkai world. Keep up the good work
The idea is great, but the execution needs some work. One major problem is that girls fall in love with the MC too quickly, although I don't personally care about that, it still takes away from the storyAnother problem is the MC's power level. You didn't do anything wrong, it's just that the whole idea of the MC being the grandson of the OAA already makes him OP and automatically keeps him safe from most major dangers in MarvelStill, though. It does make me excited that the MC will visit honkai impact and the world of teyvat in the future, so props to you author-san
Rewrite? Why is it the same like the other group chat fic? The one with the MC morningstar?
Well, do I think this work has a future? I just hope the author doesn't drop the work so soon...
I hope you finish this. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As I said for the previous Author, I will say it for this one too... I love this Story, hopefully it will continue long enough for me to be old (...a bit too much... but everyone can dream) for now the world are AU Marvel/2 AU Harry Potter/AU HunterXHunter ...any spoiler or idea on what he will choose as the next world?
Its really a great fic Author san! every where I see any fic related to AU or Multiverse the MC is always like an edgelord or overdramatic or a bad person, well I do like a villain MC and an OP MC but Its refreshing reading about a good , kind.....MC you get my point . very much appreciate your work.
I hope you not gonna drop this fanfic author!.. But I need to ask something, dose Mc talk with his father/grandfather?. Please answer me..
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I don't know if it's just the beginning chapters, but the Grammer is very poor.like the story is good but the grammer
Thank you my friend please continue it for me. jope you finish it