10รีวิว
4.36
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The story is nice but it’s lacking dialogue….Each chapter just feels like it’s a summary
very good setting but feels like ai writing it. same set of words over and over again to describe something or some situation how important or insignificant it may be is becoming quite monotonous. i assume English is your 3rd language as it is mine thus you are using this kind of writing style. I hope you can improve in this endeavour. all the best.
A solid football novel, with good development of the mc and realistic pathways of development within the football industry. I am looking forward to where its future goes.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Hi I'm the author, I just re-released the rewrite. I don't know the best way to do it, so I delete all the previous chapters. It seems a bit buggy in the app, so you need to keep scrolling to the right to find the new chapters.
Looking good so far, he's actually going to school to learn instead of other novels where they just seem to know everything.
i'm the author. hopefully everyone can enjoy my story. feel free to give feedback.
I like where it is going going but I inundated hate ai generated novels it feels weird to read
The story is nice but it’s lacking dialogue….Each chapter just feels like it’s a summary
very good setting but feels like ai writing it. same set of words over and over again to describe something or some situation how important or insignificant it may be is becoming quite monotonous. i assume English is your 3rd language as it is mine thus you are using this kind of writing style. I hope you can improve in this endeavour. all the best.
A solid football novel, with good development of the mc and realistic pathways of development within the football industry. I am looking forward to where its future goes.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Hi I'm the author, I just re-released the rewrite. I don't know the best way to do it, so I delete all the previous chapters. It seems a bit buggy in the app, so you need to keep scrolling to the right to find the new chapters.
Looking good so far, he's actually going to school to learn instead of other novels where they just seem to know everything.
i'm the author. hopefully everyone can enjoy my story. feel free to give feedback.
I like where it is going going but I inundated hate ai generated novels it feels weird to read