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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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i like the way the story goes. the side chapter building is good same like the mc. please continue what your doing author
This is hands down, THE BEST MMO story I have read so far. It is very truthful to life and the behaviors of humanity, which I feel get left out FAR TOO often! The world is stellar, the ML is very believable, and entirely relatable if you are a hard-core gamer of any gender. The dialogue is fun and delightful, and descriptions about merely walking are written efficiently and vividly. If you're looking for a deep adventure itch to scratch - read. this. novel! I'm only on chapter 11, and I am IN HERE! I only stop to read to get real life stuff done, and then I'm coming back to read, neglecting my own writing because I am invested. This is phenomenal! I hope you get recognized and people read this a lot more!
I like how the story is developing. I would like to read more of it. Hope it becomes a masterpiece. Keep up the good work.
The setting is incredibly unique, and the structure of the author's sentences flow wonderfully. It is calming to read, in that way. The character himself is somewhat interesting, but the dialogue between him and other characters is much more so. Overall it is very unique and interesting in the way it presents itself at first.
Very enjoyable story with a caring author that will most likely blow up soon due to the amount of work and enjoyability there is within this work. I recommend it.
This story is amazing , plot well arranged and so on. Am not a fan of this genre normally but I can't help to keep on reading to know what would happen next. I hope you update regularly
You did an amazing job in writing the synopsis of this novel. It really hooks the reader to start reading your book. Personally, I love the kind of atmosphere you made in starting off your novel. My only suggestion would be... to divide your long paragraphs? Other than that, great job ^_^ Keep up the good work!
Not going to lie, read a while out of boredom, wasn’t expecting much. The language used is fantastic but I had trouble understanding some words, bit advanced for me. Then I got to chapter 13. And dang I liked that plot twist. Honestly, I might even just recommend people skip the first few chapters and go right in to like chapter 7, but that’s just me. That’s when it starts getting good
Alright, I have to redo my review. The fight scenes got me hooked, they are so unique and immersive, one character’s fights literally read like poems! And the characters are so well written, I see so many of the people from my own life in them! I feel like I’m going on an adventure, not reading a novel. Please don’t drop this, I don’t care if it goes on for thousands of chapters, it must be completed! I have to know how it ends!
i like the way the story goes. the side chapter building is good same like the mc. please continue what your doing author
This is hands down, THE BEST MMO story I have read so far. It is very truthful to life and the behaviors of humanity, which I feel get left out FAR TOO often! The world is stellar, the ML is very believable, and entirely relatable if you are a hard-core gamer of any gender. The dialogue is fun and delightful, and descriptions about merely walking are written efficiently and vividly. If you're looking for a deep adventure itch to scratch - read. this. novel! I'm only on chapter 11, and I am IN HERE! I only stop to read to get real life stuff done, and then I'm coming back to read, neglecting my own writing because I am invested. This is phenomenal! I hope you get recognized and people read this a lot more!
I like how the story is developing. I would like to read more of it. Hope it becomes a masterpiece. Keep up the good work.
The setting is incredibly unique, and the structure of the author's sentences flow wonderfully. It is calming to read, in that way. The character himself is somewhat interesting, but the dialogue between him and other characters is much more so. Overall it is very unique and interesting in the way it presents itself at first.
Very enjoyable story with a caring author that will most likely blow up soon due to the amount of work and enjoyability there is within this work. I recommend it.
This story is amazing , plot well arranged and so on. Am not a fan of this genre normally but I can't help to keep on reading to know what would happen next. I hope you update regularly
You did an amazing job in writing the synopsis of this novel. It really hooks the reader to start reading your book. Personally, I love the kind of atmosphere you made in starting off your novel. My only suggestion would be... to divide your long paragraphs? Other than that, great job ^_^ Keep up the good work!
Not going to lie, read a while out of boredom, wasn’t expecting much. The language used is fantastic but I had trouble understanding some words, bit advanced for me. Then I got to chapter 13. And dang I liked that plot twist. Honestly, I might even just recommend people skip the first few chapters and go right in to like chapter 7, but that’s just me. That’s when it starts getting good
Alright, I have to redo my review. The fight scenes got me hooked, they are so unique and immersive, one character’s fights literally read like poems! And the characters are so well written, I see so many of the people from my own life in them! I feel like I’m going on an adventure, not reading a novel. Please don’t drop this, I don’t care if it goes on for thousands of chapters, it must be completed! I have to know how it ends!