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you really know how to make an interesting idea just suck with awful writing and god awful harems. i would say it’s almost impressive if it wasn’t so sad
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very captivating start and 📚 of the cover is really nice ☺️. I love your writing quality 🤩💖 I added my library . waiting for next chapter 💜
Great story! I am familiar with Indian myths, so I can properly understand the plot. Moreover, it's pretty unusual and different, which I am a fan of.
Nice story. Karna who is one of my favourite characters from the epic Mahabharata and the Nasuverse. Please don't make him stupid or manipulated by anyone as he is in DXD. Also no nerfing of the MC.
[img=recommend]5-star cause it's a Karna fanfic. He's one of my favourite character from the Mahabharata. Never stop posting Author, or I will send Truck-kun to you[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
new completely different plot very interesting i like very much please don't stop
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Shameless review by author. So this is a story of Karna from Fate/Grand Order. Base Worlds are mix of DxD and FGO. You can ask me anything you want (ofc no spoilers).
you really know how to make an interesting idea just suck with awful writing and god awful harems. i would say it’s almost impressive if it wasn’t so sad
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very captivating start and 📚 of the cover is really nice ☺️. I love your writing quality 🤩💖 I added my library . waiting for next chapter 💜
Great story! I am familiar with Indian myths, so I can properly understand the plot. Moreover, it's pretty unusual and different, which I am a fan of.
Nice story. Karna who is one of my favourite characters from the epic Mahabharata and the Nasuverse. Please don't make him stupid or manipulated by anyone as he is in DXD. Also no nerfing of the MC.
[img=recommend]5-star cause it's a Karna fanfic. He's one of my favourite character from the Mahabharata. Never stop posting Author, or I will send Truck-kun to you[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
new completely different plot very interesting i like very much please don't stop
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Shameless review by author. So this is a story of Karna from Fate/Grand Order. Base Worlds are mix of DxD and FGO. You can ask me anything you want (ofc no spoilers).