5รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
I am gonna be very honest even with only 2 chapters Out i already really Like this Story and i am definitivly looking Forward to Theo exercising and using water to heal and then rinse and repeat especially with all the Basic weapon exercises.
Mcs kinda dumb if he read pjo but its pretty good besides that its nice i would give it around 4.3 as its not the best but its better than usual
Look, I don't usually read percy jacson ffs. but that looks nice and looks like you're going to do well. It wasn't very nice of you to tell us about your future plan and give us spoilers in the first chapter, also the name of the book (I'm talking about the pjo part ( and the cover could be better. I frankly liked the writing style. the conversations and the story are very fluent. I hope you continue to write. good luck. - part 2 -
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Another interesting story from RubberPeen. Hopefully, we'll get some more chapters when they return from wherever they've gone.
I am gonna be very honest even with only 2 chapters Out i already really Like this Story and i am definitivly looking Forward to Theo exercising and using water to heal and then rinse and repeat especially with all the Basic weapon exercises.
Mcs kinda dumb if he read pjo but its pretty good besides that its nice i would give it around 4.3 as its not the best but its better than usual
Look, I don't usually read percy jacson ffs. but that looks nice and looks like you're going to do well. It wasn't very nice of you to tell us about your future plan and give us spoilers in the first chapter, also the name of the book (I'm talking about the pjo part ( and the cover could be better. I frankly liked the writing style. the conversations and the story are very fluent. I hope you continue to write. good luck. - part 2 -
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Another interesting story from RubberPeen. Hopefully, we'll get some more chapters when they return from wherever they've gone.