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When an Astronaut full of wonder from earth came to the universe where unknown can be seen everywhere until during his journey a train he has seen and a train he shall take.
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Chapter 16: 16 Cold and Barren Lands 11 months ago จำนวน 1
- 1 1 Through the Unknown 1 years ago
- 2 2 Space Train 1 years ago
- 3 3 The Astral Express Crew 1 years ago
- 4 4 System Integration 1 years ago
- 5 5 System Explaination 1 years ago
- 6 6 Meeting the Crew 1 years ago
- 7 7 Knowing the March and Dan Heng 1 years ago
- 8 8 System Gifts 1 years ago
- 9 9 Imaginary? 1 years ago
- 10 10 Practice Makes Perfect 1 years ago
- 11 11 The "Portal Gun" 1 years ago
- 12 12 Herta Space Station 1 years ago
- 13 13 The Antimatter Legion 1 years ago
- 14 14 The Doomsday Beast Approaches 11 months ago
- 15 15 Great Rewards and Spring Cleaning 11 months ago
- 16 16 Cold and Barren Lands 11 months ago
Grammar needs to be worked on and sometimes it feels like you’re speeding through things such as when he first meets the astral express. I’m pretty sure they would have questions about him and the orb he was in among some other things but you pretty much skipped right past any of that. His interactions with them at that moment just felt stale and they should have been more worried about someone who was drifting through space.
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