10รีวิว
3.68
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this is awful. oh god this is awful. 90% of the text is just an explanation. either narrative explanation or mc explain things. so many power so many explanation, ao many back atory explanation, ao many trivia explanation, ao many shinenigan explanation. its awful
Utterly disappointing i read the 1st chap to 10 chapter with every chapter i read it's further made me lost interest and in the 10th chapter made truly drop this with how the mc become dumb despite reading the novel if there are someone interest reading this just skip the prologue
Genderbender warning in the form of power. And an important reminder that there is a tag for that. JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Word count.
It's very hard to find cultivation chat group fanfic, but I don't like soft feather much she's very boring, to be honest, but i'll give it a try, so 5 star first.
(google translate) it's not a bad story, if you don't think about it too much it's a pleasant read it's a very wish-fulfillment story, the MC is very op, that in itself is not a problem, but it lacks comedy to complement MC op, and the MC is superior to everything and everyone in power and seniority to the point of his family relationships and past making all characters his juniors makes things a little weird, it's like someone reincarnating as Adam in some world and calling everyone children because they are all descendants of him that aside, the powers are interesting, they contain a bit of originality, using references from other stories to create MC powers, like lord of Mysteries, it's cool, but at the same time redundant because he has many and at once, you can't even tell which power is stronger, the first 5 chapters are info dump of powers and the 6th is the transition to the beginning of the story, the writing quality is good, idk about grammar because I use a translator and it kinda messes or corrects everything automatically for now, this is all I can describe as there are only 20 chaps at the time of this review, in conclusion, the story had to be slower, and more detailed as several comedy scenes, conversations, and others were cut, an example is Doudou arriving, there was hardly a single dialogue from him, and he's with shuhang already when senior white awakens, which is MC little brother, I expected the MC to play a trick or something on Doudou, create the illusion of a strong male dog trying to seduce him or something when he approached Shuhang for the first time, sort of foreshadows his unhappy fate. a slower story can also make the romance feel deeper. finally, the story isn't bad, although it's not stellar either, I believe the author should focus on the comedy, the chat, and the interaction (mainly funny ones) between characters, because with an MC being op, it makes the story in need of an intense focus on another entertaining area, anyway, a good book for the first time writing, I wish you the best of luck author
The MC is op and I am loving it but please don't make him a simp for Soft feather. Make him a Sigma MC ,let girls chase him.
it's pretty good. I look forward for the coming chapters. for now it's just a bunch of info dump but hopefully the story will start soon.
This is just great, I would love to read more. Joo can't wait for new chapters. Hope our main character meet the original main character soon. And I would like to see how it will interact in the modern world. Who will be his love interest?
this is awful. oh god this is awful. 90% of the text is just an explanation. either narrative explanation or mc explain things. so many power so many explanation, ao many back atory explanation, ao many trivia explanation, ao many shinenigan explanation. its awful
Utterly disappointing i read the 1st chap to 10 chapter with every chapter i read it's further made me lost interest and in the 10th chapter made truly drop this with how the mc become dumb despite reading the novel if there are someone interest reading this just skip the prologue
Genderbender warning in the form of power. And an important reminder that there is a tag for that. JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Word count.
It's very hard to find cultivation chat group fanfic, but I don't like soft feather much she's very boring, to be honest, but i'll give it a try, so 5 star first.
(google translate) it's not a bad story, if you don't think about it too much it's a pleasant read it's a very wish-fulfillment story, the MC is very op, that in itself is not a problem, but it lacks comedy to complement MC op, and the MC is superior to everything and everyone in power and seniority to the point of his family relationships and past making all characters his juniors makes things a little weird, it's like someone reincarnating as Adam in some world and calling everyone children because they are all descendants of him that aside, the powers are interesting, they contain a bit of originality, using references from other stories to create MC powers, like lord of Mysteries, it's cool, but at the same time redundant because he has many and at once, you can't even tell which power is stronger, the first 5 chapters are info dump of powers and the 6th is the transition to the beginning of the story, the writing quality is good, idk about grammar because I use a translator and it kinda messes or corrects everything automatically for now, this is all I can describe as there are only 20 chaps at the time of this review, in conclusion, the story had to be slower, and more detailed as several comedy scenes, conversations, and others were cut, an example is Doudou arriving, there was hardly a single dialogue from him, and he's with shuhang already when senior white awakens, which is MC little brother, I expected the MC to play a trick or something on Doudou, create the illusion of a strong male dog trying to seduce him or something when he approached Shuhang for the first time, sort of foreshadows his unhappy fate. a slower story can also make the romance feel deeper. finally, the story isn't bad, although it's not stellar either, I believe the author should focus on the comedy, the chat, and the interaction (mainly funny ones) between characters, because with an MC being op, it makes the story in need of an intense focus on another entertaining area, anyway, a good book for the first time writing, I wish you the best of luck author
The MC is op and I am loving it but please don't make him a simp for Soft feather. Make him a Sigma MC ,let girls chase him.
it's pretty good. I look forward for the coming chapters. for now it's just a bunch of info dump but hopefully the story will start soon.
This is just great, I would love to read more. Joo can't wait for new chapters. Hope our main character meet the original main character soon. And I would like to see how it will interact in the modern world. Who will be his love interest?
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