Primordial Chaos: Evolution Beyond Mortality

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That_Cultivator

Alright, This is another review after 22 chaps. I am going to rate my work 5 stars as I am shameless and i don't want to lose stars😂😂. Now, you may go ahead and read the story but here are some key points in the story. 1. Mc is 16 years old (almost 17) 2. Mc isn't a simp 3. Rias is 20 but her real age according to the laws of universe is different. 4. Rias is at the Chaos Lord peak-rank right now but is very powerful and can even slay Emperor level cultivators. 5. Aiden's speed of cultivation so far after 22 chapters has grown to 20 times more than normal cultivators and will grow until 30 or 40 times... Don't be disappointed, this is just a talent in the world of cultivation, he has many inheritances so it is normal for him to have special privileges and remember that cultivation level doesn't always mean someone is powerful(take an example of Rias, she can easily slay emperor level cultivators so far and face higher levels head on.) 5. (Cuz i don't wanna talk about 6) So, Aiden is not like a kid, or doesn't act like a kid. You're safe from kiddo memes here. 7. Aiden is our main character(donot forget) 9. (you remember that there was no six? well check it again, its bad for health to not remember.) 10. This novel is kinda fast-paced(no grand turtles allowed.) 11. Many peope would complain that mc became a nouveau riche in just a few chapters but no... (take an example of the auction, Spoiler - Rias was short on money and barely managed to buy the item.) 19. (Nothing is wrong so far? Yeah, nothing is wrong, I am the best writer, doesn't forget anything.) 27. (Check a random corner of your house, you will find a mouse, so what you have to do is touch- no, don't touch it or you know - omae wa, mo shindeiru!) 99. I feel like i am dying, writing is not easy, please understand and donate your life savin- oh... 1176. Earth is not flat. -1. I am not very good at english so... don't worry, i will try my best. 222. Please support me! I am here, writing day and night, won't get encouraged if I don't get sufficient support. 999. This is a good story and I promise, it can be bad - no it can't be bad at time, just do not place your guesses in advance and you will enjoy the story. 0. Remember that this is a story based on overpowered mc but still, normal people who doesn't like op mc can read it. 111. Bye guys, thats all for this review, hope you enjoy the story. 7_Error*^$@€÷: I will be taking my leave then, watch me run faster than flash.

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That_Cultivator

THANK YOU FOR READING... please leave a review and a few powerstones if you like it.

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KimBarbie

This is a great book, no wonder an author friend recommended it to me... Nice work, author. Keep writing!

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Shibo_simp

The author is doing just great. I am a fan of this masterpiece here, I would highly recommend to read this one. It has potential, The author gotta keep up with the story devlopement tho. The starting chapters are minda weird as well, the sentences are strange and weird to read. otherwise the story is great, keep it up author san.

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DaoistMK5HEc

This is a good novel, believe me or not. This novel has everything that a cultivation novel requires, a good mc, op talents, and many more, everything in the story is good except for the writing. Aiden along with his master Rias is devloping at a good pace and i like that its fast paced. Also, the world background is well explained and the cultivation levels in the auxiliary chapter are well defined. You should read this book, i would only suggest this.

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Ruby_banks02

Amazing book, I must say. After reading a few chapters, I did not doubt that this book is up for something great. I believe it'll become great. Aiden is a good character, along with his master, Rias. Inwardly, I wish they can be a couple(lol). If you are still having doubts about this book, trust me, you are missing a lot. Forget about the writing quality, with time, it'll improve to a better point. Also, kindly support the author.

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SsDamien

Haven't read yet but since this Mc's name is the same with mine I know it will be a good novel look forward to seeing it grow ,☺️☺️

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Emily_Doll

Great work author, keep it up!! The plot and everything else is okay and nice. Highly recommendable.

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Peterthepan

Great work author. You can do better!!!! If you are hesitating to read this book, pls don't.Try this book out.

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Mia_Silver_4216

Great Book, a nice plot with a good world-building. The author's writing style is okay, and easy to understand.