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okay look here's the thing it's good but an author just makes a bad decision story-wise they throw it off the rails by having the MC and Mavis travel to the future it throws the entire story out of whack and then after join fairy tales like new members it just destroys the flow there were better ways to go about this and it just didn't turn out well
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I really love this story development and everything that I am specially happy to see Mavis Vermilion being the main female lead
I liked :D I mean I like the relationship between the mc and mavis it's unique and original (besides it's the only one I've seen so far) and I really liked how the narrative conveys the feelings it wants to convey.
La qualité diminue petit à petit et pk fairy tail si il utilise l'alchimie va dans fma [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
One of the best fairy tail fics I have read I also like the use of alchemy in the sorry .......................................................................
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The idea is not bad, but the explanations are terrible. The MC invents FMA Alchemy in the world of Fairy Tail just based on chemistry and what he remembers from the anime, which is more than he should remember. The MC wasn't a genius in the past life or received alchemy as a cheat, he wasn't even a student of chemistry or an alchemy addict who tried to learn it in the previous life and ended up being useful in the next one as the MC of The Eminence in Shadow , the MC is just an ordinary guy who conveniently discovered a new science and the equivalent of centuries of research and development alone. Honestly, if his magic was alchemy it would be perfect and make sense, but instead he actually pulled a whole new science out of thin air.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Keep it up, I want to see how far this book will go. +++++++++++++++++++±++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
i hope you dont drop this fic . this is the first time i read a fic with mavis as one of protagonist.
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really great story. some characters Mack dept but overal stil verry readbale. I still recommend reading this story.
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I absolutely love this fanfic! It is by far the best one I have ever read, and I find myself waiting for the next chapter constantly. The only complaint that I have is that there are not enough chapters to satisfy my desire for this fic.
Its an average read. Neither good nor bad. Majority of the story is inner monologues. The MCs reasoning is as spotty as the English used. If the story was cleaned up a bit, it'd be better. Whether its the grammar, the character interactions, even the inner monologues. There is no world building besides some facts about Tenrou island.
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Good beginning. I like the story so far. Ignore reviews that say he doesnt have magic. He learns from zeref. He has magic and alchemy. Just hope its stays mono and dont become a harem. Thanks for the chaps. Just ignore the bad reviews that just comment after 10 chapters. 👍
J'aime bien l'histoire et le fait que le MC penche plus pour l'alchimie que pour la magie me paraît assez logique puisque il ne savait pas si il pouvait en faire L’histoire avance bien et les mises à jour régulière sont un plus le seul bémole que je peut voir ses sans doute que au début je m'attendais à aller plus vite peut être pour que l'histoire rattrape le canon mais je pense que prendre son temps et finalement mieux, en tous cas ses mon impression.
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Really good story and a plus for being a fairy tail ff it’s weird to find those specially a good one you get a 10/10 from me
I don’t know man I was enjoying it originally but I had to remove it as I felt like such a degenerate reading about two 16yr olds doing it. The romance seemed to be working okay while they were growing up but the lemon came across as complete fan service that the story definitely would’ve been fine without. In regard to the magic and setting it’s a relatively interesting and unique take but wow did I delete this quickly when I started reading ‘HARDER’ in my fairy tail fanfic.
I contradict all those who put a bad note to the author under full of pretexts when the story is really good by reading the first 3 chapters they criticized the story like never before. The only pretext is: the mc is in Fairy Tail why is he the alchemy of FMA? And why not? The author's only mistake is that he should have said that there would be alchemy. That's all I like the author story so keep going.
don't mind these people they want pokemon harem or evil anti-hero selfish mc. and how it had a problem with alechemy power they are petty and I think this novel is better than other fiary tail why because there is good written romance and interactions and building bonds between characters and not also that time skip and they love each other right away too focused mc why do you think that the characters also show that they live in this world and not appear every now and then the manga would not be popular
okay look here's the thing it's good but an author just makes a bad decision story-wise they throw it off the rails by having the MC and Mavis travel to the future it throws the entire story out of whack and then after join fairy tales like new members it just destroys the flow there were better ways to go about this and it just didn't turn out well
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I really love this story development and everything that I am specially happy to see Mavis Vermilion being the main female lead
I liked :D I mean I like the relationship between the mc and mavis it's unique and original (besides it's the only one I've seen so far) and I really liked how the narrative conveys the feelings it wants to convey.
La qualité diminue petit à petit et pk fairy tail si il utilise l'alchimie va dans fma [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
One of the best fairy tail fics I have read I also like the use of alchemy in the sorry .......................................................................
Ouais. ............ non [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The idea is not bad, but the explanations are terrible. The MC invents FMA Alchemy in the world of Fairy Tail just based on chemistry and what he remembers from the anime, which is more than he should remember. The MC wasn't a genius in the past life or received alchemy as a cheat, he wasn't even a student of chemistry or an alchemy addict who tried to learn it in the previous life and ended up being useful in the next one as the MC of The Eminence in Shadow , the MC is just an ordinary guy who conveniently discovered a new science and the equivalent of centuries of research and development alone. Honestly, if his magic was alchemy it would be perfect and make sense, but instead he actually pulled a whole new science out of thin air.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Keep it up, I want to see how far this book will go. +++++++++++++++++++±++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
i hope you dont drop this fic . this is the first time i read a fic with mavis as one of protagonist.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ really great story. some characters Mack dept but overal stil verry readbale. I still recommend reading this story.
Great story can't wait for you to finish it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=angry][img=update]
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I absolutely love this fanfic! It is by far the best one I have ever read, and I find myself waiting for the next chapter constantly. The only complaint that I have is that there are not enough chapters to satisfy my desire for this fic.
Its an average read. Neither good nor bad. Majority of the story is inner monologues. The MCs reasoning is as spotty as the English used. If the story was cleaned up a bit, it'd be better. Whether its the grammar, the character interactions, even the inner monologues. There is no world building besides some facts about Tenrou island.
Very stable story but with some inconsistencies[img=moedas] [img=moedas] [img=moedas] [img=moedas] [img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas][img=moedas]
Good beginning. I like the story so far. Ignore reviews that say he doesnt have magic. He learns from zeref. He has magic and alchemy. Just hope its stays mono and dont become a harem. Thanks for the chaps. Just ignore the bad reviews that just comment after 10 chapters. 👍
J'aime bien l'histoire et le fait que le MC penche plus pour l'alchimie que pour la magie me paraît assez logique puisque il ne savait pas si il pouvait en faire L’histoire avance bien et les mises à jour régulière sont un plus le seul bémole que je peut voir ses sans doute que au début je m'attendais à aller plus vite peut être pour que l'histoire rattrape le canon mais je pense que prendre son temps et finalement mieux, en tous cas ses mon impression.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ write your novel the way you want to and don't listing to hater but do listing to people that you can learn from....................................
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Really good story and a plus for being a fairy tail ff it’s weird to find those specially a good one you get a 10/10 from me
I don’t know man I was enjoying it originally but I had to remove it as I felt like such a degenerate reading about two 16yr olds doing it. The romance seemed to be working okay while they were growing up but the lemon came across as complete fan service that the story definitely would’ve been fine without. In regard to the magic and setting it’s a relatively interesting and unique take but wow did I delete this quickly when I started reading ‘HARDER’ in my fairy tail fanfic.
I contradict all those who put a bad note to the author under full of pretexts when the story is really good by reading the first 3 chapters they criticized the story like never before. The only pretext is: the mc is in Fairy Tail why is he the alchemy of FMA? And why not? The author's only mistake is that he should have said that there would be alchemy. That's all I like the author story so keep going.
don't mind these people they want pokemon harem or evil anti-hero selfish mc. and how it had a problem with alechemy power they are petty and I think this novel is better than other fiary tail why because there is good written romance and interactions and building bonds between characters and not also that time skip and they love each other right away too focused mc why do you think that the characters also show that they live in this world and not appear every now and then the manga would not be popular
the story is not updating? so is there any other raw version of it?