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This is one of my few times reading science fiction. I must say, the prologue part got my attention. World building is okay, but I have not read too much yet, so I can't judge on that. While there are some small mistakes in writing here and there. It is nothing proofreading wouldn't fix. I really like Dark Kengo's style.
A really good book that reminds me of edge runners but not as far ahead in time. Give it a go if you like a well developed mc.
Author Here: Decided to comment again on the novel. For now, I would be able to just post one chapter a day. My sentencing is not the best, but I am working on it. Remember to comment your thoughts on the novel and vote if possible. It encourages me... the author. No system. No reincarnation. No Isekai. No Harem.
The story is quite good overall with an interesting premise. The English is better than 99% of stories on Webnovel, but there are some problems with not using commas in spots where they are needed.
Interesting storyline, interesting characters. The first few chapters have a nice hook, and I need to know what the A-25 is. The story is well written. Keep it up!
I like the premise of the story, especially how the setting was written! Tech related writing pieces are always fun to read, and this one was no exception. Though there are lines that seem to lack proper grammar (rambling), it was still a fun read! Keep it up, author!
very well written..... I love the description part very much.... the story too is very well done.... Just one thing make your paragraph with 4-5 lines, other than that it's awesome. continue your beautiful work .... 🥰
So far this novel has been a great read. The way the characters are protrayed is fantastic and the author has also done a nice job at the world building. I especially love how the main character has been protrayed, mysterious yet intriguing. Though I do see some grammatical errors in the few first chapter, they are all easily fixable. Overall a great read.
i know it is too early to write a review but I couldn't resist, this work is too good, keep up the good work author.
This is so good! I got a John Wick vibe from this... Curious to see what happens next. The action sequence is very good and I love the vibe that the music plays into the scenes. Please continue the story!
Well from the synopsis I got curious, and am going to check it out, it looks like a good read.
So far (2 long chapters) It's been a fantastic read. The author describes the scenes perfectly and the character design of the MC starts mysterious and is progressively revealed. I hope the author keeps writing more as I wanna know what's coming up next!
This story has the potential ngl, I think- add more to the world-building to create a hook. And add more to the characters surrounding the MC if you want to keep the MC's appearance mysterious to reveal later on in the story. I like the writing style author! But for scenes, you want to make a more ominous switch up the narration style! Other than that I think it's well done! Keep it up, author!
please comment your thoughts on the novel. I would really appreciate it's more of a trial run. the amount of follow up I get determine if I would continue this novel
I am finally reworking on this.a lot of changes had been made, this is to those who read the first novel.The update rate would be slow for now maybe 2 chaps a week but after a while it'll increase to 6 or 7 a week. just comment questions here and I'll do my best to reply.
This is one of my few times reading science fiction. I must say, the prologue part got my attention. World building is okay, but I have not read too much yet, so I can't judge on that. While there are some small mistakes in writing here and there. It is nothing proofreading wouldn't fix. I really like Dark Kengo's style.
A really good book that reminds me of edge runners but not as far ahead in time. Give it a go if you like a well developed mc.
Author Here: Decided to comment again on the novel. For now, I would be able to just post one chapter a day. My sentencing is not the best, but I am working on it. Remember to comment your thoughts on the novel and vote if possible. It encourages me... the author. No system. No reincarnation. No Isekai. No Harem.
The story is quite good overall with an interesting premise. The English is better than 99% of stories on Webnovel, but there are some problems with not using commas in spots where they are needed.
Interesting storyline, interesting characters. The first few chapters have a nice hook, and I need to know what the A-25 is. The story is well written. Keep it up!
I like the premise of the story, especially how the setting was written! Tech related writing pieces are always fun to read, and this one was no exception. Though there are lines that seem to lack proper grammar (rambling), it was still a fun read! Keep it up, author!
very well written..... I love the description part very much.... the story too is very well done.... Just one thing make your paragraph with 4-5 lines, other than that it's awesome. continue your beautiful work .... 🥰
So far this novel has been a great read. The way the characters are protrayed is fantastic and the author has also done a nice job at the world building. I especially love how the main character has been protrayed, mysterious yet intriguing. Though I do see some grammatical errors in the few first chapter, they are all easily fixable. Overall a great read.
i know it is too early to write a review but I couldn't resist, this work is too good, keep up the good work author.
This is so good! I got a John Wick vibe from this... Curious to see what happens next. The action sequence is very good and I love the vibe that the music plays into the scenes. Please continue the story!
Well from the synopsis I got curious, and am going to check it out, it looks like a good read.
So far (2 long chapters) It's been a fantastic read. The author describes the scenes perfectly and the character design of the MC starts mysterious and is progressively revealed. I hope the author keeps writing more as I wanna know what's coming up next!
This story has the potential ngl, I think- add more to the world-building to create a hook. And add more to the characters surrounding the MC if you want to keep the MC's appearance mysterious to reveal later on in the story. I like the writing style author! But for scenes, you want to make a more ominous switch up the narration style! Other than that I think it's well done! Keep it up, author!
please comment your thoughts on the novel. I would really appreciate it's more of a trial run. the amount of follow up I get determine if I would continue this novel
I am finally reworking on this.a lot of changes had been made, this is to those who read the first novel.The update rate would be slow for now maybe 2 chaps a week but after a while it'll increase to 6 or 7 a week. just comment questions here and I'll do my best to reply.