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เขียนรีวิวI love the story telling. However characters feel bland and generic, and the "Extra" is being revealed too soon. It honestly doesn't feel like he's an extra if the MC and their party start to realize how good he is. There's also obvious errors, and comprehension mistakes. Double read before publishing. If you want my advice, make this "Extra" feel like a unkown third party in the MC's journey. Keep it up, I can't wait to see what you come up with. Also, try to explore more of the world (cultures, countries, etc...)
VERY VERY PROMISING BUT SLOW UPDATE AND LESS CHAPTERS THEREFORE INCREASE THE AMMOUNT OF CHAPTERS .
I love the story telling. However characters feel bland and generic, and the "Extra" is being revealed too soon. It honestly doesn't feel like he's an extra if the MC and their party start to realize how good he is. There's also obvious errors, and comprehension mistakes. Double read before publishing. If you want my advice, make this "Extra" feel like a unkown third party in the MC's journey. Keep it up, I can't wait to see what you come up with. Also, try to explore more of the world (cultures, countries, etc...)
VERY VERY PROMISING BUT SLOW UPDATE AND LESS CHAPTERS THEREFORE INCREASE THE AMMOUNT OF CHAPTERS .