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Good dialogue interesting premise, certain parts made me laugh so that's definitely a plus! Keep going at it m8... Good Luck... Added to collection!
HAHAHA! LOL! I didn't expect that in the first chapter to be comedy and the MC is so freaking hilarious! xD xD xD My man! Whenever you write a new novel, it's really interesting and I have nothing to say other than you are doing a good job! I want more of these chapters! ^_^
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I'm still in the early chapters, but I thought the story was catchy enough that I needed to write a review for it as soon as possible. Writing Quality is always subjective, so I base my rating on legibility, pacing, and character over tiny grammar issues most people make in their first drafts. This work passes that easily enough. Story development; as I've said, I'm still in the esrly chapters, but what I've seen so far is gripping to the point of a real page turner. Five stars for now. Character design -- in a word, Tufail is insane, drunk, rowdy as F, and generally the type of protagonist that you want to root for. The side characters feel like they need more work compared to him, but that takes time so I'm looking forward to spending time reading about them some more. Update -- easily 5 stars. World -- the setting's typical fantasy flare, but tropes exist for a reason. I'm in it for the unique magical system -- that really isn't a system -- and the similarities I've noticed with a certain pirtae-themed manga I love. It's original enough that I don't feel like I'm reading a fanfic too. all in all, this is a story that's worth a read, and a collection too!
This novel is a thrilling adventure that takes the reader on a journey through a world ruled by war and greed. The author has skillfully crafted a titanic world with vast kingdoms and cities, each enjoying the treasure of life's pleasures. this novel is a must-read for anyone who enjoys thrilling adventures filled with mystery and action. The story is well-written, the characters are well-developed, and the plot is engaging from beginning to end
Not a bad start at all, just from the beginning the novel can attract weeb like us then it has potential to become something big, just don't lose your momentum and keep up the pace. Good luck. 👍👍👍
So far only 2 chapters have been released but the story shows a lot of promise and potential. Read and you won't regret it.
Hurry w more chaps bro, I want to read more! Will cry if you don't update consistently. I mean, it's in the name. Novel man. Obviously, he writes the best novels.
Okay, to be honest... This is good. I mean just the synopsis alone has a pull factor. I've never read a novel with an old MC that I find interesting. This is something different and promising . Where chapter 2 at??? 🤷
I have been told to make a review for this book, so you can totally trust me to be completely honest about this, and I’ve definitely read the only chapter currently released, so basically the mc is a forgotten hero, I’m sure you couldn’t tell from the novels name, the mc has a very fleshed out personality and the side characters feel like real people and aren’t just there for the main plot, so if you like books like that read this or something I don’t know
Fresh story with a refreshing plot, love the world background so much and can't wait to read more, highly recommend guys!
The story is just beginning but I like it so far will be waiting for upcoming chapters. Novelman you always deliver quality stuff looking forward to the memoirs of the hero
knowing the author I know it will be a great book, the concept is great and the writing style is remarkable . can't tell you enough how much i loved this book . more attention to this one please
Story plot is great. I just love it and would totally recommend it. Do give it a try. [img=update][img=update]
Quite interesting! It's just the first chapter but I am deeply intrigued. The world-building has been hinted at quite well and the characterization is great. The writing is fairly good too! Lot of potential, highly recommended
The story starts and we're introduced to what I assume to be the MC. He makes an immediate strong impact on the reader, before the story begins to develop. The setting is established well enough for the short current length, and it makes the reader feel like they know enough about the world at that point. As someone who doesn't really care about vulgarity, the only complaint that I have is that there seems to be too much needless swearing. But what I personally dislike won't be what others do, and it definitely fits the world.
Very funny. I love the pacing and the mc's humour. Looking forward to reading more of this! Barely any grammar mistakes. Good flow. Characters have depth. I must recommend!
New WSA 2023 novel. It's a novel without cultivation realm and magical circles, they are getting old. So I thought to use someyhing different and prefered to take the hint from One Piece instead of making a whole new power prowess. (Powers akin to One Piece.) Devil Fruit = Fate Pome Armament Haki = Armament Will Observation Haki = Observation Will Conqueror Haki = Conqueror Will (MC type.) He loves Drinking, Swearing and Flirting (Like Sanji but more vulgur). Strong from start, will build a mercenary. (Novel type) Comedy, Action, Adventure, Mystery, Missions and Wars. (5 Powerful Forces) Empires □ Bandits □Pirates □ Adventurer Guilds □ Church
Good dialogue interesting premise, certain parts made me laugh so that's definitely a plus! Keep going at it m8... Good Luck... Added to collection!
HAHAHA! LOL! I didn't expect that in the first chapter to be comedy and the MC is so freaking hilarious! xD xD xD My man! Whenever you write a new novel, it's really interesting and I have nothing to say other than you are doing a good job! I want more of these chapters! ^_^
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I'm still in the early chapters, but I thought the story was catchy enough that I needed to write a review for it as soon as possible. Writing Quality is always subjective, so I base my rating on legibility, pacing, and character over tiny grammar issues most people make in their first drafts. This work passes that easily enough. Story development; as I've said, I'm still in the esrly chapters, but what I've seen so far is gripping to the point of a real page turner. Five stars for now. Character design -- in a word, Tufail is insane, drunk, rowdy as F, and generally the type of protagonist that you want to root for. The side characters feel like they need more work compared to him, but that takes time so I'm looking forward to spending time reading about them some more. Update -- easily 5 stars. World -- the setting's typical fantasy flare, but tropes exist for a reason. I'm in it for the unique magical system -- that really isn't a system -- and the similarities I've noticed with a certain pirtae-themed manga I love. It's original enough that I don't feel like I'm reading a fanfic too. all in all, this is a story that's worth a read, and a collection too!
This novel is a thrilling adventure that takes the reader on a journey through a world ruled by war and greed. The author has skillfully crafted a titanic world with vast kingdoms and cities, each enjoying the treasure of life's pleasures. this novel is a must-read for anyone who enjoys thrilling adventures filled with mystery and action. The story is well-written, the characters are well-developed, and the plot is engaging from beginning to end
Not a bad start at all, just from the beginning the novel can attract weeb like us then it has potential to become something big, just don't lose your momentum and keep up the pace. Good luck. 👍👍👍
So far only 2 chapters have been released but the story shows a lot of promise and potential. Read and you won't regret it.
Hurry w more chaps bro, I want to read more! Will cry if you don't update consistently. I mean, it's in the name. Novel man. Obviously, he writes the best novels.
Okay, to be honest... This is good. I mean just the synopsis alone has a pull factor. I've never read a novel with an old MC that I find interesting. This is something different and promising . Where chapter 2 at??? 🤷
I have been told to make a review for this book, so you can totally trust me to be completely honest about this, and I’ve definitely read the only chapter currently released, so basically the mc is a forgotten hero, I’m sure you couldn’t tell from the novels name, the mc has a very fleshed out personality and the side characters feel like real people and aren’t just there for the main plot, so if you like books like that read this or something I don’t know
Fresh story with a refreshing plot, love the world background so much and can't wait to read more, highly recommend guys!
The story is just beginning but I like it so far will be waiting for upcoming chapters. Novelman you always deliver quality stuff looking forward to the memoirs of the hero
knowing the author I know it will be a great book, the concept is great and the writing style is remarkable . can't tell you enough how much i loved this book . more attention to this one please
Story plot is great. I just love it and would totally recommend it. Do give it a try. [img=update][img=update]
Quite interesting! It's just the first chapter but I am deeply intrigued. The world-building has been hinted at quite well and the characterization is great. The writing is fairly good too! Lot of potential, highly recommended
The story starts and we're introduced to what I assume to be the MC. He makes an immediate strong impact on the reader, before the story begins to develop. The setting is established well enough for the short current length, and it makes the reader feel like they know enough about the world at that point. As someone who doesn't really care about vulgarity, the only complaint that I have is that there seems to be too much needless swearing. But what I personally dislike won't be what others do, and it definitely fits the world.
Very funny. I love the pacing and the mc's humour. Looking forward to reading more of this! Barely any grammar mistakes. Good flow. Characters have depth. I must recommend!
New WSA 2023 novel. It's a novel without cultivation realm and magical circles, they are getting old. So I thought to use someyhing different and prefered to take the hint from One Piece instead of making a whole new power prowess. (Powers akin to One Piece.) Devil Fruit = Fate Pome Armament Haki = Armament Will Observation Haki = Observation Will Conqueror Haki = Conqueror Will (MC type.) He loves Drinking, Swearing and Flirting (Like Sanji but more vulgur). Strong from start, will build a mercenary. (Novel type) Comedy, Action, Adventure, Mystery, Missions and Wars. (5 Powerful Forces) Empires □ Bandits □Pirates □ Adventurer Guilds □ Church