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Naruto: Beautiful Kunoichi Hears My Inner Voice where can i get this novel
Bune amına koduğum yarrak gibi hikaye yazmışsın karakter korkak ve zayıf senin ananı sikeyim ... .🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
Me reí en cada capitulo jaja muy buena lo único que podría encontrar desagradable es que es un fanfic chino con todo eso de joven maestro y cualquiera frase común de esos fanfic. Alguien conoce algún fanfic en el que algún MC arruine siempre las oportunidades de los protagonistas? si es de issei mil veces mejor
Maybe it gets better but I could only get through the first chapter and that was rough. Eh it was bad like really bad. Rating may change in the future but if it stays like this then no chance. Beta MC
Eu não tenho um preconceito com como novelas ou escritores chineses escrevem, até penso que muitas novelas e fanfics são incríveis como eles desenvolvem os personagens e tudo mais. Mas e horrível como tem autores que sempre repetem a mesma história com o mesmo modelo e alguma só copiam e mudam o nome dos personagens. O mais chato de lidar e quando leio uma fanfic em um ambiente com culturas diferentes nos animes e vejo os personagens todos agindo como se fossem chinês. Eu não entendo, existe tantos jeito de mostrar a cultura do seu país, por que a maioria dos autores chineses faz de uma maneira tão degradante e resistente. Nada contra sua obra, só esperava algo de DxD e vejo mais uma da vigésima novela chinesa do retorno do Dragão, só mudou os nomes de personagens chinês para algo familiarizado de personagens ambientado no Japão. Claro que meu pensamento pode ser superficial, já que não me aprofundei na leitura, pode até a ver reviravoltas ou um enredo interessante. Mas o problema é que muitas vezes me decepciono com o que eles transfomaram de algo bom ou incrível para algo super enjoativo ou resistente e até fico super chateado por terem ideas tão incríveis e mesmo assim destruir ou interromper a escrita. E fato é que mesmo eu perca muitas joias de ler, não terei coragem de perder tempo de ler o mesmo estilo de escrita ou modelo para não me decepcionar. O ruim para os bom escritores por ler boas obras do mesmo modelos é que ficarei mais crítico e com mais expectativas.
Love the story should update more. As well as your other stories they are amazing
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First fanfic I've seen with this theme "inner voice", despite being a theme more used in Chinese stories, I found it interesting. I recommend read
Muy buenas tardes o días dependiendo de la hora que vea este mensaje Le envío mi cordiales saludos, al autor por tan buena obra qué creo, espero ansiosamente la siguiente actualización del libro Mis felicitaciones
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Estou gostando muito dessa novel é divertida demais o vilão muito carismático o sistema de energia esta começando a aprecer bem legal podeia ficar melhor se o teto de poder fosse maior mesmo assim está bom então pra mim é top 10
Because of the first chapter I didn't expect much from this ff, but I kept reading and it was the best decision, I'm already used to reading Chinese novels so they don't affect me, it has a lot of humor and a good plot
Buenísima de las mejores que he leído por lejos 👍🏻😌......... ..................................... ..............................,............. PD Akeno y Grayfia God
So a human non multi race highschool dxd with cultivation. It's a nice binge read story ............................................................
10/10 con una calidad de escritura y trama excelente y un desarrollo de personaje aún más. Lo único que si me sorprendió fue el cambio de trama a fantasiosa con ángeles demonios y demás a una más normal (aunque sigue habiendo temas fantasiosos) pero fuera de eso esta interesante ya que es como si fuera una novela cualquiera pero con personajes que todos conocemos y de otros animes o mangas
If you want to laugh, feel free to read this story, even if you are not familiar with the demon of high school, it's okay since there are only one names of characters from there.
This has the greatest potential I have seen in such a long time in such a novel. well balanced (Idk about the updating stability as I just started reading). The character is true to what was written and doesn't alternate as fast as others do. The world is the casual Chinese cultivation urban what not with common sense that seems to be in favour of the villain. The female harem members although little and not having much time to explain different aspects to them have slow but sure development to them. (I have a liking to yandere don't question). There are rare occasional writing mistakes (like gender, missing words causing the sentence to turn out like a cheap Chinese translation novel) but then again these mistakes are rare and doesn't affect the overall story. An I hope this is frequent and doesn't get cancelled .
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Haven’t read it yet, but I read the description and author, Grayfia doesn’t have a Fiancé, she is married to Rias’ brother and they have a kid together. I don’t remember Grayfia and Issei having any relationship at all lol 5 stars cuz I don’t like Issei tho and Grayfia is hot asf
The story is good even though it has a little two lines and two Chinese things, but it's good anyway luck that it's not much, I really like the personality of the protagonist and his interactions with other people Heroines, the heroines and their personalities are amazing I like their development
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It's good the villain are nice and like the author said at the beginning it's inspired by lots of tropes from Chinese novels.But author i have just one question will the mc ever realise that the heroines can hear his inner voice please respond to this.
im not joking so far this one the best villain and heroine novel i have read so far there no complaint i have about this novel. Constant twist and turns, a spin on characters we know but in a new setting keep it up.
Really good.... and very funny too... grammar is good but author commits mistakes using wrong past and future tences and choicing the wrong pronouns such as sometimes mistaking using he and she... one time he wrote grandson instead of granddaughter lol... now... i beliebe there were a lot of missing opportunities to have mc say some good and funny, shocking things to the mental link of the girls. There were also some missing stuff to do that would have been awesome... i really liked the development of Rias as she is one of my favorites. I believe that after her birthday party she has suffered enough guilt
How to create a good novel villain? It's hard and easy. You have to balance the good and evil in the characters you write. You also can't make the villain too stupid, but not too smart either. Because a villain who is too perfect will bore the reader quickly. Sometimes something annoying can make the reader more motivated to read your work. That's something I've learned after reading many villain novels. But of course everyone's opinion is different, some of them may like cold-blooded and intelligent villains like I don't know who it is. Sorry but the villain in this book are comedic and not too serious. And before reading this book, you should put aside your bias against Chinese novels. Although it's not a Chinese novel, the plot I used will probably make you feel like it's a Chinese novel. My writing style is also like a Chinese author, because I can't help but be influenced after reading many Chinese novels. I like it, I enjoy writing novels in this style. Besides entertaining me, it also keeps me from getting bored quickly. Please bear with me while reading this book, because I'm also trying not to irritate you too much, especially people who often meow because the plot is familiar with Chinese novels or something like that. This is my work, not anyone else's. The plot may be familiar, but the monologue and dialog are obviously different because they're coming straight out of my brain. Only a few quotes I often use from Chinese novels, such as "dog licker", "green", "melon eater" and others to describe the situation. Of course it's not much and won't make your eyes hurt. In the first 2 chapters you may not like the MC, but if you read up to 10 chapters more. You will see that the MC has gotten better, I deliberately made the MC's character development fast. The MC has a good life and will bully his enemies with various devious plans. So don't worry and just read.
Naruto: Beautiful Kunoichi Hears My Inner Voice where can i get this novel
Bune amına koduğum yarrak gibi hikaye yazmışsın karakter korkak ve zayıf senin ananı sikeyim ... .🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
Me reí en cada capitulo jaja muy buena lo único que podría encontrar desagradable es que es un fanfic chino con todo eso de joven maestro y cualquiera frase común de esos fanfic. Alguien conoce algún fanfic en el que algún MC arruine siempre las oportunidades de los protagonistas? si es de issei mil veces mejor
Maybe it gets better but I could only get through the first chapter and that was rough. Eh it was bad like really bad. Rating may change in the future but if it stays like this then no chance. Beta MC
Eu não tenho um preconceito com como novelas ou escritores chineses escrevem, até penso que muitas novelas e fanfics são incríveis como eles desenvolvem os personagens e tudo mais. Mas e horrível como tem autores que sempre repetem a mesma história com o mesmo modelo e alguma só copiam e mudam o nome dos personagens. O mais chato de lidar e quando leio uma fanfic em um ambiente com culturas diferentes nos animes e vejo os personagens todos agindo como se fossem chinês. Eu não entendo, existe tantos jeito de mostrar a cultura do seu país, por que a maioria dos autores chineses faz de uma maneira tão degradante e resistente. Nada contra sua obra, só esperava algo de DxD e vejo mais uma da vigésima novela chinesa do retorno do Dragão, só mudou os nomes de personagens chinês para algo familiarizado de personagens ambientado no Japão. Claro que meu pensamento pode ser superficial, já que não me aprofundei na leitura, pode até a ver reviravoltas ou um enredo interessante. Mas o problema é que muitas vezes me decepciono com o que eles transfomaram de algo bom ou incrível para algo super enjoativo ou resistente e até fico super chateado por terem ideas tão incríveis e mesmo assim destruir ou interromper a escrita. E fato é que mesmo eu perca muitas joias de ler, não terei coragem de perder tempo de ler o mesmo estilo de escrita ou modelo para não me decepcionar. O ruim para os bom escritores por ler boas obras do mesmo modelos é que ficarei mais crítico e com mais expectativas.
Love the story should update more. As well as your other stories they are amazing
Meh. Te story is copy of copy of copy of copy of copy mtl. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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First fanfic I've seen with this theme "inner voice", despite being a theme more used in Chinese stories, I found it interesting. I recommend read
Muy buenas tardes o días dependiendo de la hora que vea este mensaje Le envío mi cordiales saludos, al autor por tan buena obra qué creo, espero ansiosamente la siguiente actualización del libro Mis felicitaciones
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Estou gostando muito dessa novel é divertida demais o vilão muito carismático o sistema de energia esta começando a aprecer bem legal podeia ficar melhor se o teto de poder fosse maior mesmo assim está bom então pra mim é top 10
Because of the first chapter I didn't expect much from this ff, but I kept reading and it was the best decision, I'm already used to reading Chinese novels so they don't affect me, it has a lot of humor and a good plot
Buenísima de las mejores que he leído por lejos 👍🏻😌......... ..................................... ..............................,............. PD Akeno y Grayfia God
So a human non multi race highschool dxd with cultivation. It's a nice binge read story ............................................................
10/10 con una calidad de escritura y trama excelente y un desarrollo de personaje aún más. Lo único que si me sorprendió fue el cambio de trama a fantasiosa con ángeles demonios y demás a una más normal (aunque sigue habiendo temas fantasiosos) pero fuera de eso esta interesante ya que es como si fuera una novela cualquiera pero con personajes que todos conocemos y de otros animes o mangas
If you want to laugh, feel free to read this story, even if you are not familiar with the demon of high school, it's okay since there are only one names of characters from there.
This has the greatest potential I have seen in such a long time in such a novel. well balanced (Idk about the updating stability as I just started reading). The character is true to what was written and doesn't alternate as fast as others do. The world is the casual Chinese cultivation urban what not with common sense that seems to be in favour of the villain. The female harem members although little and not having much time to explain different aspects to them have slow but sure development to them. (I have a liking to yandere don't question). There are rare occasional writing mistakes (like gender, missing words causing the sentence to turn out like a cheap Chinese translation novel) but then again these mistakes are rare and doesn't affect the overall story. An I hope this is frequent and doesn't get cancelled .
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Haven’t read it yet, but I read the description and author, Grayfia doesn’t have a Fiancé, she is married to Rias’ brother and they have a kid together. I don’t remember Grayfia and Issei having any relationship at all lol 5 stars cuz I don’t like Issei tho and Grayfia is hot asf
The story is good even though it has a little two lines and two Chinese things, but it's good anyway luck that it's not much, I really like the personality of the protagonist and his interactions with other people Heroines, the heroines and their personalities are amazing I like their development
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It's good the villain are nice and like the author said at the beginning it's inspired by lots of tropes from Chinese novels.But author i have just one question will the mc ever realise that the heroines can hear his inner voice please respond to this.
im not joking so far this one the best villain and heroine novel i have read so far there no complaint i have about this novel. Constant twist and turns, a spin on characters we know but in a new setting keep it up.
Really good.... and very funny too... grammar is good but author commits mistakes using wrong past and future tences and choicing the wrong pronouns such as sometimes mistaking using he and she... one time he wrote grandson instead of granddaughter lol... now... i beliebe there were a lot of missing opportunities to have mc say some good and funny, shocking things to the mental link of the girls. There were also some missing stuff to do that would have been awesome... i really liked the development of Rias as she is one of my favorites. I believe that after her birthday party she has suffered enough guilt
How to create a good novel villain? It's hard and easy. You have to balance the good and evil in the characters you write. You also can't make the villain too stupid, but not too smart either. Because a villain who is too perfect will bore the reader quickly. Sometimes something annoying can make the reader more motivated to read your work. That's something I've learned after reading many villain novels. But of course everyone's opinion is different, some of them may like cold-blooded and intelligent villains like I don't know who it is. Sorry but the villain in this book are comedic and not too serious. And before reading this book, you should put aside your bias against Chinese novels. Although it's not a Chinese novel, the plot I used will probably make you feel like it's a Chinese novel. My writing style is also like a Chinese author, because I can't help but be influenced after reading many Chinese novels. I like it, I enjoy writing novels in this style. Besides entertaining me, it also keeps me from getting bored quickly. Please bear with me while reading this book, because I'm also trying not to irritate you too much, especially people who often meow because the plot is familiar with Chinese novels or something like that. This is my work, not anyone else's. The plot may be familiar, but the monologue and dialog are obviously different because they're coming straight out of my brain. Only a few quotes I often use from Chinese novels, such as "dog licker", "green", "melon eater" and others to describe the situation. Of course it's not much and won't make your eyes hurt. In the first 2 chapters you may not like the MC, but if you read up to 10 chapters more. You will see that the MC has gotten better, I deliberately made the MC's character development fast. The MC has a good life and will bully his enemies with various devious plans. So don't worry and just read.