Fallen Fate Online

LV 3

Ace_of_Blades

not going to say much so I won spoil it for those who read reviews before reading the novel but I like the idea of just a normal person not not rebirth or game coming into the world or some op talent/item or companion it's just a Normal Mc who is rising to the top it's perfect.

LV 5

Eddicted

Author can you please clarify if this is just a game in the story or if it has any relation to the actual world like being able to bring those powers to our world or if game bleeding into the real world e.t.c

LV 14

nvanattia

The story isn't bad, but I just don't see why there is anything about levels or stats. Goes into a game without any prior knowledge or gaming experience and proceeds to continuously kill enemies above his level and of qualities that others who are stronger than him cannot. At that point why have character levels and stats at all? The other concept that gets me is that after his initial encounter in game, it seems his "super power" is that he does not find anything scary anymore. Which Is another drastic departure for a guy who was basically scared of doing anything prior to the first day in game.

LV 13

jayz2484

Disclaimer: I've only read up to the free chapters.What I liked: Good story and flow, it's very easy to get into the groove of reading. And I can tell that Author is trying to flesh out the MC's character story, slowly but surely.What I didn't like: Like others have mentioned, it's a jarring change for the MC to suddenly become a fearless fighter from his initial scaredy-cat persona. I admit I can feel Author trying to remedy this by introducing more details in the latter chapters, but it's still quite confusing, like dealing with someone who has a split personality.Even so, I still do recommend this novel. It has a promising future, and I appreciate Author taking in constructive criticism and bettering his writing. Kudos and I wish you the best, keep it up! 👏

LV 15

MadThelric

An interesting story, although similar to many others. What is fresh is that the MC is a normal person with lots of repressed anger inside, trying to hit it big in a VRMMORPG. It is nice to read how someone that doesn't usually play games reacts to this setting, and how a bit of luck guides him blindly to interesting situations. I'll give it more time, it really seems a fun read 😊