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I usually don't like these types of novels but since this is an original, I decided to give it a chance and it was definitely worth the read, wish there was more to read currently.
When i first picked this novel, i just wanted a light read, something to take my mind off some problems, but holy cow, that escalated quickly. I read about 190 chapters and it keep you hooked. At first, all was good, money kept flowing, power ups here and there, and overall, a good novel. But then, all got nasty, zombie apocalypse, people dying, countrys overrun by flesh eating mutants, global panic, all the good stuff, everywhere except the mc base, where everything is still peaceful. This novel lets you see the other side of the coin. Until now, almost every work lets you see the struggle of the ordinary man, who battles hunger, zombies, other humans. But not this novel, this one lets you see the struggle of the government, who tries desperately to save as many people as they could, and it is honestly a bit refreshing. As for the not so good things about this novel is the time frame in which everything happens. it is little over 3 months (100 days), the mc has a massive change in personality, going from a broke construction worker to a tycoon who commands hundreds of thousands of peoples, have massive military prowess, and is somehow able to command them to a point where his power rivals a whole country, all while managing to hide his power from the government in fear of being labeled as an extremist who tries to usurp the leading power. Another weak point about this novel is character design. the mc is so poorly designed that he feels like a puppet who just goes with the flow. There is no emotional development, Arlan Roa is the same dude from start to finish, always good at talking to very important people, even though he was just a construction worker just a week ago. Where the author kinda managed to put some emotions in his mc, is when he meets his parents and started to cry because he managed to give them a better life, but except that, a lifeless puppet. Overall, a good novel, maybe a little bit more romance, but a good novel nonetheless. I hope the author gets it to at least 500 chapters, it has potential for at least that many. Again, a wonderful novel, definitely going to stick to it, and i hope it doesn't get dropped.P.S.Some extra chapters about important side caracters are more than welcomed, i would love for some development in that area.
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I liked that he was getting rich and thought he was going to have a mafia organization and then you dropped something like zombie apocalypse .
the story development is good and the way he developeds in relation to his plot is okay but I would have liked it a little bit on the Haram side since most rich family and wealthy guys are mostly Haram inclined but overall I still enjoy the story but I would like if you could make one that is Haram base 😅😁
The MC is a very big simp and idiot I am not saying this because he is good or anything but because he truly behaves like an idiot and it is not like he is a good person either. Reading this novel filled me with disgust towards the MC could not even finish the free chapters. This is obviously only my opinion because I don't like simps but what I said is true.
hey man I'm a Filipino too, just wanna say congrats on the success of the book and it feels weird to read it, I mean any Filipino here who get me? not in a bad way tho it just feels weird reading a book with the Philippines as a setting. anyways will you include real life people in the book? i mean celebrities and such that would be amazing specially for us who knows them hahaha.
First few chapters I enjoyed it a lot. But it was too fast paced how he got money and properties. It's totally illogical. Even MC couldn't properly explain his earning source. One day he's dirt poor and next he's a billionaire! There was many dubious contents.
Good book! Once it finishes being written I will read through the whole thing since I’m a binge reader and not much of a waiter❤️😅 keep up the good work and you’ll see me unlock every chapter once it’s done!
its pretty good story, but i kinda disappointed with it the moment the plot enter the zombie era, the plot before the zombie was totally hooked me, got bored very quickly with the zombie arc.
i enjoy reading your story, so please dont let others reviews affect you, just write what you want with it. its just like you said first it's wish fullfillment at the start.
For you Kabayan.! I just started reading this because I just saw it the other day. The story is pretty decent so far. Again I am just starting but so far so good. I like the way you used the local currency instead of coming up with random BS money. Keep it up!
So starting off i ignored all the forced plots for u just so that there can be a starting base.....After getting money he spends as if he doesn't care much, made or forget the value of money huh?.......HATE when he helps a stranger girl and brings her to Royal Territory...I get that he might make mistakes at starting but he ignores and parents and brings that girl....bro i m just quitting
How did such a terrible story ever get popular? I regret the time I wasted trying to give it a try.
PRESIDENT MARACAS HAHAHAHA NICE ONE AUTHOR PARANG LEGIT TO NA BOOK AH HINDI FANTASY SINCE LEGIT RIN NA ADIK SI PRESIDENT MARACAS SA TOTOONG BUHAY 🫣
I love to read shenhao novel so i will like it anyhow.... Maybe more face slapping and brain dead plot waiting for me in the MTL. Hope Author keep the chapters flowing
Definitely not. Just reading the first 5 chapters already made me want to put it down. The writing quality is poor and the plot is too forced sometimes. It has all the typical parts of a Chinese novel, always repeating the same thing. He gets rich overnight, surrounds himself only with countless women, gives lessons to arrogant young masters, some rewards are unrealistic and illogical, the worst is how the mc wastes his money and how naive he is, especially in the beginning I understand that it is your culture but, do you never get tired of writing the same thing over and over again? Geez.
I have read about 65 chapters it I like it so far. But author please make this a harem, you already have base for it afterall mc is surrounded by beauties .
interesting story I just wish free coins were easier to get so I can read more.
It's like your Chinese get-rich novels but it is better than those, writing quality is good, and this novel is for those people who want to escape reality, while I want a story with a good plot and stuff. Does not float my boat. But if you want to escape reality with a hint of a slice of life and chill-type novels this is for you. Good job author
The check in for rewards tends to be a rather brain dead genre. at least if you like logic and have a hard time following some degree of societal collapse, massive inflation, and hoping the mc grows out Noveau Riche ways.I've read a few of the genere as i was bored enough. maybe only one or two were better than this one in my opinion. based on the stereotype I've heard, the side characters fit. i hate that some of the antagonists and confrontational language is as basic as it gets.I've read all the free chapters. i might not look for a way to read the premium chapters. but let's see.my boredom still remains.author, i don't know if you've already done this. but if you haven't. a guy whose wealth comes in as fast your mc might manage his wealth by making donations. you maybe have him investing or acquiring everything. that's just my two cents. given that i may or may not return. it might not be that significant to you at all
This is a good novel. It is a Chinese type so naturally there are cliches and such but it is good. The problem I have is the mc. Yes the author said he will make mistakes and such, but while the character is realistic he does stupid things. Once again, the things he does mesh well with his character but personally I hate stupid people/decisions. When he gains the super soldier ability, he starts to think that violence is the answer. Wanting to beat up someone you hardly know after a few words, only restraining himself because of a woman you met once before. Threatening said person when they didn't want to go with you to the Mafia base of the current #1 criminal in the country. Starting a fight against people with guns, who are skilled at using them, with the person from before still in the room, just because he walked up and asked, "Do you know who I am?" or a question along those lines. Before the super soldier ability, he was still reasonable with people. Now it is "My way or get beat up". Once again, it meshes well with how the story is going, I just hate people who act without thinking as well as stupid people.
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This was a decent book until chapter 69. The problem I have and this goes for a lot of these types of novels, is that they knowledge that would theoretically come in the next 100 years such as him getting the flying car technology. Him having an AI bodyguard that is a living person as well not to mention. I personally do not like that these were added as I feel it ruins a flow of a story heavily and begins to ruin any sort of normality in the world. The writing quality was decent, updates seems to be stable, but the story in later chapter does not match the quality in the earlier ones.
The starting chapters were really good and I enjoyed it......Later it is getting worse with nothing new in the story and the story development is too slow
This is an enjoyable read but sadly it’s only free to read the first 30 something chapters. I am pretty picky and harsh with criticism but I genuinely like the novel.
This is a great book, it's one of the best daily reward books you can find.
Author here. This is my first try at writing a novel with a modern setting so please be lenient with me. I hope that you guys will give it a try and feel free to comment down your suggestions. I also don’t have an editor so please let me know if you see any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. Thank you.
I usually don't like these types of novels but since this is an original, I decided to give it a chance and it was definitely worth the read, wish there was more to read currently.
When i first picked this novel, i just wanted a light read, something to take my mind off some problems, but holy cow, that escalated quickly. I read about 190 chapters and it keep you hooked. At first, all was good, money kept flowing, power ups here and there, and overall, a good novel. But then, all got nasty, zombie apocalypse, people dying, countrys overrun by flesh eating mutants, global panic, all the good stuff, everywhere except the mc base, where everything is still peaceful. This novel lets you see the other side of the coin. Until now, almost every work lets you see the struggle of the ordinary man, who battles hunger, zombies, other humans. But not this novel, this one lets you see the struggle of the government, who tries desperately to save as many people as they could, and it is honestly a bit refreshing. As for the not so good things about this novel is the time frame in which everything happens. it is little over 3 months (100 days), the mc has a massive change in personality, going from a broke construction worker to a tycoon who commands hundreds of thousands of peoples, have massive military prowess, and is somehow able to command them to a point where his power rivals a whole country, all while managing to hide his power from the government in fear of being labeled as an extremist who tries to usurp the leading power. Another weak point about this novel is character design. the mc is so poorly designed that he feels like a puppet who just goes with the flow. There is no emotional development, Arlan Roa is the same dude from start to finish, always good at talking to very important people, even though he was just a construction worker just a week ago. Where the author kinda managed to put some emotions in his mc, is when he meets his parents and started to cry because he managed to give them a better life, but except that, a lifeless puppet. Overall, a good novel, maybe a little bit more romance, but a good novel nonetheless. I hope the author gets it to at least 500 chapters, it has potential for at least that many. Again, a wonderful novel, definitely going to stick to it, and i hope it doesn't get dropped.P.S.Some extra chapters about important side caracters are more than welcomed, i would love for some development in that area.
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I liked that he was getting rich and thought he was going to have a mafia organization and then you dropped something like zombie apocalypse .
the story development is good and the way he developeds in relation to his plot is okay but I would have liked it a little bit on the Haram side since most rich family and wealthy guys are mostly Haram inclined but overall I still enjoy the story but I would like if you could make one that is Haram base 😅😁
The MC is a very big simp and idiot I am not saying this because he is good or anything but because he truly behaves like an idiot and it is not like he is a good person either. Reading this novel filled me with disgust towards the MC could not even finish the free chapters. This is obviously only my opinion because I don't like simps but what I said is true.
hey man I'm a Filipino too, just wanna say congrats on the success of the book and it feels weird to read it, I mean any Filipino here who get me? not in a bad way tho it just feels weird reading a book with the Philippines as a setting. anyways will you include real life people in the book? i mean celebrities and such that would be amazing specially for us who knows them hahaha.
First few chapters I enjoyed it a lot. But it was too fast paced how he got money and properties. It's totally illogical. Even MC couldn't properly explain his earning source. One day he's dirt poor and next he's a billionaire! There was many dubious contents.
Good book! Once it finishes being written I will read through the whole thing since I’m a binge reader and not much of a waiter❤️😅 keep up the good work and you’ll see me unlock every chapter once it’s done!
its pretty good story, but i kinda disappointed with it the moment the plot enter the zombie era, the plot before the zombie was totally hooked me, got bored very quickly with the zombie arc.
i enjoy reading your story, so please dont let others reviews affect you, just write what you want with it. its just like you said first it's wish fullfillment at the start.
For you Kabayan.! I just started reading this because I just saw it the other day. The story is pretty decent so far. Again I am just starting but so far so good. I like the way you used the local currency instead of coming up with random BS money. Keep it up!
So starting off i ignored all the forced plots for u just so that there can be a starting base.....After getting money he spends as if he doesn't care much, made or forget the value of money huh?.......HATE when he helps a stranger girl and brings her to Royal Territory...I get that he might make mistakes at starting but he ignores and parents and brings that girl....bro i m just quitting
How did such a terrible story ever get popular? I regret the time I wasted trying to give it a try.
PRESIDENT MARACAS HAHAHAHA NICE ONE AUTHOR PARANG LEGIT TO NA BOOK AH HINDI FANTASY SINCE LEGIT RIN NA ADIK SI PRESIDENT MARACAS SA TOTOONG BUHAY 🫣
I love to read shenhao novel so i will like it anyhow.... Maybe more face slapping and brain dead plot waiting for me in the MTL. Hope Author keep the chapters flowing
Definitely not. Just reading the first 5 chapters already made me want to put it down. The writing quality is poor and the plot is too forced sometimes. It has all the typical parts of a Chinese novel, always repeating the same thing. He gets rich overnight, surrounds himself only with countless women, gives lessons to arrogant young masters, some rewards are unrealistic and illogical, the worst is how the mc wastes his money and how naive he is, especially in the beginning I understand that it is your culture but, do you never get tired of writing the same thing over and over again? Geez.
I have read about 65 chapters it I like it so far. But author please make this a harem, you already have base for it afterall mc is surrounded by beauties .
interesting story I just wish free coins were easier to get so I can read more.
It's like your Chinese get-rich novels but it is better than those, writing quality is good, and this novel is for those people who want to escape reality, while I want a story with a good plot and stuff. Does not float my boat. But if you want to escape reality with a hint of a slice of life and chill-type novels this is for you. Good job author
The check in for rewards tends to be a rather brain dead genre. at least if you like logic and have a hard time following some degree of societal collapse, massive inflation, and hoping the mc grows out Noveau Riche ways.I've read a few of the genere as i was bored enough. maybe only one or two were better than this one in my opinion. based on the stereotype I've heard, the side characters fit. i hate that some of the antagonists and confrontational language is as basic as it gets.I've read all the free chapters. i might not look for a way to read the premium chapters. but let's see.my boredom still remains.author, i don't know if you've already done this. but if you haven't. a guy whose wealth comes in as fast your mc might manage his wealth by making donations. you maybe have him investing or acquiring everything. that's just my two cents. given that i may or may not return. it might not be that significant to you at all
This is a good novel. It is a Chinese type so naturally there are cliches and such but it is good. The problem I have is the mc. Yes the author said he will make mistakes and such, but while the character is realistic he does stupid things. Once again, the things he does mesh well with his character but personally I hate stupid people/decisions. When he gains the super soldier ability, he starts to think that violence is the answer. Wanting to beat up someone you hardly know after a few words, only restraining himself because of a woman you met once before. Threatening said person when they didn't want to go with you to the Mafia base of the current #1 criminal in the country. Starting a fight against people with guns, who are skilled at using them, with the person from before still in the room, just because he walked up and asked, "Do you know who I am?" or a question along those lines. Before the super soldier ability, he was still reasonable with people. Now it is "My way or get beat up". Once again, it meshes well with how the story is going, I just hate people who act without thinking as well as stupid people.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This was a decent book until chapter 69. The problem I have and this goes for a lot of these types of novels, is that they knowledge that would theoretically come in the next 100 years such as him getting the flying car technology. Him having an AI bodyguard that is a living person as well not to mention. I personally do not like that these were added as I feel it ruins a flow of a story heavily and begins to ruin any sort of normality in the world. The writing quality was decent, updates seems to be stable, but the story in later chapter does not match the quality in the earlier ones.
The starting chapters were really good and I enjoyed it......Later it is getting worse with nothing new in the story and the story development is too slow
This is an enjoyable read but sadly it’s only free to read the first 30 something chapters. I am pretty picky and harsh with criticism but I genuinely like the novel.
This is a great book, it's one of the best daily reward books you can find.
Author here. This is my first try at writing a novel with a modern setting so please be lenient with me. I hope that you guys will give it a try and feel free to comment down your suggestions. I also don’t have an editor so please let me know if you see any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. Thank you.