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Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Akane Beach.

 

September, x784.

 

*Bang!*

 

After splitting up with Simon and the others, Alfonzo and the girls returned to their suite at the Akane Resort.

 

Along the way, Alfonzo was dragged by each arm with Elicia on his right and Erza on his left while Cana and Ultear pushed him from behind. When they eventually arrived outside of their room, Elicia quickly unlocked the door and pushed it open hard enough that it slammed against the wall.

 

*Bang!*

 

After that, Alfonzo was forcefully dragged and pushed through the door before it was slammed shut.

 

As soon as the group of five were in the privacy of their room, Elicia, Cana, and Erza started taking Alfonzo's clothes off. Meanwhile, Ultear swept the room with her [Magic Power Detection] just to be safe.

 

It would not be amusing if someone had snuck in while they were gone and set up some kind of monitoring lacrima.

 

After the sweep was complete and Ultear found nothing in the room that was not supposed to be there, she turned her attention back to Alfonzo.

 

By now, Alfonzo's shirt had been taken off and tossed halfway across the room. Meanwhile, Erza had wrapped her arms around Alfonzo's neck from his left side and pulled him down into a passionate kiss, their tongues wrestling while they exchanged saliva.

 

Meanwhile, Cana had circled around to Alfonzo's front, dropped to her knees, and started taking off his belt and unbuttoning his pants. At the same time, Elicia, who was on her knees next to Cana, was helping him take his shoes off, tossing them next to his previously discarded shirt.

 

Seeing this, and not wanting to fall any further behind, Ultear threw off the cloak she wore as a part of her battle attire. Then, she slipped the shoulder straps of her one-piece, leotard-like battle gear off her shoulders, exposing her breasts. After that, she pressed herself against Alfonzo from behind and wrapped her arms around Alfonzo's chest while rubbing her breasts against his muscular back as she started raining kisses on the right side of his neck and right shoulder.

 

AT the same time, Erza had [Requipped] out of all her armor and clothing, continuing to kiss Alfonzo while running her hands through his hair. The occasional muffled moan would also slip out whenever Alfonzo squeezed her ass with his left hand.

 

On top of that, Elicia and Cana had succeeded in removing Alfonzo's pants, boxers, socks, and shoes, leaving Alfonzo completely naked.

 

As soon as all of Alfonzo's clothes had been thrown across the room, Cana immediately grasped his semi-erect dick, opened her mouth wide, and swallowed it to the base. Meanwhile, Elicia had lowered herself even further, somehow positioning herself between Alfonzo's legs and Cana in the process. Then, with the back of her head resting on Cana's chest, she began suckling Alfonzo's balls while gently massaging them with her tongue.

 

A moment later, Cana a slowly pulled her head back until only the head of Alfonzo's dick was in her mouth. And as soon as she did, Ultear lowered her right hand and began stroking the newly exposed shaft.

 

Then, in a surprisingly, well-coordinated show of cooperation, Cana started bobbing her head, matching Ultear's rhythm perfectly.

 

With things going on like this for a few minutes, Alfonzo found himself getting overwhelmed and reaching his limit much faster than he expected. To change the flow of things, Alfonzo decided to take the initiative back, at least a little.

 

With that decision made, Alfonzo placed his hands on Erza's ass and quickly hiked her upward.

 

"Kya~!" Erza screamed in surprise from the sudden move.

 

"Wow, that was really cute." Elicia said, releasing her lips from around Alfonzo's balls just long enough to say so.

 

Without stopping what they were doing, Cana and Ultear nodded in agreement with Elicia's statement. Meanwhile, Alfonzo managed to lift Erza to the point where her waist was at eye level before spreading her legs and sitting her on his shoulders with his face buried in her pussy.

 

With Erza's new position, Ultear had to change her area of attack. So, after a moment of consideration, she too fell to her knees. Then, like Elicia, she also began suckling on Alfonzo's balls, just from the back.

 

'Holy shit...' Alfonzo exclaimed internally. 'These girls are really trying to make me nut quick. But if I'm going down, I'm taking one of them down with me.'

 

As that throught ran though his mind, Alfonzo pushed his tongue inside of Erza.

 

"Ahn~!" Erza moaned from the stimulation. "Mmm~~~!"

 

Moaning again after feeling Alfonzo's tongue slowly exploring the inside of her pussy before being slowly dragged out and up to her clit, Erza instinctively leaned back and gripped Alfonzo's hair once she felt the tip of Alfonzo's tongue lightly flicking all over the surface of her clit.

 

"Ahh~~~~!" Erza screamed as her body started to writhe on Alfonzo's shoulders.

 

"Hmph!" Alfonzo also grunted as Elicia, Cana, and Ultear intensified their movements on his dick and balls.

 

*Slurp!* *Slurp!* *Slurp!*

 

Like that, the sounds of four people licking and sucking while a fifth moaned continuously rang out through the room.

 

After another three minutes, Alfonzo could no longer hold on. So, in order to bring Erza down with him, he wrapped his lips around Erza's clit and began sucking strongly while rubbing it with his tongue simultaneously.

 

"Ahn~~~~~~~~!" Erza moaned loudly as she reached her first orgasm.

 

"Hmph!" Alfonzo grunted a second later as he released his first load into Cana's mouth.

 

Meanwhile, Cana accepted as much of Alfonzo's cum into her mouth as she could handle with some of it dribbling down her chin from the corners of her lips. At the same time, Elicia released Alfonzo's balls from her lips and simply leaned her head back on Cana's chest while looking up at Alfonzo's dick as it twitched while shooting semen into Cana's mouth.

 

Ultear, on the other hand, continued to massage Alfonzo's balls wither tongue until he stopped twitching. She then crawled around to Alfonzo's front and stopped at Cana's side before lapping up the semen that Cana could not keep in her mouth.

 

"*Lick* Can't let this go to waste." Ultear said after cleaning the area around Cana's mouth.

 

After that, Cana, before Ultear could react, pulled her into a kiss where she pushed a portion of Alfonzo's cum into the raven-haired beauties mouth. Then, after giving away roughly a third of what she was holding in her mouth, Cana broke the kiss before leaning her head forward and kissing Elicia as well and repeating the process.

 

Alfonzo, on the other hand, after watching the three girls kiss and swap his cum between them shifted Erza's legs so that she was seated on only his left shoulder. Then, with his right hand, he grabbed Cana by the arm and pulled her up to her feet before taking her and Erza over to the large bed in the main bedroom of their suite.

 

"*Gulp* Someone seems really eager now." Cana said playfully after swallowing what was in her mouth as she struggled to take off her top and pants with one hand while moving.

 

"You don't know the half of hit." Alfonzo said with a predatory smile on his face.

 

Smiling at the short exchange between Alfonzo and Cana, Elicia and Ultear also stood up while swallowing. Then, they followed the other three while discarding their own clothes as they moved.

 

Meanwhile, Erza, who was sitting on Alfonzo's shoulder while facing towards Elicia and Ultear simply sat calmly with her hands folded on her lap. Though, if one were to look closely, they would realize that Erza was not as calm as she seemed thanks to the stream of her juices that were leaking onto Alfonzo's shoulder and dripping down his chest.

 

A few moments later, Alfonzo, with Erza still on his shoulder, and Cana were standing next to the large bed. Then, Alfonzo picked up Erza and took her off his shoulder before sitting her o eth edge of the bed in the seiza position.

 

Erza, without any complaints, folded her hands on her lap once again and watched Alfonzo's next moves with curiosity.

 

Meanwhile, Cana climbed onto the bed on her hands and knees with her ass facing towards Alfonzo.

 

"Come on, Fonzie." Cana purred. "Fuck me. Break me."

 

Hearing that, Alfonzo's dick twitched in excitement. However, instead of jumping straight in, he repositioned Cana so that she was facing Erza. Then, after crawling behind her, he took a handful of Cana's hair and wrapped it around his right hand before yanking it slightly to force Cana to look at Erza's face.

 

"Mmm!" Cana moaned lightly at the slightly rough treatment.

 

Then, while forcing Cana to hold eye contact with Erza, Alfonzo used his left hand to line up his dick with Cana's already wet pussy. However, just as he was about to push it inside of her…

 

*Slurp!*

 

… Elicia reached over from the side, snatched Alfonzo's dick away from him, and deepthroated him until her nose touched his pelvis.

 

"Oh fuck…" Alfonzo groaned due to the sudden and unexpected stimulation.

 

*Slurp!* *Pop!*

 

"Now, now, Fonzie." Elicia said with a smile after releasing Alfonzo's dick with an audible pop. "You're too excited."

 

That statement caused Alfonzo to look down at Elicia with a confused expression on his face.

 

"You forgot to activate the anti-pregnancy sigil." Elicia continued.

 

The light of recognition flashed through Alfonzo's eyes as he circulated his magic power to activate the sigil. Then, once it was activated, he smiled and nodded at Elicia.

 

"Thanks, Lici." Alfonzo said before focusing on the round, tanned ass in front of him. "Although I love you all, I'm still not ready for kids yet."

 

"Yeah, yeah, thanks, Lici." Cana said, sounding a bit impatient. "Thanks for reminding him. But can you let him fuck me already?"

 

Cana's impatient question received a chuckle from both Alfonzo and Elicia before Elicia nodded and guided Alfonzo's dick towards Cana's slit. Then, just as Elicia was about to release it, their attention was drawn away once again.

 

"Mm~!" Erza moaned, a light dusting of red gracing her cheeks.

 

When Alfonzo, Elicia, and Cana, who was already looking in Erza's direction, heard the moan, they all focused on her.

 

Unsurprisingly, Erza was still seated on the edge of the bed in the seiza position. The cause of Erza's moan, however, was what surprised them.

 

Currently kneeling behind Erza, Ultear was groping her while occasionally twisting Erza's nipples with her fingers. And judging from Erza's expression, it was clear that she had been holding back the signs that she was enjoying it, until just now, anyway.

 

Feeling the three gazes fall on her, Ultear looked up from Erza and tilted her head in confusion.

 

"What?" Ultear asked, not sure why she had become the center of attention while she continued to grope, massage, and pinch Erza's breasts without pause.

 

Shaking their heads with wry smiles on their faces, Alfonzo, Elicia, and Cana let Ultear continue while they focused on the task at hand.

 

As soon as the tip of Alfonzo's dick parted Cana's pussy lips, under Elicia's guidance, he pushed forward with a strong thrust.

 

""*Gasp*" Cana sucked in a breath of air as her back arched and her eyes rolled back slightly.

 

*Smack!*

 

That quick insertion was followed by a crisp slap on her ass that caused her pussy to clench involuntarily.

 

"Mmm~!" Cana moaned from the sting Alfonzo's slap produced.

 

Then, not giving Cana any time to adjust, Alfonzo started to piston his hips with a steady pace.

 

"Mmm~! That's it!" Cana moaned. "That's the spot!"

 

For the next few minutes, Alfonzo kept up his pace, making sure to hit Cana's sweet spots every once in a while. Naturally, this caused Cana's moans to spike in volume every time he did so.

 

Then, after about a minute, Elicia repositioned herself, resting the side of her head on Cana's back, she watched Alfonzo penetrate Cana repeatedly from close up. At the same time, she used one hand to spread Cana's butt cheeks so that she could get a better view while simultaneously reaching around and tickling Cana's clit with her fingers.

 

"Holy… Fucking… Ahn~~~!" Cana moaned from the extra stimulation. "Faster, Fonzie! Mmm~~~! Fuck me faster!"

 

Instead of following Cana's request, however, Alfonzo did the exact opposite, pulling out of Cana completely.

 

"Fonzie~, why did you stop?" Cana asked in a whiny tone.

 

*Slurp!*

 

The sound of slurping and sucking that followed Alfonzo's pull out, however, quickly answered Cana's question.

 

Immediately after pulling his dick out of Cana, Alfonzo pushed it into Elicia's mouth. Meanwhile, Elicia continued to tickle Cana's clit with her fingers.

 

Looking up, Alfonzo watched Ultear continue to play with Erza's body. And while she was still working on Erza's breasts with her left  hand, Ultear's right hand had slipped between the scarlet-haired beauty's legs and was furiously rubbing.

 

Based on the way Erza was gasping for breath while her whole body shivered, it was clear to Alfonzo that she was about to cum. And just when he thought that moment had arrived, Ultear abruptly stopped all her hand movements.

 

While she breathed heavily and tried to get her shivering under control, Alfonzo did not miss the flash of frustration in Erza's eyes. Nor did he overlook the sadistic glee that flashed passed Ultear's.

 

"No cumming." Ultear said in a slightly sadistic tone. "You have to wait for Alfonzo for that."

 

After that, Alfonzo's focus was pulled back to Cana after another pop sound and the feeling of his dick parting her pussy lips for the second time.

 

As soon as he felt that sensation, Alfonzo's slammed into Cana with full force. And if it weren't for the firm grip he had on her hair, Cana would have more than likely ended up face down on the mattress. Instead, she ended up with her back arching and toes curling as a loud moan tore from her throat.

 

"Ahn~~~~~~~~~!" Cana screamed as her pussy convulsed, reaching her first orgasm from that one thrust.

 

Fortunately or unfortunately, depending on how you look at it, Alfonzo had no intention of letting her ride out her orgasm. Instead, he started pounding her as if he had not had sex in years. In fact, he was pounding her so hard that Elicia had to raise her head off of Cana's back because of how hard her body was being jolted.

 

"Ahh~~~~~~~~~!" The moans that left Cana's mouth were getting more and more guttural as time went on.

 

Over the next several minutes, Cana had four more orgasms that fused into the ones before them.

 

By the time Alfonzo burst inside her, Cana was little more than a quivering mess with sweat covering her body.

 

After cumming inside of Cana and enjoying the feeling of release, Alfonzo finally let go of her hair, resulting in Cana's head flopping onto the mattress immediately. Following that, he pulled his dick out of her.

 

Once Alfonzo's dick was free, two things happened simultaneously. First, Cana flopped onto the bed completely with her legs hanging off its edge. And second, Elicia swooped in once again, swallowing Alfonzo's dick to the base.

 

*Slurp~~~~~!"

 

Then, with one long continuous suck combined with her tongue movements, Elicia cleaned up Alfonzo's dick while simultaneously sucking out any semen that may have been left inside.

 

*Pop!*

 

On top of that, by the time she released his dick with a third, audible pop, Alfonzo's dick that had softened slightly after he ejaculated, was hard as adamantine once again.

 

"There, already to go." Elicia said happily as she grabbed Alfonzo by the hand and dragged him onto the bed.

 

A moment later, Elicia laid Alfonzo down with his head on a pillow. Then, she started stroking his dick tenderly.

 

"Now, it's my turn." Elicia said with a lustful glint in her eyes.

 

A moment later, Elicia straddled Alfonzo's hips, supporting herself with her hands on his stomach. Then, she spread her legs/ performing a split, and suspended her lower body above Alfonzo's dick with only her hands as support. AT that pointr, however, she frowned slightly.

 

"*Sigh* I didn't really think this through." Elicia muttered as she was having trouble lining up Alfonzo's dick with her pussy in this position.

 

"I got you." Alfonzo said, intending to reach down and guide his dick into Elicia.

 

"No!" Elicia replied sharply. Then, she looked over to Ultear and Erza. "Hey, Ultear, can you give me a hand?"

 

By now, Ultear had started playing with Erza's body again. And like last time, it was clear that Erza was on the verge of an orgasm again. However, Elicia's call caused Ultear to stop.

 

Looking up, Ultear took stock of the situation and saw the position Elicia and Alfonzo were in. Realizing what it was that Elicia needed her help with, Ultear could not help but giggle. Then, she removed her hands from Erza's quivering body and patted her butt before she moved from behind her.

 

"Now, remember, no touching yourself." Ultear said without looking at Erza as she approached Alfonzo and Elicia.

 

Although she was certain that Erza's expression did not change due to her comment, she was certain that Erza had to be frustrated to no end. And she was right. Still, Erza remained sitting in place with her hands folded on her lap, the only proof of her current sexual frustration being the wet patch on the bedding below her.

 

Meanwhile, Ultear had reached Alfonzo's side. However, instead of simply grabbing Alfonzo's dick and guiding it towards Elicia's pussy, Ultear straddled his face, facing towards Elicia, without even touching his dick.

 

This action prompted a confused look from Elicia, one that Ultear ignored. Instead, she looked down. Although she was unable to see Alfonzo's face, she still spoke to him.

 

"What are you waiting for?" Ultear asked. "It's not gonna lick itself."

 

Over the last few months, Ultear's sadistic side started to manifest more and more in the bedroom. And although her sadism was genuine when it came to the other girls, when it came to Alfonzo, it was just a ploy. One she used to get Alfonzo to absolutely ravage her when he could no longer tolerate it.

 

This time, however, she had completely forgotten that Alfonzo was already turned all the way on. So, instead of Alfonzo simply licking her pussy like she expected him to do, he jammed two fingers inside of her while simultaneously sucking on her clit as hard as he could. On top of that, Alfonzo had added a slight electric current to stimulate the nerve endings inside Ultear's pussy.

 

"Ahh~~~~~~~~~~!" Ultear screamed as the lightning-enhanced, double stimulation hit her like a ton of bricks.

 

"Geez, come on, Ultear." Elicia said with a pout. "I called you over here for a reason."

 

Instinctively, Ultear stiffly reached out and lined up Alfonzo's dick with Elicia's pussy after Elicia's statement. Unfortunately, her body was hit with too much pleasure too quickly to notice that Elicia had just pushed her into a submissive role in the bed room.

 

Now, with her pussy lined up with Alfonzo's dick, Elicia', using her hands alone, lowered herself on it. Then, when she had taken all of it inside her, Elicia walked her hands forward slightly, leaning her upper body forward in the process. Then, with her legs still in a split, she started swinging her hips up and down.

 

*Smack!* *Smack!* *Smack!*

 

"Ahn~~~~!" Elicia moaned every time she slammed Alfonzo's dick inside of her.

 

In combination with Elicia's moans, the sound of flesh slapping against flesh also sounded out through the room every time Elicia slammed herself down.

 

A few minutes later, it was obvious that Elicia was slowing down. On top of that, her arms, as well as her whole body, were starting to shake, evidence of an incoming orgasm.

 

Recognizing this fact as well, despite the fact that he could not see Elicia, Alfonzo pulled his fingers out of Ultear and strongly slapped her ass, resulting in her slumping forward and her head resting on Elicia's shoulder. Then, Alfonzo reached down, held Elicia up by her inner thighs, and started pounding up into her with reckless abandon.

 

"Ahn~~~~~~~~~~!" Elicia moaned loudly less than fifteen seconds later as she reached an orgasm.

 

However, just like Cana, Alfonzo had no intention of letting her peacefully ride out her orgasm as he continued to pound her until she could no longer support herself with her hands, resulting in Ultear being the only thing that kept her from collapsing on Alfonzo's chest.

 

Eventually, after Elicia came six more times, Alfonzo let go inside of her. Then, after letting her come down from her orgasm for a bit, he patted her ass a couple of times, prompting her to pull his dick out of her and roll over to the side.

 

It should also be mentioned that Alfonzo continued to lick Ultear's pussy while he was pounding Elicia. On top of that, he used the same electrical current trick on the tip of his tongue. So, right now, Ultear was no more than a quivering mess laying on his chest and abdomen. Still, Alfonzo needed to make her pay for ordering him to lick her pussy.

 

"It's not gonna lick itself, huh?" Alfonzo muttered loud enough for Ultear to hear.

 

It should also be noted that although Ultear could hear Alfonzo's muttering, it's unclear if she could understand the words due to the pleasure overload she had just experienced. Currently, while laying on Alfonzo's chest, her mouth was wide open with her tongue hanging out of it. On top of that, her eyes were partially rolled back.

 

"Well, it's not gonna clean itself." Alfonzo continued as he grabbed a handful of Ultear's hair.

 

In the next moment, Alfonzo pushed his dick into Ultear's mouth, which she instinctively began to suck. Then, he started to piston his hips, forcing his dick into her throat repeatedly.

 

After face fucking Ultear for about thirty seconds, Alfonzo slid his body out from under her. Then, with her still lying face down, he slammed his dick, balls deep, inside of her and ravaged her pussy just the way she wanted while occasionally slapping her ass.

 

"I'm sorry, Alfonzo!" Ultear cried out between moans. "I promise to be a good girl from now on. Ahh~~~~~~!"

 

"You say that every time." Alfonzo said as he slammed his dick deep inside of her and started grinding.

 

*Smack!*

 

"Mmm!" Ultear groaned as her pussy tighten. "Please, don't spank me anymore."

 

"You don't get to decide that." Alfonzo growled.

 

*smack!*

 

By now, Ultear's butt was a bright shade of red. And although it seemed as if Ultear was pleading for mercy, anyone who could look into her eyes would have realized that she was experiencing her own piece of heaven at the moment.

 

Eventually, both Alfonzo and Ultear could feel that Alfonzo's dick was starting to quiver, meaning he was about to cum. So, they both knew that this round would be ending soon.

 

"Looks like you're off the hook for now." Alfonzo said as he pushed deep inside of Ultear for the last time. "Hmph!"

 

"Ahn~~~~~! Thank you." Ultear moaned. "I promise to be good from now on."

 

Instead of replying, Alfonzo simply flopped on Ultear's back and took in a few deep breaths. Meanwhile, Ultear smiled weakly as she reached back and ran her fingers through Alfonzo's hair.

 

While that was going on, Cana had recovered during the time that Alfonzo was punishing Ultear and took over her role of bringing Erza to the brink of orgasm, only to stop at the last moment, repeatedly.

 

By now, both Cana and Erza were seated in a puddle of Erza's juices. And though she would deny it if anyone asked, quite of bit of Cana's juices were mixed into that puddle as well.

 

'Fuck!' Cana exclaimed internally. 'I kinda understand why Lici likes watching Fonzie fuck the rest of us so much. Whenever Fonzie goes all out like that on Ultear, it's really fucking hot.'

 

Putting those thoughts to the back of her mind for the time being, Cana reached around Erza and gently caressed her cheek.

 

"It's finally your turn, Erza." Cana said with a smile.

 

"Are you sure?" Erza asked. "If you want to go again, I don't mind waiting."

 

In response, Cana rolled her eyes. Then, she reached down and dragged her index finger across Erza's pussy, causing the red head to shiver. A moment later, she raised her finger, Erza's juices dripping from it, in front of Erza's face.

 

"Say that again when you're not leaking like a broken faucet." Cana said before pushing Erz's back towards Alfonzo. "Just go get you some, girl."

 

Nodding in response with a blush on her face, Erza started crawling towards Alfonzo. However, when she was next to him and Ultear, Alfonzo surprised her by popping up, his dick being pulled out of Ultear with the motion.

 

"Mmm~~~!" Ultear moaned from the stimulation.

 

Then, Alfonzo grabbed Erza by the arm, flipped her over onto her back, pushed her legs back so that her feet were on either side of her head, and plunged his dick deep inside of her in one go.

 

"Ahh~~~~~~~~~~!" Erza screamed, finally reaching her first orgasm with Alfonzo's quick, sudden, powerful thrust.

 

Then, without giving her time to recover, Alfonzo pounded deep, fast, and hard into Erza's pussy, with every stroke hitting Erza's G-Spot, prolonging her orgasm for almost seven minutes.

 

And because he was going at it with such intensity, Alfonzo came inside of Erza just as her orgasm finished, leading to her having a second, less intense, orgasm before Alfonzo flopped down on top of her.

 

After recovering from her two back to back orgasms, Erza smiled. Then, with one hand, she swept her hair out of her face while running her fingers through Alfonzo's hair with the other.

 

"Thank you, Alfonzo." Erza said softly. "That was amazing."

 

In response, Alfonzo only smiled proudly. However, he knew he would not have much time to rest when he felt a few fingers wrap around the base of his dick before it was pulled out of Erza.

 

"Mmm~~!" Erza moaned softly as Alfonzo's dick was dragged out of her.

 

A moment later, after his dick was freed, he felt a pair of tongues running up and down the shaft.

 

"I hope you're not done yet." Cana said after licking up the juices on her side of Alfonzo's dick before getting back to her cleanup.

 

"Yeah, I want more, Fonzie." Elicia added while cleaning up with Cana.

 

"Of course not." Alfonzo muttered. "But can I at least get a drink first?"

 

Just as Alfonzo requested, Ultear handed him a glass of water a few moments later. Then, after he finished his drink, the quintet continued blowing off steam until an hour before sunrise. Not because they wanted to stop, though. Rather, they stopped because they were all too exhausted to continue.


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