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- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Начало хорошее, жду продолжения.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Please dont drop this! it's really fun and your system is really good! i want to read more! don't drop! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3!!! please. dont drop. i need my daily dose of not-evil-leylin.
Its a really good start. -------------------------- -----------------:)--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Just giving 5 ⭐ because it's fanfic of warlock of magus world ...it's rare to find them..
I hope MC is evil and ruthless as the original Leylin and also hope there is no poison such as romance or harem of any kind.
Great start.. Really liking the first three chapters. Can become a very good piece of work. Please continue....................................
I'm feelin real good with this ff of yours, Easy to read if you know what I mean😉. Know that this fic has great potential and I hope you write the story in a unique path of your own instead of a slightly different story that's too similar with the original novel. Anyways, I'll write another review when this fic reaches 30 chaps or so
is there harem?...........................................................................................................................................
Начало хорошее, жду продолжения.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Please dont drop this! it's really fun and your system is really good! i want to read more! don't drop! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3!!! please. dont drop. i need my daily dose of not-evil-leylin.
Its a really good start. -------------------------- -----------------:)--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Just giving 5 ⭐ because it's fanfic of warlock of magus world ...it's rare to find them..
I hope MC is evil and ruthless as the original Leylin and also hope there is no poison such as romance or harem of any kind.
Great start.. Really liking the first three chapters. Can become a very good piece of work. Please continue....................................
I'm feelin real good with this ff of yours, Easy to read if you know what I mean😉. Know that this fic has great potential and I hope you write the story in a unique path of your own instead of a slightly different story that's too similar with the original novel. Anyways, I'll write another review when this fic reaches 30 chaps or so
is there harem?...........................................................................................................................................