8รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
It is a nice, soft novel. I have not gotten to the Romance part yet, but by the atmosphere presented you could tell without looking at the tags. There may be some gramatical errors here and there, but its not very noticeable. The updates come in regularly as well. ^^
Love the first chapter already, character personalization is great, the story already has my full attention, imma dive in for more!
Gotta love a good homicidal love triangle. I think the writing quality is good, just has the odd sentence or two. I would love to learn a bit more about the world the novel is set up in, even if it focuses on a royal handmaiden and her suitors. The introduction of the witch also brings magic into the mix, and I look forward to how that affects the story. I can see great potential, and I hope that the author can take this story to the next level.
Alright here we go: 1) The author's storytelling reads quite smoothly, the scene transitioning is done well 2)Although the grammar might need a little work, it doesnt disrupt the narrative of the story so its readable with above average quality 3)Glimpses of each character's personality is shown quite prominently, so characters are not one dimensional 4)The conflicts and relationships between certain characters makes it thrilling,as well as the mysteries created subtly along the way are good enough to keep the reader engaged. this work definitely has a lot of potential, best of luck
I like first person writing, but not in present tense. There are a lot of grammatical issues like putting past a nd present tense words in the same sentence and merging sentences together. Otherwise, it is an enjoyable read with an interesting plot.
A gifted writer he is, although I am not a fan of first person writing, I couldn't see this and just look away, the way the writer takes his time to explain the details really shows the amount of time and effort that was put into the work. Good job and keep it up, looking forward to more chapters.
Although there are a few grammatical errors, it can be overlooked as it doesn’t affect the story telling in the least. The caharacters are decently fleshed out, imo. Definitely worth the read! Keep up the good work, author!
It is a nice, soft novel. I have not gotten to the Romance part yet, but by the atmosphere presented you could tell without looking at the tags. There may be some gramatical errors here and there, but its not very noticeable. The updates come in regularly as well. ^^
Love the first chapter already, character personalization is great, the story already has my full attention, imma dive in for more!
Gotta love a good homicidal love triangle. I think the writing quality is good, just has the odd sentence or two. I would love to learn a bit more about the world the novel is set up in, even if it focuses on a royal handmaiden and her suitors. The introduction of the witch also brings magic into the mix, and I look forward to how that affects the story. I can see great potential, and I hope that the author can take this story to the next level.
Alright here we go: 1) The author's storytelling reads quite smoothly, the scene transitioning is done well 2)Although the grammar might need a little work, it doesnt disrupt the narrative of the story so its readable with above average quality 3)Glimpses of each character's personality is shown quite prominently, so characters are not one dimensional 4)The conflicts and relationships between certain characters makes it thrilling,as well as the mysteries created subtly along the way are good enough to keep the reader engaged. this work definitely has a lot of potential, best of luck
I like first person writing, but not in present tense. There are a lot of grammatical issues like putting past a nd present tense words in the same sentence and merging sentences together. Otherwise, it is an enjoyable read with an interesting plot.
A gifted writer he is, although I am not a fan of first person writing, I couldn't see this and just look away, the way the writer takes his time to explain the details really shows the amount of time and effort that was put into the work. Good job and keep it up, looking forward to more chapters.
Although there are a few grammatical errors, it can be overlooked as it doesn’t affect the story telling in the least. The caharacters are decently fleshed out, imo. Definitely worth the read! Keep up the good work, author!